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Character name: Faho

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Race: Werewolf

Skills: Great claw fighter and is ok with a sword in human form. He was training to be a master swordsman but his master mysteriously disappeared after a large storm and no body was found. He did not complete his training before his master vanished. He can communicate with animals while he is in wolf form but only with his tiger in human form. He can protect his mind from just about anything.

Hair: Black

Eyes: Brown

Home village: The village of Golantrose a small village in a remote corner of the Spine. It was later destroyed after he was kidnapped.

Parents: Unknown he was kidnapped only a few months after he was born.

Siblings: None

Character Personality: He is usually nice but can loose control at any moment and is brash to people he first meets. He is a good loyal friend once you get to no him and is a bit hot tempered. He helps people in need but is known to ignore people if he doesn’t no or doesn't like them. His brashness as earned him many enemies and he was nearly killed by someone because he hated him so much. But if someone hurts or harms anyone who is his friend he defends his friends as much as he can. He can be nice when he wants to and is very competitive during tournaments or arena battles. He has a small group of tigers that he lives with and he takes interest in most creatures. He likes to explore and investigate every new place he goes to. He gets easily annoyed with people and fights most people who insult him or his friends.

Character History: Born in the village of Golantrose which was a small werewolf village in the spine he has only saw it once and that was before in the months he was kidnapped. He was kidnapped by people looking for slaves and sold to a small town to the south. The first tine he ever transformed he was abandoned in a forest where a sword master found him and raised him. He was a human and he taught Faho how to shield his mind and to communicate with other creatures minds. He was taught many things even how to transform at will. He was also trained to control his wolf form. He often wondered outside of his trainer’s village to wonder off with the local wolf pack. Three years after he first found them they were killed by humans. He personally killed three of the humans and never told his trainer. He could fight in one form and turn to the next but when he did he was vulnerable for a few seconds. He soon learned the arts of the sword but he prefers to fight with his teeth and claws. And at the age of fifteen his master vanished. He wondered into a sea side town and on the night of the full moon he transformed. He was attacked and enslaved; when he was sold the person beat him and gave him hard labor until he escaped. Tired and hungry he sent out to look for him when he stumbled into a tiger’s lair. Hungry and paining for food he enters it. Fortunately for him they were already injured. He killed two of them but raised the baby one he found. He has been traveling for years and has seen many places. His tiger could live longer then any average one due to a magic that was placed on it. He has gotten in to trouble many times but most of those times it wasn’t his fault. Many people associate him with magic because he can transform.

Weapons: He has a long steel sword with a black hilt. He got it from his master but wasn't supposed to take it until his training was complete but he wasn't able to do that. There is a gem in its middle what it means he does not know. Its color is purple and it gleams in the light. The swords blade had a purplish tint and it seamed like it was colored silver by magic. When he asked his trainer about that he was told to be quiet and to never ask him about it again. His claws and teeth are razor sharp and he often uses a small stone to sharpen them with. His canine teeth in wolf form are two inches long and his claws are deadly. Faho is still he his unable to beet his sword's master in either form.

Likes: He likes to fight and to explore and cretin types of animals. He also likes the dark better then the light though it is mostly because he is a werewolf. He as a fascination with the sea and would really like to travel on it one day.

Dislikes: People who own slaves, and he dislikes people who are mean to him at first and will rarely give them a second chance. He also dislikes war and killing. He doesn't like people who are mean to his friends and is very defensive of them.

Animal Companions: A single tiger. Its name it Razon it means swift eye in his native language. Razon’s eyes are pure blue and his claws are sharper then anything he has seen. His stripes are pure black and a long scratch goes through his eye. He has a great since of hearing being able to hear sounds from up to ten miles away. He can communicate with Faho through his mind and can sometimes speak with other creatures through their mind. He is much more intelligent then other animals.

Character's Physical Description: He still wares his apprentice clothes he got which are tan and the end of the sleeves are more brownish. He has a silver necklace on his neck of a sea monster which is the god of his religion. He is middle weight and he stands about five feet five inches off the ground and is some what strong. And in his wolf form he his grayish black with brown eyes. His fur isn't usually shaggy because he cuts it but doesn't care if it is. His claws are white and he is two foot three inches from ground to shoulders.

Good personality traits: He is nice to people who he knows and helps people. He also protects people who are sad. He will never betray someone even if he was always mean to them if he trusts them.

Bad personality traits: He is brash to people he first meets and will leave and return when ever and he would rather save his own live then someone else. He can also be very impatient.

Dreams for the Future: He wants to find his master and to return to his village that he was born at and to discover the meaning of the gem.

Reason for Dreams: To continue his training and to see the place of his birth and to find the purpose of the gem in his sword's middle.

Alignment/side: He is usually toward the good side but will switch if persuaded.

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December 1st, 2006, 3:04 am Profile
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is something rong with my its been 2 days and no ones replied


December 2nd, 2006, 8:10 pm
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srry forgot 2 sign in

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I'm not suppost to post here but its the only place I think you will see it...It takes awhile for Shade_of_fear or Glenwing to get on some people wait for a few months..Look at accepted bios to see how long some people wait...

Shade: Sorry dude for posting here but I wanted to tell him it takes awhile...

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ok ty

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Gryndel: it's fine no worries.

Add a few more lines on history and make your personality as long as your history is now. Also, why would a werewolf need a sword?


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ok is this good

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Can you make your lines into sentances please? Instead of just a statement type thing I.e- Get out of jail and eliminate the urgals. And possibly kill a dragon. Instead do- His dreams for the future are to escape from jail and slay all the Urgals, then possibly a dragon.

You know? just make it more flowing...if you know what i mean

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hows that

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You have a few spelling mistakes. :)


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wich one i cant find spell chexk on my computer:oops:

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just go over the whole thing (re-read it) And fix ANY spelling mistakes.


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alright there i fixed them.

tell me what you think i made i lot of adjustments on my character

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ita been about three months is there something i need to fix

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sorry, so many applications @.@

You could do with more description.


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Try describing the personality and appearance of your tiger?

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its ok Shade i can understand. And i added some stuff.

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can some one delet this i want to make a new one or because this one won't be exepted

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ok...ive been gone for a time...u have to wait...


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i no i didn't want to double post so i deleted my last post and copyed it so i did't have to double srry for the trouble. And iw posted on the wrong form so i guess having to forms up at once while talking to a friend and playing a game isn't the smartest thing to do

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Post Re: Faho
I added a few things to it.

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*edited*

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Okay, well I think it is good, but your description needs to be at least three lines longer, History needs to be four lines longer, description needs to be longer and you have spelling mistakes. Yikes there are a lot to go over sorry for the wait.


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I edited a it and fixed the spelling misstakes. Its ok i understand if it takes awile.

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