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Post Neró drákos
Name: - Neró drákos--Nero for short.

Age:- 50

Gender: - male

Skills: Shapeshifting into any water creature and controlling water.

Race: - Water Dragon.

Color:- Always changing. His scales change to blend into the surroundings. When he does not want to blend in, he goes for a sand color, though he can change to any color he wants.

Claws/Spikes/teeth:- same as scales

Eyes: - His eyes are aqua, sometimes going bluer or greener, like the sea

Parents: - Lirenna and Drenzala

Siblings: Minerela and another unknown.

Character History: Nero’s egg was laid along with two others on Medyer, an island where a tribe of water dragons lived. A couple of weeks after the eggs were laid, two allied tribes of opposing dragons attacked. A small group of them searched for and broke the eggs they could find. Torn, Mirenela’s mother started to hide her eggs, but she didn’t know if that would be enough. Eventually, after a great deal of thought, she pushed them into the sea. Currents tossed the eggs about and carried them through the ocean. Soon, the three eggs were separated.

Nero’s Egg sunk and then was swept into the rivers beneath the land. It emerged from a spring after many years and washed to shore in a river Far east of the Hadarac Desert. He hatched and helped the nearby city by providing protection for them, not that much protection was needed.
He Kept Vigil along with the protectors of the city, until a new graduate had a dragon hatch for her, which was rare, it had been over a century since the city had a dragon/rider combination.

Right after the dragon hatched, an egg was discovered in a river. It was the same as Nero's was. It is believed to be a sibling of Nero's. Now, they go to find more about his race and his family.

Character Personality: His stance and the way he hold himself makes him the emblem of courage. It does not matter that he does not know anything about his race or his ancestry, he still is proud of who he is, of what he protects. He tends to be as solid and unmoving as rock and also calm and passive. Not much works him up. He can act angry, even when he is not. However, you would know when you have hit the spot. He would be like water released from a dam.

Likes: - Himself and controlling water.

Dislikes: - Not knowing who his ancestors or who he is.

Weakness / Fear: - That he was abandoned, not wanted.

Character's Physical Description: His scales change to blend into the surroundings. When he does not want to blend in, he goes for a sand color, though he can change to any color he wants. He is smaller than most dragons his age, and his body is build to swim. His wings are shaped oddly to help him swim. Nero also can change his physical appearance to match more of a normal dragon or more streamline. It all depends on what he is doing.

Dreams for the Future: - To find out more about himself.

Reason for Dreams: - He knows nothing

Alignment/side: - Water dragons


Last edited by Mindrop on January 7th, 2011, 9:43 pm, edited 2 times in total.

January 6th, 2011, 6:38 am Profile
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Post Re: Neró drákos
You still need about four more lines on History, eight on Personality, and maybe just a tiny bit more on Physical Description. Otherwise, this is looking like an interesting charry so far. :)

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Post Re: Neró drákos
Still, it is a solid Character.

viewtopic.php?f=104&t=9774&p=447000#p447000

There are my arguments.

And I added a bit more to History.


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Personality has been updated.


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Post Re: Neró drákos
It is a good charry, Mindrop, but rules are rules. I can't accept until you meet all the length requirements. You still need about two more lines on History and seven on Personality.

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