Name: Blake.

Age: 17.

Gender: Male.

Job/Specialty: Traveling...

Race: Elf/Human .

Hair: Forward, Straight, Almost neat but no cigar, Black/Dark Brown.

Eyes: Brown and narrow.

Body: Medium sized, Fast but not what you call an super athalete . also he's strong and can lift stuff but he cant lift like 400 pound stuff without magic. also 6'0". other then that his body is travel worn but dosent have any scars except a mark from a drunk man its located on his cheek.

Home Village: Ceris .

Parents: Do not know them.

Siblings: None.

Character Personality: Calm, Funny, Sarcastic, but can be wise and smart, But he has a bad temper and he can loose it out in battle but sometimes that isin't enough, And when he does lose it he loses all control over magic.

Character History: He never knew his mom or dad. but he can use magic but coulden't control it until he was 14. Other then that he was raised in the empire by slavers he was treated cruely by them so he hates slavers. Also he wants to find out who his parents were and why the empire hunted them, Until now hes done nothing but wander by himself.

Character's good personality traits: Healer, Never realy the leader of the band unless he has to be otherwise hes the joke cracker but usaully calm nad tenative. the only good side to his temper is since he loses control of his magic it could cause him to increse his magic skills and learn more Aienchent words.

Character's bad personality traits: Sometimes has a bad temper, Hides it well, but when he he loses it it causes him to lose control of magic also sometimes though he is rushing when hes in a hurry and well if he gets angry enough he will go after the person hes after with a vengence. also when he does lose it he makes diciesions to rationally sometimes he controls that other times it doesn't turn out as well.

Weapons: *Riders sowrd named corev (life), And a dirk ( half dager and half sowrd)

Likes: a funnny, sensible but not stupid person and he likes magic. and good sowrdmanshiop and unselfish people

Dislikes: Empire (he could have a friend be brutal strict but kind and still get along with him/her) but he does not like unfair cheaters in duels like hitting while their down and underhanded blows.

Animal Companions: a dragon.

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): Nothing but a strange pendent in the aienchent launguage that no one can read beacuase it was so worn, Also some enchanted robes that are just as strong as armor.

Dreams for the Future: Get revenge on galbatorix.

Reason for Dreams: Beacuase when he was young galbatorix killed a close friend and was rumored to of killed his parents.

Important things character has forgotten: His parents.

Alignment/side: Good natured so hes always fighting for the good will....and against galbatorix.

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Dragon:
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Dragon Name: Keriaia (KER-ie-uh).

Age: 3 years old .

Gender: Female.

Parents: Oraga green father and Itania amber mother.

History: When Oraga and Itania meet they were wild and then they fell in love and mated they laied 5 eggs 2 they gave to the original riders but in the cart where Keriaia's egg and Ghater's egg Galbatorix killed the riders and all the people working with them he destroyed the cart with the eggs in them without knowing the that the were eggs in there so there sat Keriaia and Ghater in their eggs until Blake came along and found Keriaia.

Personality: Funny, Sarcastic but calm, Wise and smart, And never loses control of her temper unless her rider, mate, or eggs are destroyed. Then whoever did it better watch out.

How they met their rider: She was found when Blake was running away from the empires land he found Keriaia but not Ghater. when she hatched the two of them were bonded forever and she put the Gedway insignia on his right hand.

Colour: Amthyst Violet/purple.

Appearance: About 16'0" and very beautiful with her shimering amthyst eyes and bright purple scales.

Armour (if any): None.

Dreams for future: To kill Galbatorix.

Reasons for dreams: Beacuase her parents were personally killed by Galbatorix.

A bit more on personality and character please.

that good enough??

We need sentances for your application, not random words drawn together. Make them a proper application, also a longer history, what events in his life have led up to this?

How about now?

More personality...and use punctuation and capital letters.

is that ok?

oh yeah and if i didnt get punctuation i dont even know what that is so ill fix that if u give me a discription of what it means

commas, full stops.

putting things through word processors weed out bad grammer and spelling, and things like wierd commas.

how about now?

thanks for telling me what word means Glen

but ive never really used commas so....it might not turn out so good

whatya think svit-kona? Looks okay to me.

yes please let the little insignifigent un-mod dude have something!!!!!!!

Nice complete sentences, and a little short on history but its complete enough. I like it.

yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i feel better that took five days but it was worth it!!!!!!!

what now do i just wait or..what

Ill move it now

THANK YOU!!