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Grimly(darkstar)
DragonRider in Training
Joined: February 2nd, 2006, 4:19 am Posts: 633 Location: Brookings, SD
Gender: Guy
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Grimly
Birth date:Born on July 19th 1978( 28 )
Race:Human
Gender:Male
Hair: Black
Eyes:Blue
Body:muscular
Home:US navy base camp. Georgia
Parents:Elizabeth and Peter
Siblings: 1 Daughter:Sarah age 4
History:During the battle in iraq,Grimly was working as a paramedic, bandaging a gunshot would on a fallen comrad. He heard somone else shouting out for a medic. "Yo somone take care of him i've got my hands full!" grimly shouted. No one else replied. "Stay here im going to cheak on the other"
He said to the man. He didnt speak but nodded his head in understanding. Grimly ran to the other and immedietly asked questions. He had found that the soider had been shot in the leg and hip. Grimly got out his first aid and a tool that would help take out the bullets.The leg shot had been a threw and threw meaning it went in the front and came out the back. He cheaked for internal bleeding on the hip. The bullet had stoped on his right hip bone.The soldier didnt feel any signs of internal bleeding but it was to early to tell for sure if he was. He would have to keep a close eye on him. Managing to remove the bullet without to much damage done he bandaged it and the leg adding disenfectant. Grimly picked him up, the soider groand a little from the pain while grim ran to the other fallen. He cheaked him quickly to find he was alright then took the one he was carring to shelter. Bullets where flying everywere explotions killed all other sound when the came. He came to a small church other americans were holding up in. He ran in, laid the soilder on a bed and ran out to get the other. When he came back the other was being treated and he laid the second on a diffrent bed. "Well done lutenant, return to your post." One of the men said. Grimly ran out of the church back to a little house he and two other people were holding. He took a wrong turn down an ally and his foot sank in the sand. He immediatly knew his life was over, once his head went under no one would come to save him he didn't even call for help. Just waited for what was to come. As the sand was to his neck he closed his eyes and took a breath, he would rathrer die from suffacating than sand in his stomac. When his head was under he felt very light thinking he was dead, he opend his eyes and took a breath. He was falling threw the air! Fear immeditatly gripped him as a lake came rushing tward him. Hitting the water with his boots witch absorbed some of the force, left his legs without feeling. Scrambling to stay afloat he swam to the shore, "There are no lakes like this in iraq where am I!? He thought to himself.
Descriptions:
Army cammo uniform with black boots . A swis army knife hangs from a pocket on the right side of his cheast An empty pistol hangs from his belt along with a first aid med kit . Cammo gloves with black leather palms on each hand. A wrist watch on his right arm . Green hard helmet rests on his head with straps . A cammo colord backpack filled with supplies, Medicines, and other things. A black strip patch on his cheast shows Lt.Grimly and another patch on his right shoulder reads .
Personality:Easy going. Use to read storys to his 4 year old daughter when he was at home. Overall a nice person doing his duty. Doesn't get annoyd easily only when somone is hurting or beating someone does he really get upset.Generaly keeps his comments to himself he doesn't blurt out things.
Likes:Watching a football game on sundays, running/jogging
Dislikes:Failing a misson,long debreifs
Dreams for the futur:To return to his oun time and get back to his daughter.
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You are Kakashi. Calm and cunning, but get in over your head at times.
Last edited by Grimly(darkstar) on May 11th, 2006, 2:40 am, edited 11 times in total.
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February 27th, 2006, 10:29 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Try filling out the application form I made, the annoucment topic.
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Colt 45 and 2 Zigzag
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February 27th, 2006, 10:37 pm |
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Grimly(darkstar)
DragonRider in Training
Joined: February 2nd, 2006, 4:19 am Posts: 633 Location: Brookings, SD
Gender: Guy
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yeah I made it. before I read it. Sorry It is now edited.
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You are Kakashi. Calm and cunning, but get in over your head at times.
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February 27th, 2006, 10:48 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Just a bit more on history please.
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Colt 45 and 2 Zigzag
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February 27th, 2006, 10:50 pm |
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Grimly(darkstar)
DragonRider in Training
Joined: February 2nd, 2006, 4:19 am Posts: 633 Location: Brookings, SD
Gender: Guy
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That good or more?
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You are Kakashi. Calm and cunning, but get in over your head at times.
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February 27th, 2006, 11:03 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Change the person, so that. 'He has a black suit' use past tense and third person
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Colt 45 and 2 Zigzag
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February 28th, 2006, 4:21 pm |
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Grimly(darkstar)
DragonRider in Training
Joined: February 2nd, 2006, 4:19 am Posts: 633 Location: Brookings, SD
Gender: Guy
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there I edited mostly in descriptions.
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You are Kakashi. Calm and cunning, but get in over your head at times.
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April 4th, 2006, 9:28 pm |
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ioksok
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 25th, 2006, 11:30 pm Posts: 1068 Location: Freeburg
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i think it needs ot be longer
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MY RP Charies Ghoum http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=4342 Groudes http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=1439 Ioksok http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=991
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April 4th, 2006, 9:30 pm |
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Eragons twin sister Erais
Sovereign DragonRider
Joined: February 13th, 2006, 11:02 pm Posts: 4247 Location: A little place I can call my own...
Gender: Girl
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The history does need to be longer.
_________________ Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.
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April 4th, 2006, 9:54 pm |
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Eragon109
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 22nd, 2006, 10:41 pm Posts: 1479 Location: Earth
Gender: Guy
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yea my history is bigger than almost all ur stuff together
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http://world3.monstersgame.co.uk/?ac=vid&vid=38038410
[CENTER]Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.[/CENTER]
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April 4th, 2006, 10:06 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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Some more on personality and history...
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April 5th, 2006, 10:29 am |
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Eragons twin sister Erais
Sovereign DragonRider
Joined: February 13th, 2006, 11:02 pm Posts: 4247 Location: A little place I can call my own...
Gender: Girl
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Hmm......It's okay, but ya. More.
_________________ Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.
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April 5th, 2006, 1:30 pm |
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Eragon109
Wise DragonRider
Joined: February 22nd, 2006, 10:41 pm Posts: 1479 Location: Earth
Gender: Guy
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look at the accepted ones to get an idea
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[CENTER]Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.[/CENTER]
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April 6th, 2006, 4:08 am |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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Suggestion: Put at least five more lines for history and at least three more for personality. Your description is longer than both .
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April 12th, 2006, 9:56 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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your personality isnt really a personality...
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April 12th, 2006, 10:51 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Lamp Shade
Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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I think he is expressing his characters personality by words said by the character himself. I think it is very original.
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April 13th, 2006, 12:25 am |
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Ayrareincarnated
DragonRider in Training
Joined: April 2nd, 2006, 6:50 pm Posts: 544 Location: Jersey not new jersey THIS ONES BETWEEN England and France
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History has to be quite long so keep adding
_________________ we can proove nothing only believe or not believe
the lonewolf by the lone queen
will kill his enemy before he is seen
live is evil, devil is lived
the difference between these 2
is not the d
it begins with c
control aver you
a souls scar unhealed
is forever a battlefield
until the hurt can yield
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April 13th, 2006, 1:40 pm |
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Grimly(darkstar)
DragonRider in Training
Joined: February 2nd, 2006, 4:19 am Posts: 633 Location: Brookings, SD
Gender: Guy
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Sorry i'm really bad at this stuff im tring to use the character in my book but hide some of the stuff otherwize youl know what happens in my book when it comes out. thinking about changing it but have same name.
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You are Kakashi. Calm and cunning, but get in over your head at times.
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April 18th, 2006, 4:15 am |
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Grimly(darkstar)
DragonRider in Training
Joined: February 2nd, 2006, 4:19 am Posts: 633 Location: Brookings, SD
Gender: Guy
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I changed him what do you think? i know he still needs work.
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You are Kakashi. Calm and cunning, but get in over your head at times.
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May 6th, 2006, 11:40 pm |
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Saphira75
DragonRider in Training
Joined: January 26th, 2006, 12:00 am Posts: 666 Location: No idea.....<.<-->.>....anyone have a map?
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I think its nice...its original.....its cool....but i dont know about your history but i think its ok...but its up to te mods
_________________ Always love, Hate will get you everytime~i forgot what song said this..... I'm fairliy certain that 3/4 of my posts come from RPing......>.>
REDWWAAAALLLL!!!!!! *w00t*
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May 7th, 2006, 1:43 pm |
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Grimly(darkstar)
DragonRider in Training
Joined: February 2nd, 2006, 4:19 am Posts: 633 Location: Brookings, SD
Gender: Guy
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Thanks not to be a stick in the mud but... Glenwing wrote: Please do NOT post unless its your bio or you are a member of staff.
But I don't care if you guys post in myn if its alright with louis/glenwing
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You are Kakashi. Calm and cunning, but get in over your head at times.
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May 9th, 2006, 8:07 pm |
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Glenwing
Expert DragonRider
Joined: March 11th, 2005, 11:30 pm Posts: 1986 Location: Glasgow
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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wow a complete revision of character...slightly unorthodox. Oh and it make it harder for me in my limited time to get through bios if lots of people post... accepted then, this may be funny to read about
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June 4th, 2006, 1:04 pm |
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