Name: - Aren

Age:- 26

Gender: - BOY

Skills: Is good at magic and has silver magic.Excellent shot with a bow and is a great swords man. Loves to ride his horse.

Race: - Elf

Hair: - brown

Eyes: - brown

Home Village: - Ellsmere

Parents: -Zadok and Artemis

Siblings: - none
Character Personality:
Is fun loving elven warrior who has a sense of humor, loves to duel other elves,is an expert magacian,is a great archer,is veary skilled in swordsmanship,trains hard every day in archery, sword fighting, and magic,
loves to ride horses,hopes to find a dragon for himself, spends time meditating for 3 hours a day,is curantly hunting down the razak,
and hates Galbatorix and wants to fight against him for all his life if he has to. He also loves to spend time with Karen an elven girl whom he wishes to marrie.

Character History:
Was born in Ellsmere. Began training to be a warrior a 11, at 12 he was already a great swordsman.At 13 he started archery.at 16 he started to learn magic from his father. Two years later he left on his first quest searching for a dragon egg. 1/2 a years later he returned killing many of the king's soldiers but had returned with no egg.1 and a 1/2 years later he went searching for the razak, whom had killed a friend of his.
He did find them but they escaped after wounding him and his companion.
When they were healed the returned to find them. At age 22 he returned to Ellsmere and stayed there until he was twenty four when he left to search for an egg. When he returns from hunting the Razak he plans to propose to Karen. While fighting the Razak he
was slashed in the face and chest by the Razak.

Weapons:
A broad sword with a dragon on the blade.2throwing knives A bow.And a
hunting knife.

Likes: - To hunt and duel other elves

Dislikes: - The king and any other evil.the dwarves for he dosent agree with their beleifs and there gods.

Animal Companions: - A wolf named Silver Back and a horse named Night Mane.

Character's Physical Description: Brown hair that covers his ears. Deep brown eyes.Tall, and muscular. And has a scar on his left cheek.
Also has a scar on his chest. both scars were given to him by the Razak.


Dreams for the Future: - To become a dragon rider.

Reason for Dreams: - because he loves dragons

Alignment/side: - The elves

Okay, can you lengthen it now that I edited it? And It's really good by the way.

is that better, or do u want more

I fixed it! ....... Two weeks ago