these are Audraie and Drania's Dragons.
I thought I would make an aplication for them just to make sure it's OK

Here are the accepted application's for Audraie & Drania:

Name: Audraie Vernote

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Skills: Excellent swordsmanship; unkown to her, she can control the air
Race: Dunidine

Hair: Long, Black with strands of deep, dark purple going through it

Eyes: Violet, with dark thick lashes

Home Village: none, is currently living in a small village close to the Hadarac Desert

Parents: Birth Parents: Unknown
Adoptive Parents:
Father: Solnam Vernote; Smithy
Mother; Cariane Vernote

Siblings: Birth twin sister, Drania, seperated when they were 10
Adoptive brother, Furlorst age 15

Character Personality: Kind, trusting. She is mostly a happy person, & fun to be around.
Audrie's weakness is that if she finds anyone in trouble, she will help them. She is a very giving person. She blurts thing without thinking, sometimes hurting ppl in the process.
After her parents adopted her they tried to keep her sheltered, as a result she is quite naive.
She is very friendly, but doesn't open up right away to everyone.
She is mysterious, atrait she shares with her sister. It is hard to tell when something truely bothers her because she tries to keep a stiff uper lip.

Character History: Found on the doorstep of an elderly female elf's home (Xandra), at the outskirts of Elsmeera when they were babies Audraie and Drania knew nothing of their parents nor of the secret hidden powers they each possesed. There was no note in the basket in which they were found but each of the girls had an enchanted pendant around their necks that glowed brightly when they were close but grew dim when they were appart.Happily raised Audraie and Drania were always very close, but the other elf children always made fun of them because of the marking on their arms. Xandra loved them like any mother would and treated them with the utmost kindness. When they were 10 years old Xandra died. Forced to go to the only elf willing to take them, they went to live with Xandria's nephew, Jangla. Jangla was poor and the only reason he took them in was so he could sell them to slavers. Seperated Audraie and Drania lost touch.

Audraie was sold to a kind couple, Solnam & Cariane. Solnam had bought her to help around the house with Cariane because she was pregnate. But when Cariane lost the baby, Audraie was sent to work with Solnam in his smithy. Audraie was an attractive and kind child and soon the couple discovered she had worked her way into their heart; so they adopted her. In the Smithy they found that Audraie was unussually talened, and enjoyed working with her adopted father. But she was sad, she always wondered where her beloved sister was and if she was okay. 2 months before her 15 birthday a customer came to Solnam's smithy who recognized Audraie. He was old friend of her parents. He told Audray of how her parents were working for the Varden when they were born, they were being chased and had no choice but to let them go. 10 years later they came back to the house where they had left the girls, only to find that the woman there had died and the girls were gone. Their parents were deeply grieved by this news and went on a journey to find them; he hadn't heard from them in 13 months.

When Audraie heard this news she was both happy and sad. She immediatly sent a letter of to the last known whereabouts of her sister and prayed it would get there safely. She never heard back from her. Soon she began to forget all about the letter. When she was 16 Audraie began to be courted by a local boy, Damion. They fell in love and were engaged to be married when a pack of soldiers from Galbotorix came to the village. Damion, along with the other villagers fought them off, but in the process, Damion lost his life. Deeply grieved by this, Audraie became very depressed; Until one day, when she remembered the letter. She decided that she would leave and so she set out on a journey. To where, she doesn't know.

Weapons: 2 excellent swords & 1 dagger, made by her adoptive Father

Likes: blue skies, the ocean. To be around people. Riding her horse.

Dislikes: She despises Galbotorix and all who work for him.
She hates slave traders & greedy people.

Animal Companions: a horse her parents gave her, Donahough

Character's Physical Description: 5"9, has a strange birthmark on her wrist that streches up to her lower arm. She is muscular from working in her father's smithy. Always wears an enchanted violet necklace around her neck.

Dreams for the Future: To find her sister & parents.

Reason for Dreams: She has hope from hearing the customer's story.

Alignment/side: The Varden



Name: Drania

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Skills: Excellent at archery, fair at hand-to-hand combat. Has a green thunb.

Race: Dunidine

Hair: long and Blonde with streaks of white

Eyes: piercing green with long, thick eyelashes

Home Village: unknown

Parents: unknown

Siblings: twin sister Audraie, seperated when they were 10

Character Personality: Stubborn, When she feels indicated to do something, nothing will stop her.
Loves animals and is not a big people person. She is very suspisious, it comes from being betrayed alot over the years. If absolutly needed she will resort to her feminine charms and beauty to get her through a tough spot, but she will not usually do this because she wants to be able to do things because of WHO she is, not because she is a woman. She is not afraid to speak her mind, which can sometimes get her into trouble. She is a leader and will take over things when there is no order.

Character History: Found on the doorstep of an elderly female elf's home (Xandra), at the outskirts of Elsmeera when they were babies Audray and Drania knew nothing of their parents nor of the secret hidden powers they each possesed. There was no note in the basket in which they were found but each of the girls had an enchanted pendant around their necks that glowed brightly when they were close but grew dim when they were appart.Happily raised Audray and Drania were always very close, but the other elf children always made fun of them because of the marking on their arms. Xandra loved them like any mother would and treated them with the utmost kindness. When they were 10 years old Xandra died. Forced to go to the only elf willing to take them, they went to live with Xandria's nephew, Jangla. Jangla was poor and the only reason he took them in was so he could sell them to slavers. Seperated Audray and Drania lost touch.

Then when Drania was 15 she recieved a short, charred note from her sister saying that she had found some information about their parents. Determined to find her sister and her parents Drania escaped from her master. She has been searching for her sister for 2 years now, living off of what she could scavenge, hunt or get from friendly travellers. While travelling through the wood she found an ingured falcon and nursed it back to health and named it Angel, who has been her companion ever since. She has been practising much with her stolen bow and now her talents would rival that of the most experienced archerer. Now nearer than ever to her sister, she knows she must find her soon before the connection between them dies forever

Weapons: An old bow which she stole from her old master with a quiver of arrows. A small dagger and a hunting knife which she barted chores and food for.

Powers: unkown to Drania, she has the power to control the Earth and growing things

Likes: Men who are willing to treat a Female as their equal

Dislikes: ppl who talk while she is trying to concentrate

Animal Companions: White falcon named Angel

Character's Physical Description: 5"9 has well built muscles from years of practising, but is thin from not alaws having enough food. Has a strange green marking that starts on her hand and goes all the way up her arm that looks like a vine that has been there since she was a babe.

Dreams for the Future: To find her sister and parents and to get revenge on Jangla

Reason for Dreams: Being seperated from her sister

Alignment/side: Niether.


Dragons:

Dragon Name: Letecia

Age: still in egg at the moment

Gender: female

Parents: Father- Unknown Mother- Grasmira, a silvery white wild dragon

History: Leticia is a twin dragon, in a larger than average egg with her brother, Dahmerin.
Her mother, a wild dragon concieved the egg at an unopertune time. She hid in the forest until her time to give birth came. After she had the egg she placed it in a spot near a village where she was sure a human would find it, and left. Unknown to her though, the village was attacked the next day and the few villagers that were left fled. Leticia & Dahmerin were left alone in their egg for 4 years where they wait for the ones they will choose as their rider's.

Personality: Stern. You have to work hard to gain her trust. She is very intelligent and comes up with some master plans. She is pretty much the exact opposite of her brother.

Appearence: Violet & blue scales wi th a few silvery white scales in spots, with a silver marking that can only be seen when the sun is shining directly on it.

Dreams for the future: For the right person(s) to come to them so that she and her brother can hatch

Reason: she wants to get out and see the world



Dragon Name: Dahmerin

Age: still in egg at the moment

Gender: Male

Parents: Father- Unknown Mother- Grasmira, a silvery white wild dragon

History: Dahmerin is a twin dragon, in a larger than average egg with his sister, Leticia.
Her mother, a wild dragon concieved the egg at an unopertune time. She hid in the forest until her time to give birth came. After she had the egg she placed it in a spot near a village where she was sure a human would find it, and left. Unknown to her though, the village was attacked the next day and the few villagers that were left fled. Leticia & Dahmerin were left alone in their egg for 4 years where they wait for the ones they will choose as their rider's.

Personality: cool, calm, content. He never jumps to conclusions nor does he judge people.
He loves to have fun, and is most happy in the air low to the ground. Even though he may seem too playful, he is very responsible and deeply cares for the ones around him.

Appearence: A pale green with a few scales of white & a silver marking that can only be seen when
sun shines directly on it.

Dreams for the future: For the right person(s) to come to them so that he and his sister can hatch

Reason for Dreams: Being cooped up in an egg with his sister for 4 years

Shade, can u plz tell me what u think?
plz keep in mind though that the dragons are not hatched in my stories yet.
I wanted to get them approved first

I think its great, just I noticed a few spelling and punctuation mistakes, just spell check it and refer to book for correct spellings such as Ellesmera etc, once you get that done me or shade should be happy to accept it.

Rim hennaid, I didn't realize there were so many spelling mistakes
here it is:

Here are the accepted applications for Audraie & Drania:

Name: Audraie Vernote

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Skills: Excellent swordsmanship; unknown to her, she can control the air
Race: Dunidine

Hair: Long, Black with strands of deep, dark purple going through it

Eyes: Violet, with dark thick lashes

Home Village: none, is currently living in a small village close to the Hadarac Desert

Parents: Birth Parents: Unknown
Adoptive Parents:
Father: Solnam Vernote; Smithy
Mother; Cariane Vernote

Siblings: Birth twin sister, Drania, separated when they were 10
Adoptive brother, Furlorst age 15

Character Personality: Kind, trusting. She is mostly a happy person, & fun to be around.
Audrie's weakness is that if she finds anyone in trouble, she will help him or her. She is a very giving person. She blurts thing without thinking, sometimes hurting pal in the process.
After her parents adopted her they tried to keep her sheltered, as a result she is quite naive.
She is very friendly, but doesn't open up right away to everyone.
She is mysterious, a trait she shares with her sister. It is hard to tell when something truly bothers her because she tries to keep a stiff upper lip.

Character History: Found on the doorstep of an elderly female elf's home (Xandra), at the outskirts of Ellesmera when they were babies Audraie and Drania knew nothing of their parents nor of the secret hidden powers they each possessed. There was no note in the basket in which they were found but each of the girls had an enchanted pendant around their necks that glowed brightly when they were close but grew dim when they were apart. Happily raised Audraie and Drania were always very close, but the other elf children always made fun of them because of the marking on their arms. Xandra loved them like any mother would and treated them with the utmost kindness. When they were 10 years old Xandra died. Forced to go to the only elf willing to take them, they went to live with Xandria's nephew, Jangla. Jangla was poor and the only reason he took them in was so he could sell them to slavers. Separated Audraie and Drania lost touch.

Audraie was sold to a kind couple, Solnam & Cariane. Solnam had bought her to help around the house with Cariane because she was pregnant. But when Cariane lost the baby, Audraie was sent to work with Solnam in his smithy. Audraie was an attractive and kind child and soon the couple discovered she had worked her way into their heart; so they adopted her. In the Smithy they found that Audraie was unusually talented, and enjoyed working with her adopted father. But she was sad, she always wondered where her beloved sister was and if she was okay. 2 months before her 15 birthday a customer came to Solnam's smithy who recognized Audraie. He was old friend of her parents. He told Audraie of how her parents were working for the Varden when they were born, they were being chased and had no choice but to let them go. 10 years later they came back to the house where they had left the girls, only to find that the woman there had died and the girls were gone. Their parents were deeply grieved by this news and went on a journey to find them; he hadn't heard from them in 13 months.

When Audraie heard this news she was both happy and sad. She immediately sent a letter of to the last known whereabouts of her sister and prayed it would get there safely. She never heard back from her. Soon she began to forget all about the letter. When she was 16 Audraie began to be courted by a local boy, Damion. They fell in love and were engaged to be married when a pack of soldiers from Galbotorix came to the village. Damion, along with the other villagers fought them off, but in the process, Damion lost his life. Deeply grieved by this, Audraie became very depressed until one day, when she remembered the letter. She decided that she would leave and so she set out on a journey. To where, she doesn't know.

Weapons: 2 excellent swords & 1 dagger, made by her adoptive Father

Likes: blue skies, the ocean. To be around people. Riding her horse.

Dislikes: She despises Galbotorix and all who work for him.
She hates slave traders & greedy people.

Animal Companions: a horse her parents gave her, Donahough

Character's Physical Description: 5"9, has a strange birthmark on her wrist that stretches up to her lower arm. She is muscular from working in her father's smithy. Always wears an enchanted violet necklace around her neck.

Dreams for the Future: To find her sister & parents.

Reason for Dreams: She has hope from hearing the customer's story.

Alignment/side: The Varden



Name: Drania

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Skills: Excellent at archery, fair at hand-to-hand combat. Has a green thumb.

Race: Dunidine

Hair: long and Blonde with streaks of white

Eyes: piercing green with long, thick eyelashes

Home Village: unknown

Parents: unknown

Siblings: twin sister Audraie, separated when they were 10

Character Personality: Stubborn, When she feels indicated to do something, nothing will stop her.
Loves animals and is not a big people person. She is very suspicious, it comes from being betrayed allot over the years. If absolutely needed she will resort to her feminine charms and beauty to get her through a tough spot, but she will not usually do this because she wants to be able to do things because of WHOM she is, not because she is a woman. She is not afraid to speak her mind, which can sometimes get her into trouble. She is a leader and will take over things when there is no order.

Character History: Found on the doorstep of an elderly female elf's home (Xandra), at the outskirts of Ellesmera when they were babies Audray and Drania knew nothing of their parents nor of the secret hidden powers they each possessed. There was no note in the basket in which they were found but each of the girls had an enchanted pendant around their necks that glowed brightly when they were close but grew dim when they were apart. Happily raised Audraie and Drania were always very close, but the other elf children always made fun of them because of the marking on their arms. Xandra loved them like any mother would and treated them with the utmost kindness. When they were 10 years old Xandra died. Forced to go to the only elf willing to take them, they went to live with Xandria's nephew, Jangla. Jangla was poor and the only reason he took them in was so he could sell them to slavers. Separated Audray and Drania lost touch.

Then when Drania was 15 she received a short, charred note from her sister saying that she had found some information about their parents. Determined to find her sister and her parents Drania escaped from her master. She has been searching for her sister for 2 years now, living off of what she could scavenge, hunt or get from friendly travelers. While traveling through the wood she found an injured falcon and nursed it back to health and named it Angel, who has been her companion ever since. She has been practicing much with her stolen bow and now her talents would rival that of the most experienced archerers. Now nearer than ever to her sister, she knows she must find her soon before the connection between them dies forever

Weapons: An old bow that she stole from her old master with a quiver of arrows. A small dagger and a hunting knife which she barter chores and food for.

Powers: unknown to Drania, she has the power to control the Earth and growing things

Likes: Men who are willing to treat a Female as their equal

Dislikes: ppl who talk while she is trying to concentrate

Animal Companions: White falcon named Angel

Character's Physical Description: 5"9 has well built muscles from years of practicing, but is thin from not always having enough food. Has a strange green marking that starts on her hand and goes all the way up her arm that looks like a vine that has been there since she was a babe.

Dreams for the Future: To find her sister and parents and to get revenge on Jangla

Reason for Dreams: Being separated from her sister

Alignment/side: Neither.


Dragons:

Dragon Name: Leticia

Age: still in egg at the moment

Gender: female

Parents: Father- Unknown Mother- Grasmira, a silvery white wild dragon

History: Leticia is a twin dragon, in a larger than average egg with her brother, Dahmerin.
Her mother, a wild dragon conceived the egg at an inopportune time. She hid in the forest until her time to give birth came. After she had the egg she placed it in a spot near a village where she was sure a human would find it, and left. Unknown to her though, the village was attacked the next day and the few villagers that were left fled. Leticia & Dahmerin were left alone in their egg for 4 years where they wait for the ones they will choose as their rider's.

Personality: Stern. You have to work hard to gain her trust. She is very intelligent and comes up with some master plans. She is pretty much the exact opposite of her brother.

Appearance: Violet & blue scales with a few silvery white scales in spots, with a silver marking that can only be seen when the sun is shining directly on it.

Dreams for the future: For the right person(s) to come to them so that she and her brother can hatch

Reason: she wants to get out and see the world



Dragon Name: Dahmerin

Age: still in egg at the moment

Gender: Male

Parents: Father- Unknown Mother- Grasmira, a silvery white wild dragon

History: Dahmerin is a twin dragon, in a larger than average egg with his sister, Leticia.
Her mother, a wild dragon conceived the egg at an inopportune time. She hid in the forest until her time to give birth came. After she had the egg she placed it in a spot near a village where she was sure a human would find it, and left. Unknown to her though, the village was attacked the next day and the few villagers that were left fled. Leticia & Dahmerin were left alone in their egg for 4 years where they wait for the ones they will choose as their rider's.

Personality: cool, calm, content. He never jumps to conclusions nor does he judge people.
He loves to have fun, and is most happy in the air low to the ground. Even though he may seem too playful, he is very responsible and deeply cares for the ones around him.

Appearance: A pale green with a few scales of white & a silver marking that can only be seen when
sun shines directly on it.

Dreams for the future: For the right person(s) to come to them so that he and his sister can hatch

Reason for Dreams: Being cooped up in an egg with his sister for 4 years