Was not sure If I could be this liberal with the races of Alegaesia. If it is a problem I will gladly redo the application with a more applicable race and bio. Also If anything is wrong at all, even if it doesn't hold back it getting accepted I love to hear what people think about my work.

Name: - Cane Sipul

Age:- 19

Gender: - Male

Skills:- Cane is a changeling. He has the ability to change into wolves. He is a master changer and can change in a matter of 1.5 seconds.

In his human form he is as strong and fast as an elf. He is also adept at magic in his human form. He is trained in close combat; preferring to us his fists, short knives, or knuckles. He can also speak to wolves. This formed is used to fight other humanoid creatures.

He can turn into a regular wolf, with added size and strengths. In that form he runs on four legs and is the size of a young dragon. His claws are as sharp as any dragon’s and his speed surpasses that of even the fastest dragons. Although over a large distance a dragon would be faster. Can is more agile and quick than a long distance speed runner. He can hold his own easily with young dragons, but they can fly and shoot fire. His speed helps to cancel those strengths out, but it does not always work. He cannot use magic. This formed is used primarily to fight beast creatures.

Cane’s third form is easily his strongest form. It combines both of his other forms, all of their strengths with few to none of their weaknesses. It transforms Cane into a humanoid wolf, almost like the mythical werewolf. He can use magic in this form; he usually uses it in the form of lightning. His fir hardens and is as hard as dragon scales. His speed is increased even above that of his wolf form and his strength is increased too. His claws grow and his fangs become a force to be reckoned with. The flaw with his form is at the moment he can use it for seven seconds.

In all forms Cane can see in the dark and due to changeling abilities his body is always hard to see if he is standing completely still. He is also very good at infiltration and stealth. Very good at protecting his mind and can speak to others.

He is a skilled cook and hunter as well.

Race: - Changeling

Hair: - Shaggy brown hair that comes down to the eyebrows. No facial hair.

Eyes: - Dark brown, piercing eyes. Can be seen through and fog, can be seen even in the dark.

Home Village: - Tartoon, hidden city in the forest of Du Weldenvarden.

Parents: -Unknown

Siblings: - His entire race is considered his brothers and sisters.

Character Personality:- Cane is a very charming young man. His personality attracts everyone around him. If someone has met him they like him. You would be hard pressed to find ten random people that met him who hate him. Even his enemies hold respect for him. His appearance is that of a very good looking man. He always smells of the forest. It attracts those of the opposite sex. He does tend to be easily angered though. If he loses his temper he can lose control, but on the surface he seems always calm and collected. He is never arrogant, but he has confidence. This confidence is not only in himself, but in everyone around him. He never underestimates his opponents. He is very intelligent and can assess situations quickly. He has many leadership qualities and when in a group will always voice his opinion. Sometimes he can clash with another leader in a group, but he usually handles the situation by stepping back, just voicing his opinion and advice, or taking charge anyways. If you ever ask him a question expect to hear how he really feels, if you can’t handle it don’t ask. He has a strong moral compass and a sense of honor.

Character History:- Cane was born deep in Du Weldenvarden, in a city called Tartoon. A place where elves who decided they wanted to be closer to nature live. Once they found to magic necessary to shape themselves they wanted to be closer to the world itself. The left the vast elven cities and over time their abilities fostered and they began to grasp the magic necessary to change themselves rapidly into different forms. These elves became their own race. They became changelings.

Cane was born to a mother and father. A mother and father he never knew of. In Tartoon you were all brothers and sisters no matter who bore you. The elders chose mates. They only chose the strongest mates so that only strength would carry on through time. As soon as you were born you lived with the animal you could change to. You grew up as an animal and when you learned to change you returned. You became one of the changelings. You were celebrated at party. You became part of the family. Then you ere trained by the strongest in the family, until you were strong enough to go out on your own. You had to make a Pilgrimage in the outside world, to see the evils and decide for yourself what you wanted to do.

Cane was by far the strongest in his age group he accelerated very quickly. The elders loved him. They wanted him to go on with and train to become their champion, but he wanted to see the outside world. One night while he was sleeping the elders sent their soldiers to kidnap him. They betrayed the family. When Cane awoke and saw these men, he changed. He became the true terror of the night, the werewolf. He killed three men and injured six others in his escape. This spawned hatred in him, a hatred for his people.

He ran from the woods. Vowed to return and clear the elders out. They had become evil and corrupt. He journeyed throughout the world in order to become stronger. To control his inner power so that he could accomplish his goal.

On the outskirts of the forest he found an elven blacksmith to create his blades and his knuckles.



Weapons: -
Cane carries a set of solid gold spiked knuckles. They are molded to his hands so they fit perfectly. They are just straight polished gold. The spikes are about 2.5 inches long.

He also has two long knives. One is all black and the other is all white. Ebony and Ivory. The swords are polished colored steel. The hilts are leather of each knife’s corresponding color.

Likes: - Nature, Bettering himself, Challenges, and Honor.

Dislikes: - Dishonoring yourself or others.

Weakness / Fear: - He only fears that he won’t be strong enough to save his people.

Character's Physical Description: - Cane is a very attractive man. He is tall, about 6’2 with a slender athletes build. All the muscle on him is toned and hardened. He has shaggy brown hair that comes to his eyebrows and has a very slight curve to it as it falls down. He has piercing brown eyes, visible even in the blackest darkness. He wears loose fitting black pants that fall over his softened leather boots. He wears a tight fitting shirt. Two scabbards at his sides, both scabbards have a small compartment that holds his spiked knuckles. He often carries around a pack with supplies.

(When he transforms anything he has on his person before he transforms stays on him.)


Dreams for the Future: - To save his people from the corruption of the elders.

Reason for Dreams: - The attempted kidnapping.

Alignment/side: - None. He fights to get stronger, taking on any new challenges.

Well his wolf form is based off speed. He cannot do magic and he isn't as strong as a dragon. Nor can he fly. Why is the fact that a four legged land creature faster then a dragon on land hard to believe? Dragons don't run that fast and when they fly they will get places faster they can go over things, but in battle agility wise he would be quicker. It is just his attribute in that form, but I will tone it back.

Also I'm not quite sure what your saying, but I believe it is that you want me to give him character flaws in the appearance and personality section? Cause by no means is he too strong physically, except in his final form. In his final form though he can only last seven seconds.

So personality, cutting back his speed, and give him character flaws. Got it thanks.

no not in flight lol...I ment then a dragon can run. Fighting on the ground lol


So What does that mean for my acceptance?

I hate to double post, but my character has been posted for more then two weeks. I came here to RP. This isn't going well.

Seems fine by me, accepted.