Name: Olfgar

Age: 45
Gender: Male

Skills: Magic, Crafting, Smithing, combat, hunting, stealth, and thinking with logic.

Race: Dwarf

Hair: brown

Eyes: dark brown

Home Village: Galfni (deep in the Beor Mountains)

Parents: unknown

Siblings: one brother named Hephaestus

Character Personality: funny, likes to fight and isnt afead to use magic, can be cunnning and sneaky, Easy going , he likes cats and other animals, like most dwarfs he is afraid of high spots and doesnt like to ride horses.. He is brave, and loves when he is paid attention to and he loves to collect rare gems like Sapphires, Rubys, Emralds, Amathest, Jade, Diamond, and Onix.

Character History: he grew up in Galfni and his parents where killed when he was a baby so he grew up under Hephaestus(his brother). He had a normal life unitl he found passion in swordsmanship then he found out that he had the abilty to use magic, when this happened he was trained in advanced magic and swordsmanship and one day he was drafted in to war...He fought aginst "Gatterbox's" army. It was a big fight and many died, but he and his brother made it. Then he was sent to the front line in Surda at the Buring Planes. He lost his King and many friends and on that day he seen for the first time a Dragon and a Rider as a matter of ffact he seen two. So then he met another Dwarf called "Orik" and then met the fearless Rider and his bright sapphire blue dragon named "Eragon" and "Saphira". He then met "Nausda" the leader of the Varden. she then sent him out to find other people to help defeat the Empire. he has and still is meeting alot of Powerful people on his quest. He hopes to become even more powerful like "Eragon" is and he refuses to let anything to get in his way.

Weapons: a two-handed battle axe and a short sword and his mind as he knows how to use mage and knows alot of the Ancient Language.

Likes: mead, puzzels, hunting, being where things are happening, and his cat "Misty".

Dislikes:The Empire

Animal Companions: a female cat named "Misty" because you never know when she is around so she is kinda like a mist. They have been traveling together since Olfgar was trained in the skills of magic and he sometimes thinks the cat can tell that danger is around even if they cannot be seen for its eyes turns and bloody red color. Misty sometimes hides in his pack so you never know if she is there unless you check. She is solid Black with Yellow eyes and is about 2 cat years old.

Character's Physical Description: 4" and 3' tall and sure footed and is about 280ponds and keeps his beard well kept.

Dreams for the Future: To become king of the Dwarfs and become the most powerful Dwarf in the world.

Reason for Dreams: He is already powerful but has some rivals and has met some people who are way more powerful then him, so he wants to be the best so no one can stand between him and the Empire's defeat.

Alignment/side: greater good but will take for the evil side if he thinks it will benifit himself toward his goals.

WAAAAY more on everything.

can you please accpt that cause i cant think of any more information to add.

how long does this take i want to get back to RPGing......................

It won't be accepted until you add more. Sorry- it's not my descision.

i can think of nothing else to add, i have messed Olfgar up already trying to make it where you all like it but i got him just like i got him for Dungons & Dragons and i dont want to mess him up more and i cant think of anything else to add.....you all expect too much out of use when some of the people on this site is only 10 or 12!

I wrote waaay bigger things when I was in 3rd grade. Just please understand. We are just trying to help you earn the right to RP. Besides, you shouldent take characters from games, ect. It wont be original that way.

have you ever played Dungens and Dragons? its a RPG!!!!!!!!!!! i created this character when i started playing and i cant and WONT add anything else....and why do i have to earn something that i already had and then you all changed.....this should only be for new members not people who where RPGing here before this section was added.

Chill out lol It's only a way to improve everybody's RPG skills! It's just so people who have a good character can RP, and the others can improve their characters and know what level their writing should be at to be accepted.

well my character is good and i am in the 10th grade and i write all day at school and i dont want to come here to write its almost like doing homework just to have fun playing a role playing game that i use to play. And i think i have enough skills to RPG as i host 5 websites and 2 web forums.

Well then you should be able to use those fantastic skills to get your character accepted.

but the problem is i can not think of anything else to add to this character.....

Think of some of the things that characters did and do from books. Like Eragon. Think about him. Once a farmer, now the hope of alagaesia. Make your character bold, give him a history of somewhat pain of suffering. It is your character, and he can be whoever you want him to be as long as you follow the RP rules.

lat time i checked i am folling the rules and i gave him a history did you even take a relook?

Just add like five more lines to histroy to get it over with. But it's personality that's really stopping it.

that better?

...fine, I'll let you keep that personality. May you please add three more lines of history, then I'll take it.

done

history is still looking a bit short to me . . .

ok i completly change his history and some other stuff now i have a headace please accept this

We can't, only Wing can, sorry.

when will he be back on?

please do not close i am still waiting for glenwing to come back...
HURRY BACK MAN WE MISS YOU! AND WE NEED YOU!!!!

hey man I think ur characters alright but it wouldt hurt to add a little more to history but then ive neaver done this before so i cant talk but it wasnt that interesting to me sorry man

You're right- you can't talk because you're not meant to post in other people's characters unless you are a staff member.

you know you are a rude person.....you been here long enough for a couple post and your attacking people who you dont know. I hope you learn some manners here and please read the rules.

haha accepted

Thankyou and Welcome back glenwing