Name: Avorroch �rach�r
Age: 18 years
Gender: Male
Skills: Acrobatics, Quickness, shadow control,
Race:Elf
Hair:Brown long hair
Eyes:Light blue eyes
Home Village:Caravhall,
Parents:Mother Ulien, Father Talron,
Siblings:Sister Shira,
Character Personality: He is a black personality. He wants to be alone, becouse everybody is counter to his minds. Sometimes he accept some alliances but not every time. Becouse its history he dont love and want to kill everything good.
Character History: He has born in the near of Caravhall. Once his parents must go to a journey to the Empire and they left Avorroch to his sister Shira. Onde day some evil cratures bring Avorroch to a black place. He there become a great man live in wildness. One day he go to Caravhall and found his sister Dead. He have been killed from the side of the guard becouse she had stolen some food. Becouse this Avorroch got anger and kill the guards and go back to his life place. His want is to kill everything good.
Weapons:Long bow, short sword, dark cloths,
Likes: Killing, Dieing,
Dislikes:Love, light, good,
Animal Companions: White wolf Azrag,
Character's Physical Description: He is dark and never isnt he happy.
Dreams for the Future: Kill al good.
Reason for Dreams:The death of his sister.
Alignment/side: Dark side

i hope its good. im sorry becouse my english is a little big corrupted.

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