This is my first ever Bio. I hope you like it but, bear in mind i'm only 10 and i'm new to this.

Name: Iacomus. (Ic-oh-muss)

Age: 831

Gender: Male

Skills: Main skill: Graymre (magic) of all types, especially controlling and adapting plants and one spell that no other elf has. Cloaking.
Singing weapons from tree’s, especially Oak.
Running (fastest in Kirtan)
Telepathy between elves and humans, an acute sense of foreboding, right down to the exact time and place but sometimes gets it wrong.
Amazing archer with a pricice aim and brilliant hand-eye co-ordination.
Can withstand heat as he found out quite recently (see Char. history)
and can slow his breathing down to a minimum level which helps him with stealth.

Race: Elf

Hair: Auburn

Eyes: Sapphire blue

Home Village: Kirtan

Parents: His father is called Faunus and his mother is Nympha

Siblings: None

Character Personality: Usually, he is a caring and kind elf. He is a good friend of everyone in the village, But by using his cloaking power, he has a knack for sticking his nose where it doesn’t belong which sometimes produces misinformation and causes over-reactions in the elf community. Eventually, he will admit his mistakes, but never release his secret ability, which causes confusion as the others do not know how he got the rumours.
He is quite a perfectionist so when things do go wrong, he will go a deep red, jump up and down on the spot and growl indistinguishable curses. He never tries to conseal his anger so it sometimes rubs. off on the community
If anyone is in trouble or needs help, he would be one of the first to offer his assistance and/or solutions.
He can see the fuuny side of everything, (as long as he hasn't caused it, because he is a perfectionist) even if the situation doesn't warrant it. And seeing him try to stop laughing while cloaking can be quite comical. infact, it can be confusing as it is coming from what apperes as nowhere.

Character History: Iacomus cannot remember most of his young life (his memory is not one of his stong points, lol!) yet he remembers his parents leaving to assist the Varden and Du Vangra Gata clearly. He was perfectly happy until Galbatorix’s reign turned his life upside down. His first home in a village somewhere on the outskirts of Ceris was completely obliterated so he had to take the long journey west to Kirtan with all his fellow villagers where they have existed ever since. His mother and father probably don’t know where he lives anymore yet he scree’s them everyday, but he might forget to somedays.
He is got to know and love the villagers in Kirtan and has only just recently saved one of the children from a raging fire without even getting a blister.
The best ever day in his long life is when one of the village explorers found a dragon egg which hatched in front of his eyes into a small, baby (and slimmer) version of Ignusspirit, the dragon that has become his favourite friend.
He was taught after that by Oromis himself in the arts of a dragon rider and has turned him into a fierce warrior and Rider.
He has never fought any wars, instead of when he used to play make-believe with the children. He once played a make-believe war with them.
At the age of 302, he developed a rare condition where his hands and feet swelled and never returned to there origional size, which is both a help and a hinderence in battle.


Weapons: A trusty bow sung from an oak tree and a small dagger

Likes: Mischief, Laughter, Plants, Laughter and Singing (did I mention laughter, LOL)

Dislikes: Things going wrong, the Ra’zac (with a passion)and The Empire.

Animal Companions: His Dragon, Ignusspirit

Character's Physical Description: Iacomus is of slim, lythe build. He is an average 5’ 3” and is very agile. he has a tanned skin colour and unusually large appendages (hands and feet). When he is not in his ordinary robes, he wears an elagent, yet very heavy suit of armour with his house's crest on the front. It makes him look more musculer than he is normally. He as very piercing sapphire blue eyes which are friendly and reassuring and a smile that could melt the coldest of hearts.

Dreams for the Future: To find his parents and to overthrow Galbatorix.

Reason for Dreams: To make his life back to how he remembers it (absolutely perfect)

Alignment/side: Elves
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Dragon Name: Ignusspirit (ig-nuss-spirit)

Age: 11

Gender: Male

Parents: Unknown

History: His white egg was found in a cavern somewhere in Du Weldenvarden by a female elf who just happened upon it. It was brought back to Kirtan where it was passed around the villagers until Iacomus’ turn, when it violently shuddered until a crack appered, and he became the dragons Rider.
He grew very fast, hieght width and geirth increased rapidly (espesially geirth, lol) and his laziness grew with it.

Personality: Lazy (in-fact, bone-idol) He needs to be tempted by meat and cider just to wake up. If he is woken by any other means, he will let out a ferocious ROAR!(so the villagers needed to know how to tip-toe very well, lol!)
He loves Iacomus very well but sometimes does wish that the boy would just LEAVE HIM ALONE! He has a spark there somewhere and if Iacomus seriosly needed him, he would be there like a shot.

Color: White

Appearance: He is handsome, apart from his purtruding gut and being seriously overweight. When tempted into flight, he has an elegance and swiftness of an eagle and speed of a cheetah. The spikes running along his spine are sapphire blue to match his and Iacomus' eyes.

Armour: Still making the armour as he keeps putting on weight, lol!

Dreams for the future: Dreams all the time about steak and cider.

Reasons for dreams: It’s the only thing that stops him from sleeping, LOL!


Yet again, I hope you liked it. Please accept. Please!!!

You need at least 12 lines in Character Personality and 15 lines in History. Add some more lines in character description.
Add some more skills than just magic. Dont use invisiblity, use cloaking or camoflage.
Decent character though, just need to work on the things above.

I've took all that to mind and edited the Bio. Thanks, Guys. Now *twisted and mind-controlling glare* ACCEPT!

I've took all that to mind and edited the Bio again. Phew.
I don't think it's that good now?
Any more improvements? (or ACCEPTs? )

Ooh! Exited
I think it's just one more now, and then ACCEPTANCE!!!!!!!

Good enough. Accepted.

Thankyou!
Hopefully, we will be seeing more of Iacomus's Adventures on the RP!
Thanks Again