Name: - Evan Swift

Age:- 17 years

Gender: - Female

Skills: Evan can string and shoot an arrow extremely quickly and with ease. She has an accurate aim and can shoot a target from 500 yards away. She can also shoot while flying on Aura, her dragon. Evan is also an expert in swordsmanship. She is the best in the village but many oppose her with their 'skills'. Evan has her own sword, Lunar. Evan is even better at magic and learned from her experienced father, Daniel. He taught her to even speak with all kinds of animals for information and such. No villager dares to oppose her in magic though!

Race: - Elf/ Dragon Rider

Hair: - Dark brown

Eyes: - green

Home Village: - Ceris

Parents: - Daniel (Father) and Amanda (Mother)

Siblings: - None

Character Personality: Evan Swift is very much like her dragon with a short temper but keen senses. She can shoot an arrow easily and is very good in the art of swordsmanship. She's even better at magic. Evan can get emotional easily and quickly. She also lived with a poor family so she's used to being hungry all the time. Evan will not hunt unless she has too since she respects the animal race greatly. She likes to visit the Queen a lot with her family when they have the time and money. She is very swift on her feet and loves to run. Evan likes to race the village children and sometimes they even win! Evan is very kind to animals but not as polite to elves and humans themselves. She often gets into trouble and gets hurt sometimes. But nobody dares provoke her now!

Character History: Daniel fell in love with Amanda and they had Evan shortly after. Evan is extremely young for an elf, as her parents being 117 years old. Daniel is a bit older, 119. They both look very young considering elves can live much longer than humans. Evan went to pick some fruit and herbs in the forest one day when she found a stone, like Eragon but she immedietly knew it was a dragon egg. She didn't want to show it to her parents or friends, for they might take it away. Evan brought it home and made a soft place for it outside. That was when Evan found Whitefox. The arctic fox was hunting when he found Evan. He looked skinny and desperate so Evan just had to care for him. The dragon egg hatched shortly after and Evan recognized Aura. Aura called Evan's name and she named her new dragon hatchling Aura, because she could sense auras and looked like an aurora(Northern Lights). Evan knew she had to hide Aura from her parents so she ran away, into the Hadarac Desert. Whitefox came with them. In the desert, Aura grew bigger and stronger quickly and Evan could soon ride her. They now fly through Alageasia, saving all sorts of people and elves and such as a Dragon Rider.

Weapons: Bow and Arrow--->The bow is shaped beautifully, made by Evan herself with birch wood. The arrows were carved carefully and eagle feathers were attached to them. Lunar--->Evan's sword is a beautiful silky blue, like her dragon's eyes and the hilt is a cream color. It fits comfortably in Evan's hands and very light yet heavy at the same time.

Likes: - Evan most likes animals at her side and something or someone to be with every day. She has Aura and Whitefox.

Dislikes: - Evan hates Galbatorix and the Shade, constantly opposing them but never killing one.

Animal Companions: - Aura (Her Dragon) and Whitefox (An arctic fox)

Character's Physical Description: Evan has shoulder-length dark brown hair, silky and soft. She has pointed ears of course and light brown skin. She has cheery green eyes and normally wears either her armor or her tunic with soft leather pants. She carries her blue-and-silver sheath holding Anaklusmos. Evan carries a sling on her back holding her bow and arrows too for weapons.

Dreams for the Future: - Before Evan found Aura's egg, she had a dream about a soft coloring of cream-color, blue and purple.

Reason for Dreams: - She would find a dragon this color

Alignment/side: - The Varden



Dragon Name: - Aura
Age: - 15 years
Gender:- Female
Parents:- Draco (Father) and Rose (Mother)
History: When Draco found Rose, she was trapped by a indigo dragon cornering her near the Hadarac Desert(sp?). Draco came in and drove him away, unhurt and brought Rose to his cave. There, they fell in love and Rose had a pretty, soft cream-colored egg. But Galbatorix found them and stole the egg, killing Rose but Draco excaped and planned revenge. When the elves invaded, they stole the egg with a couple others(including Saphira's) and ran off. Now Aura's egg came into the hands of Evan Swift and she hatched almost immediatly.
Personality: Has a temper but loves her Rider. Aura also has an instinct to save all living creatures if they are dying. That could be both bad and good though. She loves flying and speaking to her Evan often. But when Aura was just a hatchling, she used to wander off and get into trouble easily.
Colour: - A pretty cream-colored with a tint of purple and blue
Appearance: Aura is a cream-colored dragon with piercing blue eyes. She has a tint of blue and purple to her scales and she can sense the auras of all living creatures. She has long fangs that slip over her jaws and sharp, short claws. Her wings are bigger than normal and are a light cream color with a tint of blue.
Armour: (if any) - White armor with a light grey mask
Dreams for future: - She sees an image of a black dragon haunting her Rider, Evan, and hunts the dragon down without telling Evan.
Reasons for dreams: - Shruikin sets out to kill Evan Swift and her dragon same with Eragon and Saphira.

What Star Gazer said. You have a few grammar mistakes, like u put she can string her bow extremely quickly and without ease. Also, I think Anaklusmos is a copyright of Rick Riordan, author of the Lightning Thief, as the main character, Percy Jackson, has a sword of the same name and meaning. So, i suggest you change that.

Alright, I edited it. How does it look now?

For which? Evan Swift, or Aura? *is confused*