Name: - Nigma "G" Hazziho II

Age:- 16

Gender: - Boy

Skills: Nigma is training to become a carpenter, he can carve funiture and make bows and arrows. He is a skilled archer who has won many awards from many places. He's also a elquant speaker who always knows what to say, when to say it and how to make people feel important.

Race: - Elf
Hair: - Sandy Blond

Eyes: - Deep Hazelnut

Home Village: - The Village of Jhzix

Parents: - Father- the late Nigma Hazziho I, Mother- the late Juniper Hazziho, and his aunt who is a mother to him- Deliah Samsmith

Siblings: - none

Character Personality: Nigma has a unique personality, he's outgoing but can be shy at the same time. He knows where he stands, believing that there is something out there bigger than himself. He believes that there was a specific reason his parents died and he is searching for that reason. He dosen't know what his purpose is in life is but he's determined to furfil it. He enjoys writing, putting every feeling, emotion and thought to paper. Many people discourage him of this, but his mind is set, he knows who he is. He will make the best of his life, and live out his dreams. He pretends his parents are alive, but understands the reality of their death. Education is important to him but right now he dosen't have the money to pursue it. Lately he has been having these feelings for a girl, a girl in his village. This is where his shyness usually kicks in. He may be outgoing and ready for the real world but when it comes to things like this, he can only fanatasize. He's kind to everyone, but not always shown the same kindness. He dosen't judge others but rather evaluates himself. He can be stubborn, sure, and he can really get into a hotheaded arguement if he disagrees with something.

Caracter History: Nigma was born in the Village of Jhzix. His mother died giving birth, so he never met her. He grew up with his father, the two of them becoming best friends. His father taught him to read, and he taught him archery, and carpentry. His father was a very skilled speaker also. One day a soldier came to the house when Nigma was 12. His father was arrested with the charge of disrespecting and harassing a soldier. His father simply denied the charge. He was put in jail for a year and a half, and then hanged in front of the village. Nigma was devastated, his best friend was killed when Nigma was only 13. Nigma didn't have many relatives, but his mother's sister, his aunt came down to get him. He moved to Helmer Village with his aunt, completly scarred. He became quiet, all he did was write, read, and wirte poems. His poems were filled with sadness, and grief. The more he wrote the better off he became. He thought more of who else was in the world, where he came from, or where people in general came from. Soon, overcoming the loss and grief of his father, he came to a conclusion that there was someone or something out there bigger and more powerful. When Nigma turned 15 he started his own carpenter shop, and soon became busier than ever. He met a girl that came into a shop, and he felt something he never felt before. He liked this girl, but, he thought, is there really such a thing as love at first site??? He ignored that emotion and focused on his work. His archery improved and he won many competitions right there in his town. Although he wasn't good enough to go to the capital.
Weapons: The only weapon Nigma carries is his bow and arrows. Made of strong gopherwood and tough rope. The arrows are also made of strong gopher wood, and very sharp iron.

Likes: He loves reading, and writing. He enjoys writing poems. He loves archery and he's enjoys the work he does as a carpenter.

Dislikes: - He hates confronting girls, not that he dosen't like girls he just hates confronting them at first. He hates running, and that includes football (our soccer). And he hates telling people what he he writes about.

Animal Companions: - He has a frog that he has had since his dad died, his name is Herbert. He usually takes him everywhere but lately he's been leaving him home because of the girl.

Character's Physical Description: Nigma has sandy Blonde hair, and hazelnut eyes. He's physically very fit, big muscles and all. He's about 5 foot 8 and pretty skinny, about 145 pounds. He usually wears pants and a Tee shirt, but lately he's worn a tank top to show off his muscles, to you-no-who. He has a pretty smile that curls up at the lips to make him look mysterious and yet vulnerable.

Dreams for the Future: - He dreams for a good education. He also seeks answers. Answers to why his parents died, and who this GREATER FORCE is, but most of all he's longing for something to cover up the gap in his soul.

Reason for Dreams: - He dreams of a good education because that's what his dad wanted for him. And he needs answers to furfill the longing for something more. The thing he belives is out there.

Alignment/side: - He sides with the people and for the people, but most of all against the soldiers that killed his father.

A few spelling mistakes that can be overlooked. With race, you just said where he was from, not race he was. If you are making a new race please provide a detailed description.
Other than that its good.

does that mean i should edit it or wait



does that mean it's good enough to get in??

Edit it, make the changes I have recommended then I will review it again to see if it up to standards.(Or recommendations or whatever you wish to call it )

Sorry to keep bugging you on this but, for race: there was no France or America in Alagaesia. Is he Human, Elf, Dwarf or some other race? You can put that he doesn't know where he's from at the end of it.

Other than that, the rest is solid.

OHHH caterpillar im so sorry i didn't understand what it was asking!

Heheh, ah well. Now its perfect. I approve.

tht mean im in or now wat happens??

We have to wait for Star Gazer and Shade of fear to approve now.

ok!!!!!!!!

I approve. Star?

so now wat?

ur accepted.

so am i on ur list?