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 The Pain Of War. 
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DragonRider in Training
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This is a story i just made up....It's rally late over here in Kansas lol :lol: ...-_-...i'm still up...hmm....oh well...

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..........................................................Prologue

......This a story about a young draftee of WWII....He is drafted into one of the parachute corps, in D-day...the 501st...He Takes off in his plane to the shores of The Nazi beach head, as a Knowing he was going to be a hero when he makes it out of the conflict....he lands from his jump knowing....he was going to be a hero if He makes it out of the conflict.....He soon learns what war is really like...and what scars it leaves behind....unfortunately these aren't scars off the fleash..

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June 18th, 2006, 7:17 am Profile
DragonRider in Training
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apart from a but of misspelling
e.g fleash instead of flesh
its good
I'd like to read a chapter

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a souls scar unhealed
is forever a battlefield
until the hurt can yield

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June 24th, 2006, 10:09 am Profile
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