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Does any one on here write music? i do. if you do, post here id like to read some, i you dont mind. but meanwhile heres some ive written....

Title: Tears

My fingers are growing numb my eyes are teary
my heart aches and you cant hear me. The fire
is burning bright in my eyes, i look and i see
you through the flames and i know nothings ever
gonna be the same.

(chorus)

Because your out there somewhere
without a care. and im lieing here
drowning myself in my tears.

Your using the same mockery
your friends used against me.
Cursing at things you cannot see.
Im losing all my sanity

(chorus)

Im losing sleep because of
you. Im have nightmares
because of you.im seeing
things because of you.

( chorus 2x)

... my friends told me that i sound like amy lee ( from evanescence) when i sing it....

Title: Let me fall

Its just a game that im tired
of playing. The pain is fresh
on my heart nothings the same
now i hate you. No more peace
bringing, i'll run screaming, i
stop believing in love.

(chorus)

It hurts, it bleeds it kills me.
I'll run, ill scream, before i
start believing in you and me
i wont cry this time, i'll be
strong, ive held on for to
long, let me fall.

You left me broken again
so im not giving you another
chance. Im not being nice
this time, im not listening to
all your lies.I know whats on the
inside.
(chorus)

I wanna fall in a dark tunnle
where all the world seices to
be, not more you and me
i just see the pain on me.

(chorus 2x)

lets just say ive a hard break up....... :wink:

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May 17th, 2006, 4:09 am Profile
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very nice. :D i like the feeling that it expresess.


May 17th, 2006, 11:25 am
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I like 'em. I have made up songs on the piano with out words. They are a bit complicated.

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May 17th, 2006, 3:30 pm Profile
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Thanks! :D

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May 17th, 2006, 8:03 pm Profile
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That was good. Better than what i can do. :?

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Here's where I don't go off on one of my "sarcastic sadistic remarks" and become solem.

There was a friend of mine who was killed in a car accident almost a year ago and I wrote a song for her and gave it to her parents.

The coping mechanisim in all of us requires that we get our sorrow out in anyway shape or form. Hopefully non detructive.

In Memory of Heather Paige Herrman September 1, 1987-July 21, 2005

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:cry: that's really sad. if i tried to write a song for a dead friend's parents, it would probably just upset or offend them. :lol:

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i wrote a couple stupid song

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Wow, very deep and from your soul. I too, write songs, most are just poems but all of my inspiration comes from my friends and suroundings it is just a way to let my feelings or opinions about a situation out to them and most of the time it gets to them. Here's one I wrote when my friend was going through a hard time.
Separted
Though no tears stream down my face,
And no tears can be seen
I find myself in agony
With nothing left of me

And now where I've ended up
Is somewhere I don't need to be
I am begining to hate everything I once loved
Is it the truth that set this free?

All I can hear is screaming
who it is I cannot tell
But if I had to guess right now
I'd probably say myself

I've become so good at hiding things
And not knowing who to trust
I keep it all inside of me
All my secrets are full of dust

I don't know how or what to do
But what I do know is that
I don't want to be without you
And if only I could make you see that

Though young we might be
I know what I fell inside
And I don't believe it's even going to change
For you everything I would stride

But because of that my heart is separted
In two completely different parts
everyone keeps telling me to follow it
To do that I would need two completely different hearts

Do I leave you with so much left undone
Or sit here and wait forever
Either way it's not fair
Who can help with my endevour ?

I can't achieve this on myy own
The confused drunkeness has taken over
But I'm afraid no one can help me
Not even the one who's sober

I shall keep on stalling
Until the time shall come
Then I shall take one piece of my separted heart
And from there I shall run home
KLKS

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