Name: Eagan Carth
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Job/Specialty: Ranger
Race: Human
Hair: Brown about 16cm long
Eyes: color between green and brown
Looks: He has unusual ears, little nose. He’s about 180 cm height and 80 kilogram’s heavy. Village: No home
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: Maybe but he can’t know them.
Character Personality: It’s very easy to make him angry and only a few people who made him angry survive so don’t try…
Character History:

All he knows about his parents is that they left him in forest. It is unbelievable than he hasn’t been eaten by wild beasts but he “survived” long enough to be found by member of an ancient guild of the best human warriors known as the Rangers. He was train in art of war so now he can handle everything from wood stick to mighty axe. But it has taken a lot of work to grown in those skills…

His training began when he was 6 years old. His 20 years older friend came to his room and said: “It was good to met you.” Eagan was confused by this but he dressed on and went to leader Hadran. It was huge man with long facial hair. He wasn’t smiling as always, he just sat at his place in wooden palace. There also was all of elders, man who is too old to live alone in wild automatically join elders, they were retired rangers but they were worshiped for their wisdom. After a few minutes of silence Hadran stands a said: “This is your first and last chance to leave us, otherwise you must start to train everything that we knows.”

Eagan was confused, he didn’t know what should be so bad on learning Rangers knowledge and he couldn’t go somewhere else because this was his home so he simply answered: “I want to train.”
On first day he was fighting with wooden swords. After few seconds he took a hit into the face and he unconsciously fell on the ground.

When Eagan come round he just said: “Oh damn! My head! I wasn’t expecting so hard knock-out. Are we going to continue?”

There were many days like this but Eagan never cried and he was becoming better very quickly. Of course knowledge of Rangers wasn’t just in fight they also know a many things about nature so Eagan must learn a lot of names and also many languages (he was much better in languages than in names). Technically he finished his training when he was 15.

One year later Eagan was near borders with leader Hadran when a big heavy armored caravan crosses their way. After a short conversation Rangers found out that those people are escaping to their fortress because Urgals burned down half of their town before they were pushed back. It was obviously that Urgals will return to finish their work. All the people seemed to be faithless and scared. Their leader asked Hadran for help and he accepted. At first he was going to send Eagan for reinforcement but village leader said that they have only few hours before Urgals will catch them up and that any man could came handy in fight at least as a shield (likeable man).

They came to fortress before night. One little boy was distributing huge green shields to everyone who were able to fight. Eagan rearranges his shield so it was more comfortable and drew a long sword which was lying on the ground near him. Suddenly the fight began. All people stay near blacksmith when Urgals started throwing javelins on them. Eagan hid himself behind his big green shield. He could felt how projectiles stroke into his defense. After a few seconds of shooting Urgals started to shout and ran towards humans. Everything was so fast… He can remember first attackers-they ware having a long spears and when they struck one of those spears remained in his shield so he must tore it off. Eagan stabbed creature which destroyed his shield and than threw long sword on some another creature. After this he drew his own sword. His fighting style was different as his weapon but it was more than deadly. Urgals fells around him in huge numbers suddenly he saw a human inside the Urgals army but Urgals didn’t hurt him. “Traitor!” yells Eagan and he started to break through Urgals defensive line…

It was long but successful battle but in the end Eagan found leader Hadran nearly that. Hadrans last words were: “It was a good fight don’t you think? Make your life better than was mine-GO go for your dreams.” Than he closed his eyes and died. Eagan buried him on lovely place high in mountains and then he started to make his dreams real…







Character's good personality traits: Brave, honest, clever
Character's bad personality traits: lazy in things he don’t likes, moody, aggressive (there will be many more traits but right now I can’t conceive anything more).
Weapons: His main weapon is like katana but little longer with different black hilt (hope this is a part of sword you hold) and it also has smaller guard). He also have two long daggers on his belt (from back side)-should be a reason why he stay very often with his hand on his back.
Likes: Nature (animals like him), black and blue color, he likes to be alone so he can be nervous when are many people around.
Dislikes: Vegetable, lot of noise, his enemies…
Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): He is wearing black trousers with many pockets and short black robe on it (its endings around kneels but it don’t look likes skirt…). He has sword on his back.
Dreams for the Future: He has learned a lot about world countries and now he wanted to visit them.
Alignment/side: Neutral

Good, just fix the speech parts, make speech marks and new paragraphs etc

I was writting it in M. Word and there were paragraps...speech marks added

seems fine to me, accepted.

good character

just some more appearance and personalıty. Good hıstory though

ya i like the history. i like the battle