Name: Lethona/ they call her Leth for short

age: 17

gender: Female

skills: Wielding the power of the voice and the power of the heart, she can manipulate you with a flick of her wrist and the way you feel or talk it isn't much but compared to her sister she is called lowly.

race: Shade full blooded but her human body is named Thana.

Hair: It is black with gold stripes down the sides

eyes: silvery grey

home village: Tetranad

parentage: has a different dad than Zantya, his name is Landon, and their mother's name is Lucra.

siblings: Zantya and her brother Geogran

character personality: She has a dark way of looking at life and doesn't spend much time with other
beings like her sister Zantya. She wishes revenge on her sister for her sister being so much more loved, but she has one thing over her sister. Lethona can control the feelings of other people and plots to turn the entire world against Zantya. Her sister doesn't know this but she soon will because Lethona can't keep anything to herself but when she does it must be something good. She dosen't trust and can't be trusted but her sister Zantya trusts her. She has an eerie look to her because she has fallen to the evil. Galbortrix has recruited her. But he secretly plots to kill Lethona, and take Zantya as his shade. She suspects this and is plotting revenge on him. He is clueless. Lethona is a very unpredictable person, and if she ever comes across you, don't go any where near her. She is a force you never want to meet in battle. She is not quick to trust and is very gangy and ill.

character history: When she was a baby she and her sister were split up. Zantya was taken to her father and Lethona was left there to die. But thankfully Galbortrix had been walking the very path she was left and he took her in. She learned dark magic but her heart turned dark as well. She grew up hating everyone in her life. Her mother was dead by then and her father had chosen a human child over her. That human child turned out to be Reb. Lethona plotted with Galbortrix and he tried to persuade her sister to come to his side but she had to be difficult and went against them, but thankfully she had no idea that Lethona was working with Galbortrix or she would never trust her again. Lethona had decided to plot the world against her sister and everyone associated with her and kill them all, but she still hadn't mastered the complete control of the feelings of another being. Who ever meets this devil will be messed with and mutated. Lethona spent her years learning the power controlling techniques needed, and finally found how to control the feelings of another for at least five weeks. It wasn't perfected but she still worked on it and by the time she turned seventeen she could control feelings for a year, and the function of ones body.

weapons: She owns a blade two feet long and pure gold, but when it leaves a wound the wound is filled with darkness. It tears ones soul out, inside to outside. She also wields a silver bow that leaves a wound so nasty you die instantly. The ones who don't die wish they had because it it is excruciatingly painful.

likes: Murder, plundering and revenge.

dislikes: Zantya, Reb, Cobalt, Star Gazer and anyone affiliated with them.

animal companions: a red viper that kills with every single bite

physical description: Tall, lanky and very beautiful, a mesmerizing kind of beautiful that puts anyone who sees her in a trance at first glance. She has a eerie feeling about her and a terrifyingly calm voice. She has hands that have long fingers and long nails. She is also very menacing.

ist my rpg okay?

awww, u took my sword idea lol.....

ur personality is only 7 lines, it should be twelve, and u have a few places where you forgot to capitalize.

Okay I editted it.

i fixed a few spelling errors for u.

ur personality is only 11 lines, but ill let is slip. Chetowa, what do u think?

Looks good. Only thing I noticed was a "ones" without an apostrophe in the weapon description. The personality is fine at 11 lines with me.

So, Accepted?

Accepted.