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Post Athura is #1 bio and i hope everyone else agree's
Name: Athura
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Skills: Archary, magic, swordmanship, black smith
Race: Elf
Hair: straight Silver
Eyes: Teal
Home Village: Lives in Du Weldenvarden in the village Kirtan just south of Ellesmera
Parents: Mother: Ayra Father Eragan
Siblings: Brom
Character Personality: Very out going and always finds himself in trouble or with bad people. Loves a good sense of humor and has great honor for his family, uses logic very wisely and has a carring heart.
Character History: Helped find the 3rd dragon egg hidden with his father and the reborn Uncle Murtagh. Foolish Galbatorix hid the egg deep in the spine in a ravens nest. Athura was given egg and the egg hatched a marvoulous dragon. Athura is in training by his father for Oromis and his dragon have past away.
Weapons: Athura's sword is named "Wyrda" for fate and the sword has one Diamond and one Periot Crystal. His Bow is an Elvan Bow, named "Hljodhr" for silent because it's string makes no noise which makes it silent but Deadly.
Likes: A elf woman named Alana, His mother father, his dragon, plants and animals, moantains, Snowy days, flying his dragon, and most importantly his training and being a rider.
Dislikes: Orik of the dwarves, His grandpa Morzan, most urgals, seeing his drangon hurt, and while on the topic seeing any of his family sad or wounded. Necromancy, evil twisted dragon riders, and the pathetic soldiers who served Galbatorix and Galbatorix himself.
Animal Companions: His loyal soul conected dragon
Character's Physical Description: Cleany shaved, buffed, a missing pinky from when getting 3rd egg, bony cheeks and a small slanted nose with piontey ears and big feet, thin/long lips, narrow eyes, and a long forehead.
Dreams for the Future: To Become the leader of the riders and king of Alagaesia. A honarble soul mate od Alana and to have a child of his very own.
Reason for Dreams: His incouraging father and mother and for all the people in Alagasia and for his love.
Alignment/side: All sides are one now besids for minor enemys that subside in the Spine.

DRAGON
Dragon Name: Roslarb
Age: 2 years
Gender: Male
Parents: ???
History: Came to Athura from 3rd egg and has had an ever growing relationship with Athura. Very loyal.
Personality: Outgoing, more wise than Athura, witty, humorurous, clever.
Colour: A light red rose colour with blue strikes down him and never before seen golden spikes.
Appearance: a 30 foot wing span, an extordinarly long tail for a young dragon bright shiny teeth, over all marvoulous.
Armour: (if any) Saphire colored armor beside the head plate which is Periot.
Dreams for future: To serve his partner in every honarable way ant to help him in hard times. Slight hope for a mate.
Reasons for dreams: In his genes and instinct. His conection with Athura and traing has a very great share in this though.

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May 18th, 2006, 1:33 am Profile
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Name: Athura

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Skills: Archary, magic, swordmanship, well knowned for he made is very own bow which requires much skill and he made his bow better than his father.

Race: Elf

Hair: straight Silver

Eyes: Teal

Home Village: Lives in Du Weldenvarden in the village Kirtan just south of Ellesmera

Parents: Mother: Ayra Father Eragan

Siblings: Brom Jr. human and 7 years old

Character Personality: Very out going and always finds himself in trouble or with bad people. Loves a good sense of humor and has great honor for his family, uses logic very wisely and has a carring heart.

Character History: Helped find the 3rd dragon egg hidden with his father and the reborn Uncle Murtagh. Foolish Galbatorix hid the egg deep in the spine in a ravens nest. Athura was given egg and the egg hatched a marvoulous dragon. Athura is in training by his father for Oromis and his dragon have past away. After his father deafeted Galbatorix and united all 3 races as one he settled down as kinhg and him and ayra had 2 children first Athura then Brom. Brom was obvuiosly named after athura's father's first trainer. Brom was born 10 years after Athura she is now 7. Brom desires to be a gaurd of the Riders realm. Until 5 years of age Athura new not of his father dragon for while taking a hike found saphira sleeping. Sinse then he honored his life to findiong the 3rd egg which he did and become like his father.

Weapons: Athura's sword is named "Wyrda" for fate and the sword has one Diamond and one Periot Crystal. His Bow is an Elvan Bow, named "Hljodhr" for silent because it's string makes no noise which makes it silent but Deadly.

Likes: A elf woman named Alana, His mother father, his dragon, plants and animals, moantains, Snowy days, flying his dragon, and most importantly his training and being a rider.

Dislikes: Orik of the dwarves, His grandpa Morzan, most urgals, seeing his drangon hurt, and while on the topic seeing any of his family sad or wounded. Necromancy, evil twisted dragon riders, and the pathetic soldiers who served Galbatorix and Galbatorix himself.

Animal Companions: His loyal soul conected dragon

Character's Physical Description: Cleany shaved, buffed, a missing pinky from when getting 3rd egg, bony cheeks and a small slanted nose with piontey ears and big feet, thin/long lips, narrow eyes, and a long forehead.

Dreams for the Future: To Become the leader of the riders and king of Alagaesia. A honarble soul mate od Alana and to have a child of his very own.

Reason for Dreams: His incouraging father and mother and for all the people in Alagasia and for his love.

Alignment/side: All sides are one now besids for minor enemys that subside in the Spine.

DRAGON
Dragon Name: Roslarb

Age: 2 years

Gender: Male

Parents: ???

History: Came to Athura from 3rd egg and has had an ever growing relationship with Athura. Very loyal.

Personality: Outgoing, more wise than Athura, witty, humorurous, clever.

Colour: A light red rose colour with blue strikes down him and never before seen golden spikes.

Appearance: a 30 foot wing span, an extordinarly long tail for a young dragon bright shiny teeth, over all marvoulous.

Armour: (if any) Saphire colored armor beside the head plate which is Periot.

Dreams for future: To serve his partner in every honarable way ant to help him in hard times. Slight hope for a mate.

Reasons for dreams: In his genes and instinct. His conection with Athura and traing has a very great share in this though.

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May 18th, 2006, 1:48 am Profile
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another revise and knowone told me if i needed to!!!! 8)


Name: Athura

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Skills: Archary, magic, swordmanship, well knowned for he made is very own bow which requires much skill and he made his bow better than his father.

Race: Elf

Hair: straight Silver

Eyes: Teal

Home Village: Lives in Du Weldenvarden in the village Kirtan just south of Ellesmera

Parents: Mother: Ayra Father Eragan

Siblings: Brom Jr. human and 7 years old

Character Personality: Very out going and always finds himself in trouble or with bad people. Loves a good sense of humor and has great honor for his family, uses logic very wisely and has a carring heart. He, like other elves, don’t believe in a religion and even though very outgoing around ones he loves he gets shy. He loves the sunlight and gets sea sick in big boats.

Character History: Helped find the 3rd dragon egg hidden with his father and the reborn Uncle Murtagh. Foolish Galbatorix hid the egg deep in the spine in a ravens nest. Athura was given egg and the egg hatched a marvelous dragon. Athura is in training by his father for Oromis and his dragon have past away. After his father deafeted Galbatorix and united all 3 races as one he settled down as kinhg and him and ayra had 2 children first Athura then Brom. Brom was obvuiosly named after athura's father's first trainer. Brom was born 10 years after Athura she is now 7. Brom desires to be a gaurd of the Riders realm. Until 5 years of age Athura new not of his father dragon for while taking a hike found saphira sleeping. Sinse then he honored his life to findiong the 3rd egg which he did and become like his father.

Weapons: Athura's sword is named "Wyrda" for fate and the sword has one Diamond and one Periot Crystal. His Bow is an Elvan Bow, named "Hljodhr" for silent because it's string makes no noise which makes it silent but Deadly.

Likes: A elf woman named Alana, His mother father, his dragon, plants and animals, moantains, Snowy days, flying his dragon, and most importantly his training and being a rider.

Dislikes: Orik of the dwarves, His grandpa Morzan, most urgals, seeing his drangon hurt, and while on the topic seeing any of his family sad or wounded. Necromancy, evil twisted dragon riders, and the pathetic soldiers who served Galbatorix and Galbatorix himself.

Animal Companions: His loyal soul conected dragon

Character's Physical Description: Cleany shaved, buffed, a missing pinky from when getting 3rd egg, bony cheeks and a small slanted nose with piontey ears and big feet, thin/long lips, narrow eyes, and a long forehead.

Dreams for the Future: To Become the leader of the riders and king of Alagaesia. A honarble soul mate od Alana and to have a child of his very own.

Reason for Dreams: His incouraging father and mother and for all the people in Alagasia and for his love.

Alignment/side: All sides are one now besides for minor enemys that subside in the Spine.

DRAGON
Dragon Name: Roslarb

Age: 2 years

Gender: Male

Parents: ???

History: Came to Athura from 3rd egg and has had an ever growing relationship with Athura. Very loyal.

Personality: Outgoing, more wise than Athura, witty, humorurous, clever.

Colour: A light red rose colour with blue strikes down him and never before seen golden spikes.

Appearance: a 30 foot wing span, an extordinarly long tail for a young dragon bright shiny teeth, over all marvoulous.

Armour: (if any) Saphire colored armor beside the head plate which is Periot.

Dreams for future: To serve his partner in every honarable way ant to help him in hard times. Slight hope for a mate.

Reasons for dreams: In his genes and instinct. His conection with Athura and traing has a very great share in this though.

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SORRY FOR MAKING ANOTHER ONE!! :(

Name: Athura

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Skills: Archery, magic, swordsmanship, well knowned for he made is very own bow which requires much skill and he made his bow better than his father.

Race: Elf

Hair: straight Silver

Eyes: Teal

Home Village: Lives in Du Weldenvarden in the village Kirtan just south of Ellesmera

Parents: Mother: Elf named Ayra at age 176 Father: Human named Eragan at age 43

Siblings: Brother: Human named Brom at age 7.

Character Personality: Very out going and always finds himself in trouble or with bad people. Loves a good sense of humor and has great honor for his family, uses logic very wisely and has a carring heart. He, like other elves, don’t believe in a religion and even though very outgoing around ones he loves he gets shy. He loves the sunlight and gets sea sick in big boats. Very courageous but sometimes a little to courageous which gets him in trouble and gets him lost while on rides with his dragon. A proud happy person who also at any given times give or help other elves, humans, or dwarves. Always encourages people to do the right thing or encourages other people to try new things.

Character History: Helped find the 3rd dragon egg hidden with his father and the reborn Uncle Murtagh. Foolish Galbatorix hid the egg deep in the spine in a ravens nest. Athura was given egg and the egg hatched a marvelous dragon. Athura is in training by his father for Oromis and his dragon have past away. After his father defeated Galbatorix and united all 3 races as one he settled down as kinhg and him and Ayra had 2 children first Athura then Brom. Brom was obviously named after Athura's father's first trainer. Brom was born 10 years after Athura she is now 7. Brom desires to be a guard of the Riders realm. Until 5 years of age Athura new not of his father dragon for while taking a hike found Saphira sleeping. Since then he honored his life to finding the 3rd egg which he did and become like his father. Rumors of kidnapping at young age but was never proven. But a fact is that he attempted to steal an eleven bow and killed an animal to close to his village causing about three year to untainted the poisoned village and land. Went through Agaeti Blodhren at age 16. For the two years of training which has tooken a lot longer than his father Eragon took. Saphira relationship with his uncle’s dragon caused 2 more eggs which have already hatched for two other riders. So evidently Athura’s dragon will probably have a relationship with the two dragons. The other two riders started a year and a half before Athura has. Even though Athura has been slow with training he is still farther then other two. Even though has famous parents, Athura isn’t of the dwarves liking even though he honors them greatly… well except Orik. The reason why he dislikes Orik is for he lied to him telling him that Brom was holding secrets from Athura that their parents said forcing Athura in a very pressured situation that caused him to attack his brother Brom leaving his a scar on his arm. Thankfully the scar didn’t cause Brom much pain!!

Weapons: Athura's sword is named "Wyrda" for fate and the sword has one Diamond and one Periot Crystal. His Bow is an Elvan Bow, named "Hljodhr" for silent because it's string makes no noise which makes it silent but Deadly. And of course his magic energy powers which are great for being a son of an elf and a Dragon rider.

Likes: A elf woman named Alana, His mother father, his dragon, plants and animals, mountains, Snowy days, flying his dragon, His great cousin Roran, and most importantly his training and being a rider.

Dislikes: Orik of the dwarves, His grandpa Morzan, most urgals, seeing his drangon hurt, and while on the topic seeing any of his family sad or wounded. Necromancy, evil twisted dragon riders, and the pathetic soldiers who served Galbatorix and Galbatorix himself.

Animal Companions: His loyal soul connected dragon

Character's Physical Description: Cleanly shaved, buffed, a missing pinky from when getting 3rd egg, bony cheeks and a small slanted nose with pointy ears and big feet, thin/long lips, narrow eyes, and a long forehead.

Dreams for the Future: To Become the leader of the riders and king of Alagaesia. A honorable soul mate who is Alana and to have a child or two of his very own.

Reason for Dreams: His encouraging father and mother and for all the people in Alagasia and for his love.

Alignment/side: All sides are one now besides for minor enemies that subside in the Spine.

DRAGON
Dragon Name: Roslarb

Age: 2 years

Gender: Male

Parents: ???

History: Came to Athura from 3rd egg and has had an ever growing relationship with Athura. Very loyal. Hasn’t been a real battle and has only fought with animals or during training with Saphira. But his religion is a little different. She sort of invented that there is one holy god that controls all elements and that there are two places you could go when die, these two places are a beautiful place were you live in harmony called heaven and a place for bad evil people who wet there pain for what forced others into.

Personality: Outgoing, more wise than Athura, witty, humorurous, clever. Surprisingly he believe in a religion unlike Athura. Has a good sense in justice like his partner and is slyly sneaky and get across most plains avoided even for his size. A big heart for nature and almost all animals or races.

Colour: A light red rose colour with blue strikes down him and never before seen golden spikes.

Appearance: a 30 foot wing span, an extordinarly long tail for a young dragon bright shiny teeth, over all marvelous.

Armour: (if any) Sapphire colored armor beside the head plate which is Periot.

Dreams for future: To serve his partner in every honorable way and to help him in hard times. Slight hope for a mate.

Reasons for dreams: In his genes and instinct. His connection with Athura and training has a very great share in this though.

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Umm..ok, I guess it's fine.... :|


May 18th, 2006, 11:23 pm Profile
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what are these bios for

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-_- Umm...RPing. You make a character then you write a story using him/her with other people, in the forum Alagaesia Adventures. Do NOT post things without reading what it's about.


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It's way too short, and you could always just edit instead of reposting . . .

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May 20th, 2006, 1:48 pm Profile
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TOO SHORT!!!!!!!

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Umm, Svit-Kona, did you read the right one? Cuz the one I read has 22 lines of history and seven lines of personality...I think tis fine...


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well lets wait for svit konas opinion

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:? :? :? :? :? :? I'm confused..........If you have Eragon as a father and Ayra as a mother....how is the war still going on??? most of the RPs sre based during the war between The empire and the Rebels....(sounded a bit star warsy there.....) so woulden't it be confusing?? just asking.... :? :? :? :? Really i like the idea it's clever it's just im a bit confused there....

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also, you had a little mistake spelling out Eragon...hehe. There is just one flaw that I have noticed in this one. It fits with what Saphira75 said. This is already after the war, but you really arent supposed to plot the future of Alagaesia.


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oh you have a point do i need to change it?? :shock:

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we gotta wait for svit-konas input...

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