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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
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dragon shape shift.
Name: - Hairador
Age:- about 18
Gender: - male
Skills:know the way of the dragons.
Race: - depends on which one he wants to be at the time. sometimes human sometimes dragon.
Hair: - dirty blond
Eyes: - purple, with a star like trace in the back round
Home Village: - a wood.
Parents: - mother, and a father. his father was a Leviathan, some people think it lived in the sea but this one was a dragon.
Siblings: - 800 and counting.
Character Personality: a loving, caring person that values life above almost everything. but when it comes to killing he can do it in a heart beet. he is alway talking no matter who the person is and loves to pick apart what the people say to figure out there personality and then find their true name so he can take control over them. his mind can figure out many things by using logic that any person could do if they put their mind to it. he does not need to read your mind cuz he can see into your sole by the way you act, speak and even dress. he tends to stay alone in the day time but when night comes he will spend all the time he can with the people around him. he trust no one but loves everyone. he can be quick to anger if someone insults him and will act according to how he sees fit. he is his own master and is ruled by no one. if you wish to talk to him then good luck since he does not let people come up to him, he comes up to you. he likes a good spar it someone if good with a sword, but if you lose an arm don't come crying to him about it. he does not use magic and has vowed never to do so cuz he believes it can not be controlled in it self since it is more powerful in it self then the person casting the spell. he loves elves, he really loves them cooking over a fire with a little bit of apple in their flesh. he enjoys walking alone in the woods for it reminds him of home.
Character History: Long ago a fair lady came to a wood with a child for. she walk into the woods for a few miles, stopped, and put the baby down in the roots of a tree and left. soon the dragons living in that wood smelled out the child and took it into their nest, they raised him to be a dragon. training him in the arts of dragon fighting that no man had ever seen, as he became older his skin became ruff and he grew a tail and small stubs on his back. The magic of being around the other dragons was changing him, not to a full dragon....bUT A HALF BREED DRAGON. none of his nest mates could best him in fights he was small, fast, and smart. he could do anything a dragon could do....only more. and since he was half dragon he could change between his half dragon forum and his human.
he became the Gard of the woods, he would keep it safe from anyone or anything that came in. one day a group of men came into the woods and started cutting down the trees that would hid the Dragons so with a swipe of his claw and a hint of his breath he did away with them.
now at the age of about 17 he was almost ready to take his place in the ranks of the dragons. so he went out to a rock formation in the deep of the forest and stayed there for a time. he passed over a bolder and crawled onto the side of it when the whole thing caved in. he found a sword in the rubble and he new what it was so he set of on his wings with the sword, heading for the vardon(sp?)
Weapons: bars a sword made of unbreakable gold, it is about 4 feet long, there is not much elss to say about it now. he will also use his claws which extend about an inch from each of his fingernails. he can breath fire, not much elss to say there, he also fights like a dragon
Likes: - having fun all the time, and flying
Dislikes: - other dragons that are ruled by a rider.
Animal Companions: - a tragin
a Tragin a a mix between a snake and a hawk. so the head and neck of a snake and the the body and most of the wings are hawk. then the tale comes and it's snake again, it has back leg but thats it non in the front (sorry for the misspells im in a rush), long talons on each foot. and the best thing of all is that it spits acid that burns any thing but rust, it can not burn rust. it's big so I can ride it, so I'd say about the size of a adult dragon.
Character's Physical Description: about 5 foot 10, Brod solders. he has one leg with a scar on it from where he gashed it open on a pipe. his purple eyes are one of a kind and no one can guess how he got them. he is a dragon for the most part so you get the picture.
in half dragon forum he has purple scales, 6 inch horns in the back of his head, wings, each as long as his body. a tail that is eight feet in length. claws on his hands and feet.(if you need anything more just ask) and all the other things for a dragon, he walks on two legs
Dreams for the Future: - kill every dragon rider.
Reason for Dreams: - rid the lands of tame dragons
Alignment/side: - depends on how he feels.
Ok, i fixed it.
Last edited by Billy Bannister on April 16th, 2009, 2:02 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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April 13th, 2009, 1:46 pm |
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Aeraldi
RPG Team
Joined: April 17th, 2007, 11:40 am Posts: 4344 Location: Australia, waiting in the sun with my dragon, Aeraldi, for when we are needed
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Shades
Dragon: Aelir
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Re: dragon shape shift.
First off, your history and personality need 15 and 12 lines respectively. Secondly, could you please give more information regarding the Half-Dragon Shape shifting? Does it happen when he wants it to? Does it hurt when it happens? How long does it take?
Third, I would ask you to refrain from using God in your history. I would accept some higher power but the name 'God' has some religious meaning attached to it.
Fourth, please do not try to bring your characters from other worlds into ours. I would accept the fact that your character was half-dragon but I could not accept him as somebody who has come from another universe, so to speak.
Fix those and I'll have another look at it. The Edit button is at the top right of your post.
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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April 13th, 2009, 11:26 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Ardel
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Re: dragon shape shift.
I would like to add a few things to that. First, your charry's father cannot be The leviathan, because that implies it's the leviathan from the Bible and again that has religious context. It could be A leviathan, though, if you wanted to make up that race in Alagaesia.
Also, Hairador wouldn't be half dragon unless one of his parents was a dragon, though he may have the ability to turn into a dragon.
Just thought I'd add that.
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And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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April 14th, 2009, 12:51 am |
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Billy Bannister
New Peasant
Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
Gender: Guy
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Re: dragon shape shift.
dracoaestas wrote: I would like to add a few things to that. First, your charry's father cannot be The leviathan, because that implies it's the leviathan from the Bible and again that has religious context. It could be A leviathan, though, if you wanted to make up that race in Alagaesia.
Also, Hairador wouldn't be half dragon unless one of his parents was a dragon, though he may have the ability to turn into a dragon.
Just thought I'd add that. actualy a leviathan is just a fancy way of saying a dragon. since thats what it is. and to the first poster. i do wish i would not have to change the wording of "God". it will not be imposed into the story at all and will not have anything to do with him while on this site, it is just simply where he came from. i promis i will not impose my fith on anyone who does not want to here it. i will write more to his past and such thow. and while im at it i'll say this, if you ban me from useing the word God and my other parts, why do you not ban magic amd sutch? magic is a religon, and a faith of it's own.
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April 14th, 2009, 12:40 pm |
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Aeraldi
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Joined: April 17th, 2007, 11:40 am Posts: 4344 Location: Australia, waiting in the sun with my dragon, Aeraldi, for when we are needed
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Shades
Dragon: Aelir
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Re: dragon shape shift.
It's not something against religion or faith it's simply to stop disputes within games and on this site in general. Since religion is a delicate subject and those who believe don't like having their faith mocked we have tried to prohibit discussion on the subject as best we can.
As for having God in the history, this is simply so we do not interfere with the underlying fundamentals of the world of Alagaesia. It's just to keep things moving smoothly. I hope you understand.
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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April 15th, 2009, 3:53 am |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
Gender: Guy
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Aeraldi wrote: It's not something against religion or faith it's simply to stop disputes within games and on this site in general. Since religion is a delicate subject and those who believe don't like having their faith mocked we have tried to prohibit discussion on the subject as best we can.
As for having God in the history, this is simply so we do not interfere with the underlying fundamentals of the world of Alagaesia. It's just to keep things moving smoothly. I hope you understand. yea, ok. so you going to take a look at my new story for him or what? i changed it for you.
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April 15th, 2009, 2:04 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Ardel
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Actually, in mythology a leviathan is a giant sea creature, though it is often said that it is a type of dragon. Your personality is a little short, and I'm afraid you cannot have the ability to understand everything and be able to figure out anything, that is simply too powerful and does not exist in the real world.
Also, please explain why he suddenly decided he didn't like dragons or riders, I don't understand that.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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April 15th, 2009, 6:37 pm |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
Gender: Guy
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Re: dragon shape shift.
dracoaestas wrote: Actually, in mythology a leviathan is a giant sea creature, though it is often said that it is a type of dragon. Your personality is a little short, and I'm afraid you cannot have the ability to understand everything and be able to figure out anything, that is simply too powerful and does not exist in the real world.
Also, please explain why he suddenly decided he didn't like dragons or riders, I don't understand that. it's not that he knows everything but he can figure out things, he is baced of the way my mind works. i can see any type of machine and figure out how it works and moves. i can also do the same with people if im around them. all he does is use logic to figure things out, and it's not hard to do. but since this is very hard to understand i will change it to only knowing how people think and how they work. it's not an ability it's how his mind works. but as i said i'll change it. he does not like dragons that have riders. they are not free dragons in his eyes so he frees them by killing them. ehh? OK, i changed it! take a loo kand see if it's any better.
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April 15th, 2009, 7:11 pm |
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Aeraldi
RPG Team
Joined: April 17th, 2007, 11:40 am Posts: 4344 Location: Australia, waiting in the sun with my dragon, Aeraldi, for when we are needed
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Shades
Dragon: Aelir
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Well, you could say he frees the dragon by killing the rider. But anyway, the history is looking good and the personality is well written now (Aside from a few spelling errors). Also, please explain the animal companion. I'll understand if you want to keep him hidden from other characters but for the application it's just for people who are getting some more information.
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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April 15th, 2009, 11:13 pm |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Aeraldi wrote: Well, you could say he frees the dragon by killing the rider. But anyway, the history is looking good and the personality is well written now (Aside from a few spelling errors). Also, please explain the animal companion. I'll understand if you want to keep him hidden from other characters but for the application it's just for people who are getting some more information. ok, a tragin is a thing i mad efor one of my books i wrote. so im going to use it now. a Tragin a a mix between a snake and a hawk. so the head and neack of a snake and the the body and most of the wings are hawk. then the tale comes and it's snake again, it has back leg but thats it non in the frunt(sorry for the misspells im in a rush), long tallons on each foot. and the best thing of all is that it spits acid that burns anthing but rust, it can not burn rust. it's big so I can ride it, so i'd say about the size of a adult dragon. anything elss?
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April 16th, 2009, 1:43 am |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: dragon shape shift.
I'd say this is looking better, Billy. Could you just like run your bio through Word or something, and get rid of some of the grammar/spelling errors? It'll be a lot easier to read then. Thanks!
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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April 16th, 2009, 2:47 am |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
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Re: dragon shape shift.
dracoaestas wrote: I'd say this is looking better, Billy. Could you just like run your bio through Word or something, and get rid of some of the grammar/spelling errors? It'll be a lot easier to read then. Thanks! oh sorry about that my keys on my lap top don't work well and sometimes stick or don't type. i fixed everything my spell checker could see. i hope you like it. BTW thanks for telling me to fix it, the other forum would have just banned me for bad typeing, lol.
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April 16th, 2009, 2:04 pm |
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dracoaestas
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Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Really? lol that's kinda harsh.
Anyway, good job, Billy! I Accept!
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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April 16th, 2009, 6:39 pm |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
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Re: dragon shape shift.
dracoaestas wrote: Really? lol that's kinda harsh.
Anyway, good job, Billy! I Accept! they don't think so, i have been muted so many times for what they call "bad spelling" and all i did was use "i" insted of "I" i thought they were real jerks. thanks for the vote now all i need is two more, right?
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April 16th, 2009, 8:41 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Indeed. Just two more acceptances.
What website was this? Tell me so I can send my dragon after them! Mwahahaha!!!
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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April 17th, 2009, 2:56 am |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
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Re: dragon shape shift.
if you had a dragon then be my guest to go after them, it's http://www.inheritanceforums.com/you and them are head to head in the eragon forum poles, thats why you and them are on the eragon web site. man i don't think other Mods look in this thread much do they? anyway, did you know that this story for my Bio is one of my book storys. so was the first one i put up.
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April 17th, 2009, 2:15 pm |
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dracoaestas
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Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: dragon shape shift.
That's cool. If you ever get it published, you should tell me what it's called and I'll totally buy it.
Oo, I'm gonna go check out this evil site... Mwahahaha!
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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April 17th, 2009, 11:57 pm |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
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Re: dragon shape shift.
dracoaestas wrote: That's cool. If you ever get it published, you should tell me what it's called and I'll totally buy it.
Oo, I'm gonna go check out this evil site... Mwahahaha! lol, i killed the Bio i have now a long time ago, but the first one i put up is a book im about 200 pages into writeing. did you find anything on the evil site, i know their cussing is bad there.
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April 18th, 2009, 2:25 am |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
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Dragon: Ardel
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Nah, nothin' of interest. The rpg place there looks really boring and bleh. I'm so glad I'm on SF! Whoo!
The other mods come on every few days, so this shouldn't be too much longer, Billy.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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April 18th, 2009, 3:02 am |
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Star Gazer
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Joined: July 14th, 2006, 3:30 am Posts: 3465 Location: texas, sitting in the grass gazing at the stars with my dragon
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Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Caoimhe
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Re: dragon shape shift.
I accept
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April 23rd, 2009, 1:01 pm |
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Aeraldi
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Joined: April 17th, 2007, 11:40 am Posts: 4344 Location: Australia, waiting in the sun with my dragon, Aeraldi, for when we are needed
Gender: Guy
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Dragon: Aelir
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Re: dragon shape shift.
Alright, your character looks good now. I'll accept this as well. Enjoy playing.
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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April 24th, 2009, 12:54 am |
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Billy Bannister
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Joined: April 12th, 2009, 7:08 pm Posts: 23
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Re: dragon shape shift.
kk, BTW what do we do on the RPG thingy?
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April 27th, 2009, 1:28 am |
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Aeraldi
RPG Team
Joined: April 17th, 2007, 11:40 am Posts: 4344 Location: Australia, waiting in the sun with my dragon, Aeraldi, for when we are needed
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Shades
Dragon: Aelir
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Re: dragon shape shift.
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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April 27th, 2009, 1:30 am |
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