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Name: - She uses name Aryn but her real name is Merenwen

Age:- 100 (looks about 20)

Gender: - female

Skills: She is very fast, strong and she can see and hear very well. She can fight with sword very well, but she prefer bow. When she was a kid she trained with her cousin and then she was trained by a rider. She is good in magic too. Her favorite element is fire, so she uses it the most.

Race: - Elf

Hair: - She has long, dark brown, nearly black hear.

Eyes: - She has emerald green eyes

Home Village: - She has grown up in a village near elven city Nädindel

Parents: - All that she know about her parents is that her father was a rider and her mother abandoned her
She was raised up by her uncle

Siblings: -
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Character Personality:
Aryn is kind, but a bit cold person. She is usually alone. She is quiet person, she never talks a lot, if it is not necessary. She likes silence and nature.
She doesn't like to fight, and she hates to kill. She never attacks first (well she does in battle but that's it). She doesn't trust anyone if she doesn't know him well. She doesn't have much friends, she likes to be alone. She doesn't want to be in a crowd of people. She doesn't eat meat and she doesn't kill animals. She is very wise elf. She never stays in one place more time then 1 month, she likes traveling and she is always traveling to see something new.
She knows how to cheer people up, that's why they like her.She never knew her parents and she is kinda sad about it, but she convinced herself that her father is her uncle, who take care of her since she was kid, her parents was just parents, not mother and father. Most of the time she doesn't show any emotions to people she doesn't know, or she hides herself behind false smile. She is brave person, who is not afraid of enything, not even death.

Character History:
She used magic for her first time when she was 11. She couldn't make fire in ordinary way so she got upset and then the fire started.She didn't know her parents. Her father was a Rider and he was killed in battle, her mother abandoned her after she gave her life. She was raised up by her uncle and aunt, but aunt died soon. Her uncle, she and her cousin lived in a nice small house in a village near Nädindel.
She had nice childhood, but she grew up soon, because her uncle died too, when she was 15 years old and she had to take care of her younger cousin. She was becoming colder and colder to elves and she didn't like to be in company. When her cousin grew up and take care of herself, Aryn left her village and she went away. She was traveling a few days till she came to Ellesmera. From Ellesmera she went to Kirtan and so on and so on...
She stayed in one city for about 4 weeks, and then she went away again.
After a few years she went back to Nädindel to see her cousin, but she wasn't there anymore. In their house lived another family.Right now she is staying near Ellesmera.She was on good side once, but then the goodsiders killed her friend. That's why she is on nobody's side now. She looks after her own skin and noone elses.She traveled all over Du Weldenvarden, now she is going to Hadarac Desert. She hopes she will find the killer of her friend there so he could revenge his death.

Weapons: At least a 2 line description for each weapon, if it isn't plain.
Bow - she has special elven bow that never breaks. It is from black wood and she has lots of black arrows. She got it from her uncle long time ago. She shoots fire arrows.

Sword - she has 2 silver swords, the only thing she got from his father. They have silver blade, black handle and silver stone in it. When she gots angry blades starts to burn.

Likes: - silent, nature, spring, traveling

Dislikes: - noise, crowds of people-elves, 2faced people-elves-dwarves

Animal Companions: - Fëanor, her black panther

Character's Physical Description:
Aryn has elegant body, and she is quite tall. She has dark hair and emerald green eyes.
She is in good physical condition.
She has silver bracolet around her left arm and she has black leather bracolets on both on her wrist.
She is wearing light armoursuit from black leather.

Dreams for the Future: - Travel around all Alagaësia and find a nice quiet place to live when she is older

Reason for Dreams: - She likes to see something new
She belives that she can't find happyness in a place where she doesn't feel well so she will find right place.

Alignment/side: - She is deffinatly not on bad site, but she isn't in good site either. She helps the good-siders once in a while, but she doesn't want to fight this battle


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March 23rd, 2009, 5:12 pm Profile
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Post Re: Aryn
You need a few more lines on History and Personality. 15 and 12 respectively.
Your skills could use a bit more explaination as well.
Apart from that looks good.

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March 23rd, 2009, 9:55 pm Profile
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Ok, is it better now?

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Could you please not enter down in your Personality and History too often? It distorts the number of lines, as I still think that both sections should be expanded a little more.

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March 25th, 2009, 2:10 am Profile
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ok. ... i've fixed it a bit. is it better now?

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They look long enough to me I accept and intersting chary :D


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thanks =)

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Ah yes, that's nice. I Accept, good work! :)

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Cool, more characters to accept! I hope to see you RPing very soon.

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thx!


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