The slowly turning Wheels Of Time
The smoke of unclear thoughts
The sound of angry voices

The passengers of Train of Thought
Mumble in the background.
Constantly asking and answering,
On the Train of Thought

Where will it go?
What is the answer?
The Wheels keep turning,
ever faster, ever faster.

Passengers of the Train of Thought
Become clearer, become clearer
An Answer! They cheer.
The Wheels turn slower

The Wheels of Time slow
The Smoke clears,
An Answer! They cheer,
As they depart off the Train of Thought.




dnt ask lol i had a bit of a moment wen i wrote this...

Even though i hardly know poetry at all and i'm not really good at it i thinks its good.

its good. sometimes poetry like that, deeper than lots, comes to mind, for little or no apparent reason. thats true poetry, the kind that makes you think

Thanks!
Im still tryin to improve them lol but they come at such random times i end up forgetting them !

heres another- this one was strange because I just watched a film and I was kinda crying as i wrote this sorta

My Lover

You left me here waiting,
My Lover, My Lover.

I waited for you for ever and ever,
My Lover.

Strong and Handsome you once were
and still you are,
My Lover, My Lover.

Joyful and Wise you may be,
My Lover,

You returned on a peaceful night,
My Lover, My Lover.

You died in my arms tonight,
My Lover,

Your with me forever in my embrace
My Love,
My Lover

Its a pretty good poem