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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Joined: July 17th, 2009, 12:45 am Posts: 787 Location: Ohio
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Verdel & Zeridor
[color=#00FF00][b]Name[/b]: - [b]Verdel[/b] (V-ur-dell) [b]Age[/b]:-19
[b]Gender[/b]: -Male
[b]Skills[/b] [b]Swordsmanship[/b]: Verdel's style is swinging the sword with amazing speed hoping to hit his target.He also likes cutting through flesh with ease. His sword style is costum made it is slightly bigger than a hand-and-a half. Lastly he slashes with furiosity and presition.
[b]Magic[/b]: Verdel uses his ability to talk to people over long distances. He also uses it for his self deffense and and attack. His magic color is the same as his dragons color, light green. Lastly Verdel uses magic for his survival.
[b]Race[/b]: -Elf/DragonRider
[b]Hair[/b]: -Dark Brown
[b]Eyes[/b]: -Light Blue
[b]Home Village[/b]: - Ellesmera
[b]Parents[/b]: -Micheal and Michelle
[b]Siblings[/b]: - none that he knows about
[b]Character Personality[/b]: Verdel is very strongwilled and does not give up easily in a fight. He is also determined to finish what he starts. He loves to state the obvious alot. Verdel is very confident with his choices and not easily tricked. He is barely ever dishonest or mean. Verdel is never disrespectful and always respects those around him. He is very calm and seldom busy. Verdel is also very easy-going and does not usually mean as I said before. He is never lazy loves to play outside. He is also very daring and will do risky things for the good of others. He is very anxious and not usually boring. Verdel is never cruel or mean to anybody. He is never jealous of anybody or anything. He is very feirce when attacking his foes directly and in-directly.If he was faced with the situation of lets say Galbatorix he would find the easiest and least harmful way to beat him and then carry out his plan with a few extra riders. He would also not kill Galbatorix but give him a very severe punishment because him being an elf they do not like to kill anyone or anything. Finally Verdel values light and freedom.
[b]Character History[/b]: Verdel has been a member of the varden for five years and was accepted into the varden at the age of twelve. He lived in Ellesmera for twelve years before he and Zeridor joined the varden to help defeat Galbatorix. He has many years of training in swordsmanship skills by his father and he did exceptionaly well for his age. Verdel figured out how to use magic and scry and talk to his friends two years ago when he was only fifteen years old. Verdel has been horseriding for twelve years and first rode a horse named woodchip when he was five years old. He also loves Dragons and Dragonriding all day. Verdel has never been in jail or anything of that sort. He has been friends with Oromis, Gleadr, and Brom for all his life and was actually one of the elves that gave Oromis and Neagling energy everyday. He has never had a girlfriend yet anyway. Verdel is very intelegint and knows how to think on his feet. He is good at making alliances with even his worst enemies. He is very tricky and knows how to be stealthy and quiet when he needs to be. Verdel has been training in healing, magic, and combat for seven years by EragonII and did very good according to Eragon. He has been in many wars over his years in the varden and there is no doubt he will be in more in the future. Lastly Verdel has had a green dragon for about five years and got it when it was presented to him by Oromis. [b]Weapons: Wooden staff[/b]: Verdel always carrys a staff when not using his riders blade. [b]Riders Blade[/b]: A In-destructable light green riders sword. His most prized possestion.
[b]Likes[/b]: - Dragons and Dragonriding
[b]Dislikes[/b]: - Empire, Galbatorix, and Razac
[b]Animal Companions[/b]: - Zeridor
[b]Character's Physical Description[/b]: Verdel is very strong and powerful. He has pointed ears as an elf should. He is also about 6'3. He has Dark Brown hair that is about 2 and a half inches long. Verdel is very energenic when it comes to magic. His Elven name is IgnasiaEldrvarya. He also is a bit more muscular than most elves because of his training in swordsmanship. He also is suprizingly fast and he runs around to do things he needs to quicker so he has more time for training. Lastly Verdel likes to wear a green tunic and green pants with a green cape.
[b]Dreams for the Future[/b]: - To be a great Dragonrider.
Reason for Dreams: - I love Dragonriding, Horse riding, and swordsmanship.
Alignment/side: - Varden
[b][u]Dragon Name[/u][/b]: -Zeridor (z-air-eh-door)
Age: - 5 years old
Gender:-Male
Parents:-Unknown
History: Zeridor hatched for Verdel when he was only 12 years old. Zeridor and Verdel have been friends ever since that day. He first breathed fire when he was 8 months old. He is now 15 feet long and still growing and he is 10 feet tall. Zeridor was in a way the runt in his family so he is always smaller than most dragons he and Verdel meet. Lastly Zeridor has never been in any wars yet. Personality: Zeridor loves to fly around in the air above the clouds in his spare time. He also loves to train everyday so he can be a great dragon. He also has a great sense of humor. He is also a vegitarian because his rider is an elf. He also always has a good atitude he always looks at the brighter sides of things. Zeridor also is also brave and does not give up easily in a fight. Lastly Zeridor has a strong hate of the empire and Galbatorix. Colour: Light Green
Appearance: Zeridor has light green scales. He also has yellow eyes. As i said before he is a runt so he is smaller then most dragons he and Verdel meet. Lastly Zeridor is 15 feet long and 10 feet high.
Armour: (if any) - scales
Dreams for future: - Zeridor's dream is to live long with his rider.
Reasons for dreams: - They are best friends and rider and dragon.[/color]
Edited 7 times I think.
Last edited by IgnasiaEldrvarya96 on August 11th, 2009, 11:59 pm, edited 37 times in total.
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July 21st, 2009, 3:59 pm |
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Aeraldi
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
As with most, you need more lines on History and Personality. 15 and 12 lines respectively. Just explain the history of the character a little better because it looks as if you have summed it up. As for personality, just explain how he would act in a situation and why.
Second, is this character a Dragonrider? If so then you missed out the part about his dragon.
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July 21st, 2009, 11:14 pm |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
in theory hes a dragonrider but i dont have a dragon so....... i mean id like him to be but he is not yet.
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July 23rd, 2009, 12:25 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
there I edited it. Is it any better?
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July 23rd, 2009, 12:40 am |
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dark dragon
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
It looks good, but history has to be 15 lines and personality 12. And Physical should be 5 lines. Other than that it looks good =)
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July 23rd, 2009, 1:05 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
ok so what should i do and how do i get an invitation to a team-thing whatever....
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July 23rd, 2009, 1:10 am |
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dracoaestas
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Do you mean how do you get your charry accepted? Well for that just do what we're telling you now. Expand your History, Personality, and Physical Appearance first of all. And you can make your charry a dragonrider right away, or fill out the dragon section but just say that the egg hasn't hatched for him yet. And also, how can he be a sibling to Eragon I, and how can he have worked on the dragonrider towers when he's only 17?
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July 23rd, 2009, 1:30 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
DragonRider
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
I dont know i got stuck and thought of that so ya. thanks
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July 23rd, 2009, 1:43 am |
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dracoaestas
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Ah, I see. Well, for expanding your History, you could try to detail the events of his life a bit more, and perhaps when you talk about his training, you could say how he did in training, who trained him, and how skilled he is in magic and such now. For his Physical Description, you could possibly say what he likes to wear, more about his facial features, or anything noticeable about his appearance. You could expand everything by using complete sentences, because in most of the sections you just seem to be listing off things.
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July 23rd, 2009, 4:19 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
DragonRider
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
ok thanks guys
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July 23rd, 2009, 1:20 pm |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
DragonRider
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
oh ya and can you please click the egg i only need 1 more click in 25hr
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July 23rd, 2009, 1:21 pm |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
I fixed it is it any better?
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Last edited by IgnasiaEldrvarya96 on July 24th, 2009, 1:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
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July 23rd, 2009, 7:17 pm |
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dracoaestas
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Ignasia, if you want to say something else, edit your previous post. There can be no double (or triple, for that matter) posting within 24 hours.
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July 24th, 2009, 12:59 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
DragonRider
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
ok i change it and work on my bio
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July 24th, 2009, 1:22 am |
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Aeraldi
RPG Team
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Ok, looks good but you still need 12 lines on personality and 15 on history. The lines look like more when writing because the scroll bar pushes the text. You can avoid this by hitting the preview button.
Other than that, your character looks good. Very nicely done.
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July 24th, 2009, 11:25 pm |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
ok i got the two mixed up and i just counted the sentences i have 15 for each
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July 24th, 2009, 11:39 pm |
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Aeraldi
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Lines, not sentences. As in; 1 2 3 4 5 etc.
Hope you get our meaning now.
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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July 25th, 2009, 12:49 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
oh so thats what it meant ok thanks ill work on it asap
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July 25th, 2009, 1:25 am |
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Aeraldi
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Beautiful, I'll give this my approval now.
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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July 26th, 2009, 1:31 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
THANKS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! Gee you had no idea how many times i fixed that because i though lines meant sentences.
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July 26th, 2009, 1:42 am |
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Kayleanna
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Congrats =) i hope mine gets accepted! ^_^
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July 26th, 2009, 2:07 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
ok im gonna edit mine maybe change the name and some other stuff but not alot. Oh ya and where is an RPG when i need one besides Aeraldi.
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July 28th, 2009, 12:46 am |
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dark dragon
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Re: IgnasiaEldrvarya96
Sorry for the wait.
It looks really good, I accept
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Neutral: Snare
Evil: Crimson Dsurion Demondred "Destroyer of Hope" Solstus "Dragon of the Night"
Let your spirit flow in each and everyone one of us and may we bask in your forgiveness, love, and mercy.
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July 28th, 2009, 12:58 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: Radamon
thanks now i only need 1 more!!!!!!!!! anybody................. yoohoooooooooo........only one more person to except.
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July 28th, 2009, 1:03 am |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: Verdel
please do not accept this topic i do not want it to be because i am making a new one. Thanks.
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July 30th, 2009, 11:04 pm |
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dracoaestas
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Re: Verdel
Lea, I'm sure you know this by now, but no posting in other people's topics here.
Are you sure you don't want this one, Ignasia? You can have more than one charry, and this one was coming along nicely.
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July 31st, 2009, 8:07 pm |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: Verdel
well i only wanted one so i dont get overbooked on rps and i was wondering can you have your charecter in more than one topic and this one was kinda rough but i guess ill use this one so i guess you could just lock the other one. I made it for nothing.
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July 31st, 2009, 8:11 pm |
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dracoaestas
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Re: Verdel
Um, okay. You can have your charry in as many topics as you want. Just remember to keep track of them all.
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July 31st, 2009, 8:18 pm |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: Verdel
ok thanks but are you going to accept this one or not? sorry if i sound pushy.
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July 31st, 2009, 8:22 pm |
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dracoaestas
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Re: Verdel
Oh, sorry. You still have just a tiny bit more to add. Two more lines on Verdel's physical description (needs to be 5), two more each on Zeridor's History and Personality (they need to be 5 each) and a couple more on his Appearance (it needs to be 3 lines.)
That's all. Add that little bit, and you'll be good!
EDIT: Ah, I see you've fixed it now. Everything looks good! I Accept.
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July 31st, 2009, 9:13 pm |
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IgnasiaEldrvarya96
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Re: Verdel
ok thanks for your help.
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July 31st, 2009, 9:48 pm |
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Aeraldi
RPG Team
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Re: Verdel
Alright! This character is now accepted for use!
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For though I move on, I will always remember you I-L-S. Keralin and Aelir, (And Keralin's past) Hayren and Taliear Aeraldi, (And Aeraldi's past) Polaris and Saiph Nilarek, (And Nilarek's newest host) Legion Kharsin
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