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BAD EMAIL  Joined: August 10th, 2006, 10:15 pm Posts: 279 Location: where the side walk ends |
 I Believed YouWhen you said "I love you'
I believed you When you said "I'll always be here" I thought you would But I was wrong and now your gone left me all alone How could you do this Why would you lie I gave everything to you my life, my body, my soul And you threw it to the floor So I sit here pondering and wonder why with the knife in my hand ready to end it "I would die for you" he said The knife plunges in "And I would do the same for you" a poem I just made... _________________ "Strength does not come from physical capsity. It comes from indomitable will." Ghandi 
Which Final Fantasy Character Are You? Final Fantasy |
| May 22nd, 2007, 5:40 pm |
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Cycle Moderator   Joined: June 5th, 2006, 4:56 am Posts: 5409 Location: North of here, south of there Gender: Girl Affiliation: Dragonriders Dragon: Melanthor |
Re: I Believed You I'm not trying to be mean, I thought it was really good. But it reminds me of emo ppl... It's really good though. You could probably publish poems if you felt like it, it's got a dark ring to it like an Edgar Allen Poe poem. AWESOME.
_________________ You are most like SAPHIRA Like the majestic dragon, Saphira, you are brave and ferocious in battle but also deep in ancient wisdom. You think before flying headfirst into battle. You prefer the solitude of the wilderness to the populated cities of Alagaesia. SF Facebook Raven & Oceanis, Tobias & Avalon, Taren, Valora, Liam, Aero, Arston & Arturos, Jason, Lee & Melanthor, Silas, Asa & Naor, Darian, Illuna, Blake, Anastasia, Luka, Rok, Gwen, Ryker There's no such thing as sane, we're all crazy. Well hello Captain Obvious...Nice to meet you, I'm Lieutenant Sarcasm. >:) Something here doesn't make sense. Let's go and poke it with a stick. - The Doctor Amy: You threw the manual in a supernova? Why? Doctor: Because I disagreed with it! Now stop talking to me while I'm cross! |
| May 29th, 2007, 6:24 pm |
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Green Dragon  Joined: July 11th, 2006, 2:35 pm Posts: 8229 Gender: Guy |
Re: I Believed You Pretty good, but could use some more work.
_________________  [URL=http://www.wizards.com/magic/playmagic/whatcolorareyou.asp]Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.[/URL
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| June 4th, 2007, 10:33 pm |
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Master DragonRider   Joined: February 21st, 2007, 11:57 am Posts: 2038 Gender: Girl Affiliation: Vardens |
Re: I Believed You Kewl. Nicely writen. if this forum had a favourites tab i would add it there right now lol.
_________________ Roleplaying Characters :: Eriel & Emrhyst Gryfendel Alcioraell |
| June 5th, 2007, 4:05 am |
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