Name:
Wil

Age:
14

Gender:
Male

Skill:
His swordplay is very good. He has slain a few urgals in his time. He attacks so fast his enimies dont see him half the time. Only very well trained eyes like magicaians, shades, Galbatorix, or other riders can see through his speed.

Race:
Human

Hair Color:
Sandy blonde

Eye Color:
Brilliant blue

Home Village:
Therinsford

Parents:
Damian and Claire

Sibling:
Daret little brother

Personality:
Wil's personality is very complex. He loves battle, though hates killing unless absolutely neccessary. His feelings for his current girlfriend, Lucia, are his drive to succeed in all he does. When protecting her or her name, Wil is all over whoever is hurting or dishonoring her. He will strike at a moments notice, though can be as gentle as a doe. Wil's father is one thing he could live without, as that is history, all i say here is that Wil was hardened at the core by his father, though that all melts away once Kaera's by his side. He lives to fight an opponent worthy of his sword, as Durza was killed and Eragon, Murtagh, and Galbatorix are currently otherwise engaged

History:
Wil is an eccentric young buck who grew up in Therinsford and has been through maybe half of what Eragon went through. He's fought urgals, magicains, and tried his hand against Durza. When he fought Durza, the shade had only just been created. Wil had sensed something wrong when a pale man walked into Therinsford and started talking like he owned the place. Wil fought him and got a nasty cut down his right arm. He was left to die, but fortunately one of the villagers found him. All this happened before Eragon killed Durza, of course. Wil found Kagraign as an egg in the Spine, on one of the misty peaks whilst hunting deer. He found Kagraign's egg, along with an elvish-made emerald sword, beside two rotting corpses, one seemingly a man, and the other big enough to be a dragon carcass. He is ecstatic about being a dragon rider his father forbade him of keeping the dragon at the age of seven. Wil defied his wishes and kept the dragon secret, raising it in the spine, as eragon had done. The meat he gave the dragon was only the meat he killed while hunting in the spine. As the dragon grew, so did Wil's curiosity about his ancestors. Wil found it hard to focus on farmwork while the dragon pierced him with its own questions of human nature. Lucia, Wil's childhood friend, found out about Kagraign. She was intent on going with him wherever he went. They finally snuck out one night and flew off to be mercenaries.

Weapons:
Wil's sword is a special blade. It is in the form of a katana, yet it is more powerful than all of the forsworns' swords. It reacts to emotion. When Wil gets angry, the blade glows white-hot and kills all in his path. He found it with the dragon egg on the Spine. it was emerald in color, and(as Wil later figured out) had the ancient word for peace, Mor'ranr, on it's blade and hilt.

His bow is an average yew bow.

Likes:
Wil loves to engage others in mock sword battles. He finds the way of the sword is very entertaining. He also loves flying with Kagraign. He travels with Lucia and they both love the free life of being mercenaries together. Especially since they're together.

Dislikes:
Wil dislikes killing innocents, or fighting for unjust causes. His youth can get in the way of his judgement sometimes, but that is to be expected. He also dislikes the taste of fish.

Animals:
Wil has Kagraign as his animal companion, but wishes he also had a falcon to keep him company. It would serve as his watchman.

Physical Description:
Wil is about 6' 3" already, and still growing. He's about 130 lbs. and slim. His eyes are a deep blue. He's tanned from his work on his father's farm. His hair, which is down to his shoulders, is dirty blonde. His face, somewhat pockmarked from puberty, is very fair. He has muscular arms and heavyset shoulders. His thighs and calves are muscled from his frequent hunts in the Spine.

Dreams:
His only dream is to live out his life in full with his beautiful girlfriend, Lucia. To travel with her and Kagraign until the end of time. Galbatorix's downfall is one of his priorities as well.

Reasons for Dreams:
Wil loves Lucia and he loves the freedom of the mercenary life. Also, Wil is against Galbatorix's tyrrany.

Alignment:
Wil is on the side of the resistance. He would never forgive Galbatorix for doing what he did to Lucia's father. If there's another faction that gets involved, Wil chooses sides by who pays more. Usually the Varden pays the most anyway, though.

-Kagraign's profile-

Name:
Kagraign

Age:
7

Gender:
Male

Parents:
He nor Wil know, but they were most likely a riders dragon and a wild dragon, and the rider
would have cast the spell on the egg to keep it from hatching, as well as placed the sword there.

History:
Kagraign grew up his first four years in the Spine outside Therinsford. He hadnt known what was
going on then, and still, like Wil, knows little about himself. He caught his first buck, one with a monstrous rack, when he was six months old, and finds that his greatest accomplishment.
He and Wil moved from Therinsford to avoid unwanted attention. After they moved, Wil heard rumors that the Ra'zac, after trying to get Eragon, had come to Therinsford seeking Wil, and will find him soon, or so the Yazuac town gossips said three years ago.

Personaltiy:
Kagraign takes on a serious personality, though he does joke with Wil or others when given the chance, and only if he believes they are friends. He's been known to be controlled
by anger only once. He loves flying as much as Wil, though knows Wil cant always fly with him due to Wil's legskin being completely worn away for good. They both love hunting together, and wouldn't spend a night away from each other.

Color:
Emerald

Physical Description:
He is enormous for his age. His emerald scales gleam with superior luster. He takes up enough room that he has to burn a clearing for himself to stay the night in the forest.

Armour:
His only armour at this time is his scales

Dream:
His only hope is that Galbatorix is overthrown and that peace reigns once more over Alagaesia.

Reason:
His dream of this is because Alagaesia has already seen too much torment from Galbatorix.

does it need changing? is it gonna be accepted? i feel like i've gotten the cold shoulder or something. plz tell me if anything's wrong...

maybe if u had read some of the posts about me making a list, you wouldnt feel that way...plz dont rush me.

Fix the Capitalization, and add 2-4 more lines of history...

capitalization? what about capitalization?

U dont capitalize most of the letters at the beginning of a sentence.

I changed the capitalization. I think I got two more lines of history in, too. I hope I did.

Perfect, accepted!