The sky was covered in a filthy blanket of blackened smoke. Around me a battle was raging though I paid little attention, my eyes transfixed on the horror above me. Above silhouetted by the smoke above was a monstrous creature. It bore down on the battlefield its teeth, the size of my forearm, were bared in a menacing grin. It's wings which where so large men below were being crushed on the downward sweep. This creature bore no symbols so it was simply here to watch and to kill.
I tore my eyes away from the creature above, just in time to dodge out of the way of a sword which was aiming for my head. I turned to search for my attacker and saw him turn round and face me. Beneath his helmet I saw ruby eyes and that his mouth was elongating into a rough muzzle shape. Before he had finished is transformation I stabbed roughly through the heart and fled.
I ran in no particular direction not caring when I tripped,stumbled or slid dangerously over the dead who had been strewn almost carelessly along the ground with swords, arrows and spears putruding out of their chests.
I ran for what seemed an eternity until, suddenly, fell into a shallow pit. I cried out fearfully not knowing what was to happen to me. I tried to stagger out when a large and heavy foot pushed down onto my back, forcing me painfully to the ground. I screamed, thrashing uselessly, trying to free myself from the force which held me down. I looked up, petrified into the eyes of my attacker to see the ruby eyes of the fully transformed werewolf looking down at me, sword still sticking out of his blood-stained chest.


Tell me what you think because i'm thinking into turning this into a full story.

i like it but there's some spelling mistakes
and could you try to use different sentence structures?

but it's very, very good

my spelling can be appalling sometimes especially if i'm writting of the top of my head which is what i'm often doing.
Added some more descrition and sentences structures.