Name: Freide (as in freed from imprisonment)

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Weapon of Choice: Bow and Arrow

Race: Elf

Hair: Chest Length Black, Usally wairs in a braid

Eyes: Glowing Yellow

Body: Skinny, strong, tall.

Home: never had one, moved too much

Parents: Was raised by the queen because her parents died.

Siblings: doesn't know of any

Personality: most the time good tempered but when she does lose her temper it can get nasty, smart, has good logic, trustworthy, there are times when she llike to be alone but most the time she likes company.

Dislikes: Main Dislike Galbatorix. Also people who talk about nonscense for extensive periods without stopping.

Likes: Funny People with nice personalites, taking long walks by herself, fighting, being with people.

History:Freide's father was killed by Galbatorix and her mother died while giving birth. at birththe queen took her in. When she was old enough to start learning how to fight, the queen had some of the best sword and bowsmens teach her the art of fighting. She can go against some of the best men and make them lose. Freide has made it her life to work with the varden to stop galbatorix.

Bad things about Freide: She tends to take up more than she can handle, the temper problem.

Other Weapons: magic, a sword.

Physical Description: Usually wears dark clothes to keep unnoticed. Has a necklace that she never takes off that has a yellow/orange diamond in the center to store energy in, it also has the power to make her magic stronger, and the ability to take her back into time, but only five minutes(although she doesn't know this yet). The only time she ever takes off her sword, bow, and quiver is when she sleeps and even then it is not far.

Interesting. It makes sense that the queen took her in because elf-children are rare. Why did her parents abandon her? Of course I have no authority here, but if I were you i'd add a tinny-bit more history.

alright then

History Cont.: Freide's father was killed by Galbatorix and her mother died while giving birth.

Edit your post to make it longer.

What more do u want me to put in it??

Hey, Murtagh, that's not cool. Someone has to make sure this forum runs as smoothly as possible. And volleyball_chic, the only reason we're asking for a lot is so that characters go into RP's with set personalities and abilities, and so that their characteristics won't waver.

o-kay then. but seriously wut more do u want me to put??

im just tellin the truth

He is not mad about power, if there was someone mad about power it would be me, because I am the one with full acces to everything but I am not. Glenwing is not mad about power and I can tell you that since I have been working with him for over 8 months

watch out 8 months
but iwas kidding anyway but he is a little crazy about the characters

okay this is all nice and everything but will someone puh-leez tell me wut more i need.

Hmm more on personality perhaps.

is that better. i edited it.

Make the stones powers known so you dont make something up in an RP, say what powers it has, even if your character doesnt know about them yet.

all right i did that anything else.

I feel bad asking for any more...not excellant, but accepted.