IC-i was fighting an Urgal ambush.After that i had to move on for there were even more coming.i was to tired after using magic on a lot of urgals.i spotted a small town and stopped there for provisions.i was low on food and water.i made friends with a travelling guard that came from carvahall.We travelled to Du Weldenvarden to speak with the elves.there i saw Oromis.but not Glaedr he was somewere else.Oromise needed to speak with the guard that was from carvahall.Then i asked the Guard what they talked about.He said there were talking about some bad news.The guard told me what really happened to carvahall.what he told me i didnt know.Carvahall had been destroyed and that a friend that used to hunt with me was killed at the walls .after that he told me who killed him for he saw who did it.After that i swore to kill that Urgal chieftan.



OOC-well this is just one of the best i got.

OOC- Use IC for in character and OOC for out of character. Now its a start, good. 3 pointers for you.

1-Write in third person (like Eragon)
2-Past tense eg He went to the shops instead of - He goes to the shops. Okay?
3-Use capital letters and proper grammer, but you got the idea!

IC-I bid my farewells to the elves and my friend and befor i left he told me that the Urgal was in Uru^baen with Galbatorix.Ithnaked him and said goodbye.and for his help i gave him a few crowns.and thus my journey began.

OOC:ur doing great, only can u describe the events with more detail?

ok glenwig ill do it.

ya ill do that as well

OOC- Listen up! When you are talking use OOC- when you are writing stuff use IC-

Past tense, third person! Okay?! Now, wait for people to reply before you keep writing k? Nobody has replied as of yet.

got it i will do what you siad

OOC- for that part.

OOC-ok im gettin the hang of it now.