well, third times the charm.

Name: Dragonfly

Age:14

Gender:female

Skills:Summoning-she has the ablility to summon different animals at will. the easiest for her is dragonflies. she can summon them and bats at anytime. However, she can only summon other things when it is raining out. The bigger, the more energy it takes.
Teleportation-she can teleport to any location, though the farther away it is, the more energy it takes. Also, she needs her wings to do this, so if her wings are pinned down or injured she cant.
Regeneration-she can regenerate to heal injuries, and control her appearance at the same time. She can also regenerate into animals and other people, if she has a part of them w/ her. ex. hair, teeth, claws.... the same thing with her wings. if the wings are injured/trapped she can't regenerate.(this also takes energy
Also, they had the ability to breathe underwater.

Race: -Ohnyaeli-the Ohnyaeli are a race of strange people who are rumored to be able to willingly travel through time. They have gossamer dragonfly wings which let them fly. Originally a water people, the Ohnyaeli still have the ability to breathe underwater, and have a strong adversion to fire. Also they have porous bones that make them very light. No one knows where they came from, since they lived on a isolated island. Other strange abilities they have is regenerating and teleporting. Ohnyaeli can speak telepathicly with each other, but cannot with everyone else. They have an extremely good sense of smell(better than a dogs).

Hair: - Brown hair

Eyes: - an icy blue/green color-some say that when they see her eyes, they can tell she isn't human.

Home Village: -Demetrix, in a country a fair distance from alagaesia.

Parents: -both dead, names unknown.

Siblings: -none.

Character Personality: Dragonfly is what you would call a fun loving person. She is a nice person, and tries to help others whenever she can. She can also get into trouble very easily, because she is very curious and can go places she isn't supposed to. Also, she is extremely forgetful and often happily take someone elses belongings and forget that she ever did. She has a strange attraction to shiny objects, and loves to steal them and anything else interesting.This also makes her very scatter-brained, and sometimes forgets what she is saying in the middle that she is saying it. Dragonfly also never listens to anyones advice and is easily bored. The good part however is, that she is optomistic about most things and has at times relentless energy. It is impossible for her to hold grudges. However, when she gets angry, everyone had better watch out. She can be strangly violent and tough when she is riled up. Dragonfly is fiercely protective of her friends and will defend them to the last breath. She can be very stubborn and refuses to give up even when it is hopeless. Dragonfly can also be very confident at times and known for making really reckless decisions.

Character History:Ohnyaeli hatch from eggs. Before she was born and army of some sorts raided the island home of her race killing everyone. The only thing they left behind were two eggs. One of them was Dragonfly. When she hatched, she was raised by a lone sailor who had shipwrecked on the island. He had a son named Ben (who is a werewolf), with whom she later travelled. At the time she was 10, Dragonfly climbed to the place she hatched to find the other egg. However, all she found was a few discarded shell fragments. She didn't know where the last remaining member of her race had gone. However, there were strange tracks leading away from it. Dragonfly thought that someone must have kidnapped the other Ohnyaeli. At 12 years of age, Ben and Dragonfly set sail in a boat made from the wreckage. They travelled for a year, searching for the other Ohnyaeli, but to no avail. Arriving at their home again, they found it raided by one of the ships that they often traded with, and their father was dead.For another year, they sailed in the boat, hunting down the ship. It was from Galbatorix's empire. At seeing it, Dragonfly became so angry that she summoned up a sea serpent to destroy the boat. Thus she discovered the power of summoning, but only when it is raining. Then, she set forth to hunt for Galbatorix, whom she thought might have killed the Ohnyaeli. They sailed on, stopping at random islands, and Dragonfly rescued a puppy, naming it Nicko. They traveled in the manner until at last she reached Alagaesia.

Weapons: a longbow made out of a special rosewood. It is a deep red color and is almost as tall as her. She carries a quiver of sharp obsidian pointed arrows, fletched with blue feathers.
if the enemy becomes too close, she has two,plain short blades.

Weaknesses-being an Ohnyaeli, she is extremely lightweight and therefore, not very strong. Also, as was said before, she cannot teleport or regenerate if her wings are trapped. nor can she summon if it is not raining.

Likes:Dragons, animals, the color blue/green, nature, and just having fun.

Dislikes: Galbatorix, evil people, adults.

Animal Companions:Nicko, a young husky dog. has a black mask and blue eyes, about the size of a wolf. He became her familiar when summoning animals.

Character's Physical Description: She is tall and willowy 5'6", with middle-length brown hair, and icy blue-green eyes. She has pointed teeth and claws. She wears a strange blue coat that is made out of leather that goes down to her knees. She wears it to hide her wings-and she loves the coat. She also wears hard brown leather armor, with a green tunic and pants. She wears black leather boots on her feet. Her wings, however, look like giant dragonfly wings that are about 4-5 feet long-probably even longer. They are a sort of blueish-green shimmering color.

Dreams for the Future: to find the missing Ohnyaeli, to kill Galbatorix, to find the people who killed the Ohnyaeli.

Reason for Dreams: -Galbatorix might have killed her entire race, and definitely killed her foster father. also, she is searching for the other Ohnyaeli to find out if the only other member of her race is still alive.

Alignment/side: Good

Aside from the personality being a little short, the character is solid. (If a bit strange). Very interesting, though the summoning animals at will sounds a little too god-like. Are there any restrictions for that skill?

Its not really god-modding if she's summoning dragonflies. Now, if she summoned a dragon, or a horde of polar bears, that might be a little iffy.I think it looks good.

would that be enough?

kk, looks good. Star, Aeraldi

That much better, seems ok to me.

accepted