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New Peasant  Joined: April 3rd, 2006, 5:20 am Posts: 4 |
 WyrdaRequirements to Submit:
Name: Wyrda Age: 14 Gender: Male Skills: Quick/Agile Race: Elf Hair: Raven Black Eyes: Dark Purple Home Village: Ellesmera Parents: Glenwing/Otho Siblings: Only Child Character Personality: Shy, Affectionate, Calm, Happy, Easy-going, Wise Character History: His mother died a terrible and un-curable disease when he was 7 and his father was murdered by Durza, then he found a Dragon Egg some years later Weapons: An Adurna Dagger and a Brisingr Sword, both with purple hues Likes: Animals, Love, Swimming, Forests, his heroes Eragon and Saphira Dislikes: The Empire Animal Companions: A Racoon named Ragni Character's Physical Description: 5’8, very point ears, high cheek bones, handsome Dreams for the Future: Overthrow the Empire Reason for Dreams: To avenge his father Alignment/side: Good For dragon riders only: Dragon Name: Bjartskular Age: 1 Gender: female Parents: Saphira\Draumr History: Learned to breath fire at a young age Personality: Calm, Brave, Wise, Affectionate Colour: Purple with some Red Appearance: Strong, Intimidating, Beautiful Armour: A magical pendant that obtains magic from an un-known source Dreams for future: What ever dreams Wyrda has Reasons for dreams: She loves him |
| April 3rd, 2006, 5:56 am |
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Wise DragonRider  Joined: February 25th, 2006, 11:30 pm Posts: 1068 Location: Freeburg |
yeah you are going to have to add a lot more
_________________ SHUT YOUR MOUTH WHEN YOUR TALKING TO ME MY RP Charies Ghoum http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=4342 Groudes http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=1439 Ioksok http://www.saphiraforums.com/en/viewtopic.php?f=55&t=991 |
| April 3rd, 2006, 11:58 am |
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Global Moderator...   Joined: November 28th, 2005, 3:44 pm Posts: 10150 Location: England Gender: Girl Affiliation: Surdans Dragon: Llyelia |
Definetly more on personality and history. Have you seen the accepted ones?!
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| April 3rd, 2006, 1:20 pm |
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Wise DragonRider  Joined: February 22nd, 2006, 10:41 pm Posts: 1479 Location: Earth Gender: Guy |
yea its too short take a look at mine fanil kalem and they say i need some more history
_________________ Respect a dragon and it will respect you [url=http://www.pickle-green.com/egraphics/main.php?id=eggs][img] http://www.boomspeed.com/egraphics/91787.gif[/img][/url] http://world3.monstersgame.co.uk/?ac=vid&vid=38038410 [CENTER]  Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.[/CENTER]
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| April 3rd, 2006, 10:10 pm |
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BAD EMAIL Joined: January 26th, 2006, 4:43 am Posts: 594 Location: Ellesmera, Du Weldenvarden . . where else? |
Way too short on everything, and capitilize things. Your anme is over-used but oh well.
_________________ "He touched his fingers to his lips and said, 'Arya Svit-kona,' using the honorific he had just learned for a woman of great wisdom." pg. 163 of Eldest Did anyone miss me? Sorry, I was on a couple-week hiatus. Computer crash. I had to go to the library just to do homework . . . |
| April 3rd, 2006, 10:40 pm |
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RPG Team Head   Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming. Gender: Guy Affiliation: Lamp Shade Dragon: DrAgonPhD |
I agree with Svit-Kona. 4 lines more on Personality and 5 lines more for history. That is, at least.
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| April 13th, 2006, 12:43 am |
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