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New Peasant
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Joined: April 17th, 2010, 3:56 am
Posts: 19
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Post My Application
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Name: Anna Tan

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Skills: Singing I can sing really well, maybe i can use this skill to sing to the plants and trees of Ellesmera. Quick Reflexes, i have really really good reflexes a good skill for combat. Reading, i can read and write and im pretty smart.

Race: Elf

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Black

Home Village: Ellesmera

Parents: None

Siblings: None
Character Personality: Very quick witted and smart, very good fighter but relies more on skills than strength. Uses magic as much as possible but pays dearly for it (loss of alot of energy.)

Character History: Grew up in Ellesmera, a decade after the war with the dragons. was a good friend of arya before she left as an ambassador. Moved to the river side during this time and perfected the art of using water as a weapon.

Weapons: A sword forged by Rhunon-elda, not a rider's sword of course, but just as powerful. No special colour to it of coursee, but is shaped similar to Brisingr. Another weapon is water, shaped and frozen when needed.

Likes: Swimming, reading, practicing magic

Dislikes: Ra'zac, Galbatorix and mushrooms

Weakness / Fear: darkness.

Animal Companions: Dolphins

Character's Physical Description: 5 feet 6 inches, very slim and physically fit.

Dreams for the Future: to be a rider too and fight alongside saphira and eragon against galbatorix

Reason for Dreams: Being a rider is cool

Alignment/side: Dragonriders

For dragon riders only:
Dragon Name: Opalia
Age: 5 years
Gender: Female
Parents: wild dragons
History: Was an egg that the elves had found unscarred in the cave of broken eggs
Personality: Very wise and sarcastic, fun to be with
Colour: Light purple
Appearance: Bright lavender shade scales that gleam in the sunlight, a feet tall of spines all along her spine sharp fangs and a tail slightly short to her disadvantages but covered in loads of spines.
Armour: of dwarvish make
Dreams for future: to help in the destruction of Galbatorix and the Empire
Reasons for dreams: Because she finds Galby a disgrace to Riders
Weakness / Fear: Wind


April 18th, 2010, 1:20 pm Profile
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Post Re: My Application
Has no one looked at this yet? Well, I'm on now, so I'll help you out. (If you're still here, banannabel.) Mainly, you're just short on all the lengths. History must be 15 lines, Personality 12, and Physical Description 5. Try describing everything in complete, detailed sentences rather than just a list to lengthen it. And for the dragon, History and Personality must be 5 lines. Also, please describe Anna's Skills in more detail.

You have a good start, you just need to describe more and add more detail and length. :)

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