Name: Ciris (ci-ris)

Age: 17

Gender: male

Job/Specialty: blacksmith/warrior/dragon riding

Race: human but raised by dwarfs

Hair: white and spiked (naturally)

Eyes: They change color depending on his mood

Body: tall, muscular, and sharp features.

Home Village: Buragh

Parents: Unknown

Siblings: Ninindel (nin-in-dell)

Character Personality: humorous but can be serious and sometimes a little bit eccentric. Wants to hurt anyone that does others harm. He believes in fighting the Empire. He would never give up when fighting but he stays alive for his sister.

Character History: He was born with the Dwarves. He has a twin sister Ninindel who is a fierce fighter and helps Ciris when he fights. He has fought with the best and has left the Empire more then once. He learned his trade of a Blacksmith from the Durgrimist Ingetium. He lost some of his memory and cannot remember from when he was about 2-9 years old. When he was 10 he got a bow and learned archery, when he was 11 he first learned swordplay, when he was 12 he learned basic blacksmithing, then when he was 13 he found Safria's egg. During his training with the elves he learned special healing skills from his master. They included: the making and applying of ointments, and the channeling of energy into another.

Character's good personality traits: loyal, trustworthy, and honorable

Character's bad personality traits: gets a little crazy, eccentric

Weapons: His rider sword that is silver and gold in tint, His Urgal horn bow given to him by the dwarf who taught him blacksmithing,

Likes: justice, good food, metal, rocks, and dragons

Dislikes: evil of every sort, flowers,

Animal Companions: His horse knurln,

Character's Physical Description: Very Tall. About 6’ or 6’1” He wears a worn leather tunic and some worn pants most of the time but he also has some dwarven clothes and some elfish clothes that he receives during his trainings (blacksmith, archery, dragon rider), he has very light eyebrows resting over his color changing eyes, he is very tall, he has sharp features and a X (a scar) across his left cheek, very muscular, he also has tanned skin, His right hand has the gedwey ignansia and his left hand is scarred from when his dagger broke when he was 15. He also has a necklace that has gems all over it for storing energy; he wears then all the time.

Dreams for the Future: for all evil to be gone

Reason for Dreams: Humanitarian

Important things character has forgotten: He has a Dragon, Safria

Alignment/side: Dragon Riders


Dragon

Dragon Name: Safria (saf-i-ruh)

Age: 4 years

Gender: Female

Parents: unknown

History: She knows her Mother was a gold dragon and her father was a silver dragon but she does not know their names because they were killed in Du Fyrn Skulbalka- The Dragon War
Personality: eccentric

How they met their rider: Ciris found her on a ledge in the Beor mountains, he then brought her to Surda (they were near the border)there she hatched and met Ciris. Ciris was 13 at the time

Color: Silver and gold (scales and spikes alternate colors)

Appearance: Menacing but wise though she is only 4 years old. She has 2 large gold eyes and alternating gold and silver claws and spikes like her scales.

Armour: None except her saddles (if that’s armor)

Dreams for future: For all evil to be gone

Reasons for dreams: So they wont have to fight and there can be peace (humitarian reasons)

You'll need more history and personality, and perhaps some more on appearance.

if hes a dragon rider he needs the dragon fourm to right.

yes

He is dwarf or human?
Btw silver and gold aren't very good materials for any kind of weapon...

when they are plated gold or silver yeah but pure gold no pure silver ok

HEy i forgot a little but ok? I am the son of a dwarf and human so im half dwarf half human

And just out of curiosity, can you put a little more into "crazy?" Like, wild, senile, hyper, <mentally impaired>, nervous.. or what?

what is going on here

what is going on here

dont double post and dont be stupid. You need better spelling as well as everything svit-kona said

Hey, Like when i say crazy i mean when i got ina fight or get really excited i get hyped and start doing things i woudnt normally do

where am i supposed to do the dragon bio?

underneath it, just edit your post.

Im sorry but how do I edit my post???

edit button at the top right hand corner

thanks

he isnt that bad but just to tell u.between different Questions about ur character like age gender history looks (etc) there should be space.

only and opnion to make it look better

whatever

good character.
can do with some adjustments but still good

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its there anything elese i can do to get my character accepted?

make it longer....a lot longer.....

ok

well history and personality please...the rest seems okay.

ok, ill go do that

edit: I added more

your character's pretty cool

Do NOT post on other people's CHARACTER please.

whats with that rule anyway?

Do i need anymore?

Its fine.


Posting on other peoples characters is none of anothers buisness. Thats what we're here for. They need to worry about their own characters.

A bit more on personality please.

its good

i agree.say hello to bunny.bunny almost lost his ears in nam
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(O.o )
(> < )

do i need anyhting else?

*sigh* Do i have to repeat it on every bio? WAIT plz lol

ok, its cool
caterpillar im sry but this is talking more than a year, somethings wrong
really wrong....im not going to stay on this foum anymore if i cant RP

its been a year since that last post...




Name: -Ciris

Age:-17

Gender: -male

Skills:Archery. He isnt the best, but can shoot an urgal horn bow with accuracy. Blacksmithing, he learned from Durgrimist Ingetium. He can make many things and he practices often. Dragon Riding, he is a dragon rider and has been since he was 13. He is very good at ariel fights. Healing, he learned special traits from his Master during dragon rider training. He has the ability to channel his enrgy into another to reduce pain. He also knows many herbs and plants in the Spine that can be used for healing. He also can heal internal wounds as well as ones on the outside. Swordplay, he is as good as any other dragon rider and can hold himself up in a fight. Magic, just like any dragon rider and he can heal very well with magic, although his fighting skills are not too fast.

Race: -Human

Hair: -white and spiked (naturally)

Eyes: - changes color depending on his mood

Home Village: - Buragh

Parents: - He dosent know

Siblings: -Ninindel, his sister, who travels with him

Character Personality: He is humorous but can be serious and sometimes a little bit eccentric. Wants to hurt anyone that does others harm. He believes in fighting the Empire. He would never give up when fighting but he stays alive for his sister. He falls for others very easily, but he knows when to stop. He can either be very compassionate and caring or harsh and cruel. He has lots of patience. A single thing can set him off if it brings back memorys, and if it does only Ninindel can hold him back. He does not like very hot conditions outside of the Hadarac desert because he is afraid they will always start a fire. He loves standing in the rain, while he watches his sister dance. Because he was brought up in the mountains he can sit for hours on a ledge staring off into space, without a care or action. Love does not come easily to him, but if he ever falls for someone then he does it with compassion. He dosent always think about what he is going to do, and sometimes a old habit ore reflex can get him in trouble. His face turns pink when he is embarased, and he dosent even fell it when it does happen, until someone tells him his face is red.

Character History:He was bornin Buragh but he was raised with the Dwarves of Durmigist Ingtuim. He has a twin sister Ninindel who is a fierce fighter and helps Ciris when he fights She is two years older than him. He has fought with the best and has left the Empire more then once, he went across the Hadarac desert and out no the other lands, but he didnt find anything.. He learned his trade of a Blacksmith from the Durgrimist Ingetium. He lost some of his memory and cannot remember from when he was about 2-9 years old although he has heard alot of it from the people he knew then. Most people think that he hit his head on a rock, but he just hinks he has bad memory. When he was 10 he got a bow and learned archery from an elven warrior who got killed by Gilbaotrix himself. When he was 11 he first learned swordplay from a man in Farthen Dur, when he was 12 he learned basic blacksmithing during his spare time when he wasnt working for Ajihad. Then when he was 13 he found Safria's egg on a ledge in the Beor mountains. He was climbing up to get a bag full of clothes his sister had hidden from him for him. He spent his time until he was 15 1/2 training.During his training with the elves he learned special healing skills from his master. They included: the making and applying of ointments, and the channeling of energy into another. He spends his extra time helping the Varden. Mostly by recuiting people for them. Sometimes this has not gone to well. Once, the first time he was helping, a riot occured and he was almost killed by the Ra'zac, because he was only 16. After that he has spent his time traveling and making sure to meet everyone he can, and stay alive, for his sister.


Weapons: His rider Sword- It is silver and gold in tint. It us not made up of the same materials that Runon made the other swords with. , His Urgal horn bow given to him by the dwarf who taught him blacksmithing, It is white. A small ordaniry dagger


Likes: -Justice, Sunsets, and Dragons

Dislikes: -people who force thier will on others

Animal Companions: -Knurln- his horse

Character's Physical Description: Very Tall. About 6’ or 6’1” He wears a worn leather tunic and some worn pants most of the time but he also has some dwarven clothes and some elfish clothes that he receives during his trainings (blacksmith, archery, dragon rider), he has very light eyebrows resting over his color changing eyes, he is very tall, he has sharp features and a X (a scar) across his left cheek, very muscular, he also has tanned skin, His right hand has the gedwey ignansia and his left hand is scarred from when his dagger broke when he was 15. He also has a necklace that has gems all over it for storing energy; he wears then all the time.

Dreams for the Future: -To find out who his parents were and to have general peace in Alageasia

Reason for Dreams: - He is curious who his parents were

Alignment/side: - Varden/None


Dragon Name: -Safria

Age: -4 years

Gender:-female

Parents:-She does not know

History: She knows her Mother was a gold dragon and her father was a silver dragon but she does not know their names because they were killed in Du Fyrn Skulbalka- The Dragon War. No one knew of her egg until Ciris found it.

Personality:calm and collected, but can be eccentric when in battle. She knows how to purswade people to do almost anything. When fighting she only listens to Ninindel so she is always with Cris when they are fighting.

Colour: -Silver and gold (alternating Scales, claws and spikes)

Appearance: Menacing but wise though she is only 4 years old. She has 2 large gold eyes and alternating gold and silver claws and spikes like her scales. She is intimaidating when you meet her for the first time.

How they met their rider: Ciris found her on a ledge in the Beor mountains, he then brought her to Surda (they were near the border)there she hatched and met Ciris. Ciris was 13 at the time


Armour: (if any) -None

Dreams for future: -for there to be peace

Reasons for dreams: -so she can spend time looking for her parents and Ciris's

longer history and personality, and plz exaggerate on the jobs.

thank you.
Jobs? do you mean skills?

yes, and the history needs to be about 4 lines longer, and the personality 2

ok, i lengthed them both

Ok, accepted