Name: Keira Adurna {Adurna is water in the ancient language}:

Age: 25:

Birthday: 6th of January:

Gender: Female:

Job/Specialty: She trains younger elves how to do water magic "tricks"/She's always been good at water magic, creating a diamond with water when she was 12:

Race: elven:

Hair: Black:

Eyes: Blue:

Body: Not very muscular, strong leg muscles, slightly weak in the arms and a petite figure:

Home Village: Ellesmera:

Arethin or Riders : ??:

Parents: The minute she met them there house burned down. Read character history for detail.:

Siblings: None that she knows off:

Character Personality: She is usually happy and optimistic yet she is constantly depressed by the death of her parents and for the longing of siblings, she doesn't usually show thsi feeling outwardly.:


Character History: Her earliest memories were being rocked by a cooling smooth song by a voice she heard in her parents. However, her childhood was spent with a kind family who however didn't really care about Keira's questions of her past who she learned at 7 years old were not her real family. They did however tell her, that she was found in a basket near a stream. It was said that she had a strange blue gas around her arms and legs, they say that thiss is the reason for her water ablilities. The family that took care of her were known as the brisingr family which is ironic since at a young age she showed remarkable skills as a water magician, and as I said before made her first water diamond at the age of 12. At the age of 18, she travelled to a small city whose name escapes her and there was a house on fire, Keira rushed to the fire and tried to take out the fire but she was stopped by a familiar voice from her memories, it was her parents! They told her softly her real name and died in the flames. Keira fainted and her name escaped her, she however hopes to uncover her real name and the reason the house burned in the first place. At the age of 20, she started a small school that helped to teach younger students how to be a water magician if they are interested. At the age of 24, she learned some rumors about her family and that she might have unknown siblings in the varden or dwarf kingdom. She is currently staying with a friend to get ready for her trip to the Varden.:


Character's good personality traits: Keira was blessed with a patience that her students and orphan family love.:

Character's bad personality traits: She is a bit too proud of her water skills and will take any oppurtunity to boast about them.:

Weapons: Her weapons are basicalliy a short blue sword and a slender blue bow and arrow.:
Note: Her bow and arrows were found in the basket she was in and her sword were given to her by a friend on the day she opened her school.

Skills/Talents/Powers:Water Magic/Making water chrystals/She basically uses water around her to attack during practices, if she doesn't have a supply of water close to her, she just attacks with her weapons.:

Likes: Her likes are easily, playing with water, eating and showing her powers off.:

Dislikes: She doesn't have many dislikes but she hates it when people scorn her skills. :

Animal Companions: When she was 13 she found a rare blue coloured dove but she let it go at the age of 15.:

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc): Her clothes are easily distinguished as she always wear a type of blue flower shirt, a blue pair of pants or on some occasions a blue and red skirt, she is always wearing a pair of blye boots. Around her neck she wears a blue water amulet also given as a gift the day she opened her school. If she is in desperate need she can use the wter power in her amulet. She also has a belt that has a holder for her sword.:


Dreams for the Future: Her dreams are to find more about her parents, learn her real name(despite the risks of knowing your real name), learn why her parents house burned and to find the rest of her family.:

Reason for Dreams: Most of her dreams are about her family and the reason for this is because she doesn't want to feel alone for the rest of her life. Let's hope she suceeds.:

Important things character has forgotten: The character has forgotten what her real name was when her parents told her. Note: She asked the elves to tell her but they told her that it was uo to her to figure it out herself after her parents had already told her.

Nice character. First thing though.. What do you mean by "Arethin or Riders : ??:" That's not in our requirements. Also, you're going to need quite a bit more personality, and you'll need to correct a few minor grammar mistakes in your history. In "Siblings: None that she knows off," off needs to be "of." Anyway, remember to put a comma between multiple adjectives. "However, her childhood was spent with a kind family who however didn't..." is a run-on at the end and could be better too, like "However, her childhood was spent with a kind family which she learned at 7 wasn't her real family. but hey never cared about Kiera's questions about her past." The rest of the thing I noticed were just minor things, like "travelled" needing to be "traveled," or "thiss" needing to be "this." If you can, I'd suggest copying+pasting this into Word or something, running a spellcheck, and then posting it again. Under weapons, you should tell us what the weapons look like, what they can do, and other things of interest. Finally, elaborate a bit more on your physical description. Things like "blue flower shirt" could mean anything knowing the elves. Is it a blue shirt with a flower pattern, a shirt made of woven blue flowers, or what. Same thing with water pendant. Overall, great character. Hope to see you RPing soon!