this is my new dude...so ignore mty old one ( Ru-u'-bi)

person

Name:Monad

Age:150

Gender: male

Skills: a very good swordsman. A very good mage.

duties: assassin for the varden and take care of best friend and pet Quintos.

Race:elf

Hair:black

Eyes:blue

Home Village: emithrin

Parents: bentrik(dad) pariner(mom)

Siblings:none

Character Personality: kind but over all intimidating. spends all hours polishing sword named "Karack" and floating a 600 lb rock to practice magic. many think him to quiet but those who know him find him wonderful and funny.

Character History: was born as a rich armorers son. he was trained by his father (who was a exdragonrider)to be a grand sword man and mage. he joined the ranks of the queen only to be disappointed by the military's weakness. he ran away at the young age of 56. he found the Varden by accident, cold, hungry and lonely for home. but they took him in and taught him to be a brilliant assassin. his host family at the Varden presented him with a baby falcon. he named it Quintos after a famous golden dragon. the falcon grew well from drinking the pure elfin water. he turned it to be a brilliant hunter and a extra eye for him for assassination. He uses him for assassination by looking through his eyes at a high height. they formed a strange bond only known to happen between dragons and their riders, they could hear each others thoughts. their first assassin job was to kill Mindrall. a assassin for galbatorix. they were in a huge duel for 10 weeks...neither willing to give up...finally both collapsed into a heap on the ground in pure sleep. Quintos who had been watching the whole time in case Monad lost...Quintos would fight. wile they slept Quintos peeked the eyes out of Mindrall so when they both woke up Mindrall could not see and Monad won in an instant. now Quintos and Monad have had hundreds of assignments that went better than the first one. they have learned to work together in combat. now they await, hoping for eragon to ask them
to kill galbatorix.
Weapons:long blade/bowman

Likes:spending all time with mithril talking and training each other.

Dislikes:the empire and dragon slayers

Animal companion: A large falcon named Quintos

Companion's Physical Description:a handsome bird of prey. with normal falcon colors except for the red crown on its head. it would be normal however for the fact that its 10 times the size of a normal falcon. wears a light saddle so Monad can ride him.

Character's Physical Description: tall, handsome yet heavily scared. with soft blue eyes...almost a baby blue but darker. takes pride in his flowing blond hair that is always braided. for clothing he likes to wear a dark blue robe with gold trim. he must wear a hard leather right arm brace because when Quintos gets mad he bites Monad in the arm...not hard but still painful. considering Quintos it big enough to ride

Dreams for the Future: the empire to be demolished and eragon to be king

Reason for Dreams: hate the empire and thinks eragon amazing for his display of courage and how he can use magic without proper teachings.

Alignment/side: varden.

More personality, elaborate on skills, and fix spelling and grammar plz.

i dont care about grammar or spelling so overall i think that was pretty good