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Fireriver
New Peasant
Joined: December 6th, 2010, 7:42 pm Posts: 36 Location: In my house, duh
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Elves
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Arianna Olairia
Name: Arianna Olairia
Age: One Hundred-Three.
Gender: Female.
Skills: She can run really fast, she can run from Kirtan to Ellesmera in a day, and from Kirtan to Silthrim in a day and a half. She can run for about ten and a half leagues before getting tired or bored. She can sing to the plants really well and can sing a sapling as big or bigger then the Menoa tree if she wants to. She can sing for hours at a time, and never tires of singing. She is an amazing archer and can shoot most moving things. She was in the battle of Farthen Dur as an archer, but she was fast enough to shoot her arrows without being noticed. She is a skilled magic user, enough that she was trained with the riders, even though she wasnt one. She is mostly skilled in water, and can stop a waterfall, but only for a few seconds, any more and she would die.
Race: Elf.
Hair: Black, long, and silky.
Eyes: Bright blue and slanted.
Home Village: Kirtan.
Parents: Iliya ( mom ) and Nandel ( dad ). Arianna looks like her mom, except for her eyes. She has her father's eyes.
Siblings: None
Character Personality: She is smart, and has a great love for learning, she wants to learn everything there is to learn, and never wants to stop learning. She is kind and will always help when she can. She will often sit with her eyes closed thinking about dragons, and how it would feel like to fly on one. She likes to quietly observe those who are not her race, and will sit in corners listening and watching what they do. She is friendly, and will trust people, but not blindly. She is always cautious, even if you cant tell. She is brave and trustworthy. She will always fight for what she thinks is the good side, and will sacrifice herself for that cause if she must. She doesnt tell many jokes saying dismissively, " There are more important things than humor. " Although, she will tell the occasional joke when she can't resist. She has a decent memory, but will forget things immediately sometimes, while other things stick in her mind forever. She is a bookworm, and can never get enough of reading. She always has books with her when she travels.
Character History: There was a huge celebration when she was born, for she was the first child since Galbatorix took over. When she was four, she discovered her running skill in a race with her friends, and was later tested in the training area. When she was ten, she discovered her singing skill, when she was singing to the plants for the first time. The tree she sang to grew almost as big as the Menoa tree, and is the second biggest tree in Du Weldenvarden. When she was twelve, her house caught on fire, and although no one was hurt and nothing got broken, not even the house, the event shook her greatly. She discovered her archery skill on her first training sesion, when she was fifteen. When she was twenty, she cared for the dragons in the dragon hold in Tronjheim, and wherever else they went, that she could follow. When she was thirty-five, she found a baby eagle, dying, its mother was dead, her body near the nest. She nursed him back to health, and when he was big enough, let him go. Ever since then she has had a connection with eagles and can always call on them for help. When she was seventy, she became a member of the Varden, and traveled with Arya alot. She also cared for Glaedr before he died. In the Battle of Farthen Dur she dressed as one of the Vardens Archers, and altered her features so that she wasnt recognizable as an elf, but that was just a precaution, she was fast enough that no one saw her.
Weapons: A bow, a quiver and arrows, all sung and painted by herself. They have vines twisting all around them and little flowers. The arrows are fletched with dove feathers, all collected by her.
Likes: Her parents, Arya and Angela. Blueberries, and fruits. Her bow. Dragons. Werecats. Books.
Dislikes: Galbatorix, Shades.
Weakness / Fear: Fire
Animal Companions: Eagles
Characters Physical Description: Five feet eleven inches, Beautiful, her smile is perfect, her teeth are small, straight, and white. Her lips are a light pink color. She is pale, but not extremely. She mostly wears pants, and only changes out of them on special occasions. She wears a pack, and she keeps a wrap-around skirt in it, in case shes found during her travels. She has a light-brown, dragon-shaped birthmark on her right hip, almost no one knows of it. She looks like she's twenty-five, even though shes one hundred-three.
Dreams for the Future: For Galbatorix to be dead, with a new king / queen.
Reason for Dreams: Galbatorix is evil and killed many, he has to die, and a new, mortal king has to take his place.
Alignment / Side: Elves, Varden.
_________________ Green day: 21 Guns, American Idiot, Wake Me Up When September Ends, Time of Your Life, Holiday, Boulevard of Broken Dreams. Rob Thomas/ Matchbox 20: Disease, Come on Home, Someday, Lonely No More, Her Diamonds, Little Wonders, This is How a Heart Breaks, If Your Gone, 3 AM, How Far We've Come, Unwell. Avril Lavigne: When Your Gone, Complicated, Keep Holding On. Evenences / Amy Lee: My Immortal, Wake Me Up, Going Under, Everybody's Fool, Hello. My favorite Songs
Last edited by Fireriver on December 9th, 2010, 12:52 pm, edited 8 times in total.
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December 8th, 2010, 5:30 am |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Arianna Olairia
A good, rounded character, though you could use a few more lines on things. You need at least 1 1/2 more lines on Personality, a smidgen more on History, and perhaps two more lines on Description. And how many leagues can she run, roughly, before tiring out? Ten? Fifteen? If you could clear up on that small bit, I believe I will be able to accept you.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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December 8th, 2010, 5:58 am |
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Fireriver
New Peasant
Joined: December 6th, 2010, 7:42 pm Posts: 36 Location: In my house, duh
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Elves
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Hows that? I know its not much, but I think I'm too much like her, I forgot what i was going to add to her personality. I will add it as soon as I remember what it was.
_________________ Green day: 21 Guns, American Idiot, Wake Me Up When September Ends, Time of Your Life, Holiday, Boulevard of Broken Dreams. Rob Thomas/ Matchbox 20: Disease, Come on Home, Someday, Lonely No More, Her Diamonds, Little Wonders, This is How a Heart Breaks, If Your Gone, 3 AM, How Far We've Come, Unwell. Avril Lavigne: When Your Gone, Complicated, Keep Holding On. Evenences / Amy Lee: My Immortal, Wake Me Up, Going Under, Everybody's Fool, Hello. My favorite Songs
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December 8th, 2010, 6:19 am |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Every bio is unique in its own way. Very well. Tip; For her history, perhaps mention somewhere in there how she came across her eagle companions?
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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December 8th, 2010, 6:25 am |
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Fireriver
New Peasant
Joined: December 6th, 2010, 7:42 pm Posts: 36 Location: In my house, duh
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Elves
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Do you know why, when I scroll down ( while editing my application ) to about the likes section if I click or type anywhere there I scroll back to the top? It only does that around there and its so hard to type anything when it does that. Also I know that my times are probably a little wrong, but I'm not sure how to really fix it without re-doing almost all of it, but I've seen pleanty others where they got some times wrong so its not really that big of a deal is it? ( and I'm talking about like when Galbatorix took over and that stuff )
_________________ Green day: 21 Guns, American Idiot, Wake Me Up When September Ends, Time of Your Life, Holiday, Boulevard of Broken Dreams. Rob Thomas/ Matchbox 20: Disease, Come on Home, Someday, Lonely No More, Her Diamonds, Little Wonders, This is How a Heart Breaks, If Your Gone, 3 AM, How Far We've Come, Unwell. Avril Lavigne: When Your Gone, Complicated, Keep Holding On. Evenences / Amy Lee: My Immortal, Wake Me Up, Going Under, Everybody's Fool, Hello. My favorite Songs
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December 9th, 2010, 8:33 am |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Yeah that happens occasionally. I'm not exactly sure what causes it. If you have Wordpad or Notepad, I would recommend to use one of those to edit your bio. You can copy and past your whole bio in one of the writing programs, and then once your finished you can copy and paste it back, replacing the original. As for the time, we mainly say that "roughly", 100 years ago is when Galbatorix came to power. Before that is kind of sketchy.
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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December 10th, 2010, 12:05 am |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Ardel
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Re: Arianna Olairia
I believe also that the founding of the riders was around 3,000 years ago, if that helps. Your charry's looking good so far.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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December 10th, 2010, 3:45 am |
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Fireriver
New Peasant
Joined: December 6th, 2010, 7:42 pm Posts: 36 Location: In my house, duh
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Elves
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Anyone have an idea to what else I could add? I'm coming up blank Am I short on anything?
_________________ Green day: 21 Guns, American Idiot, Wake Me Up When September Ends, Time of Your Life, Holiday, Boulevard of Broken Dreams. Rob Thomas/ Matchbox 20: Disease, Come on Home, Someday, Lonely No More, Her Diamonds, Little Wonders, This is How a Heart Breaks, If Your Gone, 3 AM, How Far We've Come, Unwell. Avril Lavigne: When Your Gone, Complicated, Keep Holding On. Evenences / Amy Lee: My Immortal, Wake Me Up, Going Under, Everybody's Fool, Hello. My favorite Songs
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December 30th, 2010, 1:12 am |
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dark dragon
RPG Team
Joined: August 21st, 2006, 9:28 pm Posts: 8122 Location: I don't know, how could you expect me to when it was you who brought me here!
Gender: Guy
Affiliation: Dragonriders
Dragon: Avadius
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Everything looks fine to me. I accept
_________________ Good: Equinox Eris/Galedrim Aaron Ephidel Tvashtar Savania Incendia Radenya Zeuk Quasar Nainocaro Alex Archayac Sahara
Neutral: Snare
Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night"
Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy.
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December 30th, 2010, 1:38 am |
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dracoaestas
RPG Team Head
Joined: November 17th, 2007, 6:26 pm Posts: 5587 Location: attending a pie-eating contest with the other aspiring evil overlords
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Ardel
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Yeah it looks good, Fireriver. I Accept as well.
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****Phalynx**Solarae**Rigel**Alna'ir**Sirius**Ecco**Temias**Kalo****
And I'm watching out for your charries, ILS. *****Faefnir***Navarre***Rimfax*****
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December 30th, 2010, 3:14 am |
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Fireriver
New Peasant
Joined: December 6th, 2010, 7:42 pm Posts: 36 Location: In my house, duh
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Elves
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Re: Arianna Olairia
Just one more acceptance! Oh I am so excited!
_________________ Green day: 21 Guns, American Idiot, Wake Me Up When September Ends, Time of Your Life, Holiday, Boulevard of Broken Dreams. Rob Thomas/ Matchbox 20: Disease, Come on Home, Someday, Lonely No More, Her Diamonds, Little Wonders, This is How a Heart Breaks, If Your Gone, 3 AM, How Far We've Come, Unwell. Avril Lavigne: When Your Gone, Complicated, Keep Holding On. Evenences / Amy Lee: My Immortal, Wake Me Up, Going Under, Everybody's Fool, Hello. My favorite Songs
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December 30th, 2010, 3:19 am |
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DragonSlayer4
Black Dragon
Joined: February 2nd, 2008, 3:34 am Posts: 6998 Location: Me fav website in the whole world, SF.
Gender: Girl
Affiliation: Skulblakans
Dragon: Faelia
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Re: Arianna Olairia
lol And you have it. I Accept. Do I need to tell you to have fun?
_________________ Eka fricai un Shur'tugal. Wiol ono Rest in peace, ILS. You'll be greatly missed... Good: Felecia and Ebony Zeke Shaina Mýa Johdzsia Sarai Vermona Samantha Tyleek Sephora Sofranir Tel'aeír Jeria Sol Jessa Neutral: Leanbrara Naixul Autarkeia Sevena Vena Kenai Evil: Iaras Leurgan I will watch over your charries too, Rathon.
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December 30th, 2010, 3:32 am |
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