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banannabel
New Peasant
Joined: April 17th, 2010, 3:56 am Posts: 19
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Dragonriders
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My Application
Requirements to Submit:
Name: Anna Tan
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Skills: Singing I can sing really well, maybe i can use this skill to sing to the plants and trees of Ellesmera. Quick Reflexes, i have really really good reflexes a good skill for combat. Reading, i can read and write and im pretty smart.
Race: Elf
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Black
Home Village: Ellesmera
Parents: None
Siblings: None Character Personality: Very quick witted and smart, very good fighter but relies more on skills than strength. Uses magic as much as possible but pays dearly for it (loss of alot of energy.)
Character History: Grew up in Ellesmera, a decade after the war with the dragons. was a good friend of arya before she left as an ambassador. Moved to the river side during this time and perfected the art of using water as a weapon.
Weapons: A sword forged by Rhunon-elda, not a rider's sword of course, but just as powerful. No special colour to it of coursee, but is shaped similar to Brisingr. Another weapon is water, shaped and frozen when needed.
Likes: Swimming, reading, practicing magic
Dislikes: Ra'zac, Galbatorix and mushrooms
Weakness / Fear: darkness.
Animal Companions: Dolphins
Character's Physical Description: 5 feet 6 inches, very slim and physically fit.
Dreams for the Future: to be a rider too and fight alongside saphira and eragon against galbatorix
Reason for Dreams: Being a rider is cool
Alignment/side: Dragonriders
For dragon riders only: Dragon Name: Opalia Age: 5 years Gender: Female Parents: wild dragons History: Was an egg that the elves had found unscarred in the cave of broken eggs Personality: Very wise and sarcastic, fun to be with Colour: Light purple Appearance: Bright lavender shade scales that gleam in the sunlight, a feet tall of spines all along her spine sharp fangs and a tail slightly short to her disadvantages but covered in loads of spines. Armour: of dwarvish make Dreams for future: to help in the destruction of Galbatorix and the Empire Reasons for dreams: Because she finds Galby a disgrace to Riders Weakness / Fear: Wind
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April 18th, 2010, 1:20 pm |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Ardel
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Re: My Application
Has no one looked at this yet? Well, I'm on now, so I'll help you out. (If you're still here, banannabel.) Mainly, you're just short on all the lengths. History must be 15 lines, Personality 12, and Physical Description 5. Try describing everything in complete, detailed sentences rather than just a list to lengthen it. And for the dragon, History and Personality must be 5 lines. Also, please describe Anna's Skills in more detail.
You have a good start, you just need to describe more and add more detail and length.
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