This is my first RP character. I hope I did this alright.

Name: Odaeus

Age: 27

Gender: Male
Skills: Swordsmanship, some Archery

Race: Human

Hair: Dirty Blond, almost shoulder length
Eyes: Luminous Blue Eyes

Home Village: Yazuac (Before it was ransacked by Urgals)

Parents: Unknown, Adopted by Bodmin, man

Siblings: None

Character Personality: Usually a loner, save for his wolf-friend Sedra. Usually pulled into battles reluctantly onthe side of good,he fights relentlessly and mercilessly. Very vengeful, even though he is technically good. Sometimestreats others disdainfully, but usually .Wanders and drifts around,accompanied by Sedra, and just happens to be in the right place at the right time. Odaeus fought in many of the major battles, and as a result,is very reclusive and taciturnly silent. Anything he has to say is either thououghly considered or his sarcastic humor. Melancholly and sad by himself, he never lets this show in public, and usually responds to taunts and goading either with a hit in the face or with a blank stare and stony expression. His only actual friend is Sedra,
and most others who claim to be one is a liar or has died.

Character History: Abandoned at birth, was taken in by a kind-hearted man by the name of Bodmin. Odaeus leftYazuac at 16 to learn how to wield a blade, and succeeded. The trainers name was kept hidden for Odaeus, and the only thing he knew of his master was that he was an expert in his craft. At the age of 23, as a tradition, he left for the only home he knew to tell his foster father of his quest, only to find Yazuac empty, it's only inhabitants a pileof bodies and many carrion birds. His anguish was hidden away, and Odaeus left, never to return. He went to Daret,
and for reasons unknown even to himself, to Surda. While there, a fight broke out in a tavern, and Odaeus recieveda vicious scar across his chest. He soon left for Farthen Dur, after joining the Varden, and fought with Ajihad's group. After the fighting, he swore to himself to remember the men who died in the battle by dressing in all black, even staininghis sword and shield black. His sadness, already great, was heightened even more by the battle of The Burning Plains,
as some of his very temporary friends were slain. At the end of the battle, Odaeus swore to avenge his dead friends
by the blood of Galbatorix.

Weapons: Long sword, black, and Kite shield, also black

Likes: Solitude, nature in general, and Surdan ale

Dislikes: his history, people (tolerable), and Galbatorix and his soldiers

Animal Companion: Sedra, female wolf, mostly white with a stripe of gray running down her back

Character's Physical Description: Thin, silvery goatee, black trench coat, loose black pants and shirt also black. Slim, but muscular, and always carries his weapons with him. Odaeus' eyes are blue, but seem deep and nearly infinite. His stare can make most men flinch, look away, and seem to even fear him.

Dreams for the future: To kill as many of Galbatorix's men as he can with the Varden, then to be alone.

Reason for Dreams: Galbatorix's hand in his village and master's death and destruction. His want to be alone stems from his fear of ever caring for someone again, and the pain if they were lost.

Alignment/Side: Reluctantly good, until Galbatorix's men show up, then definitely for the Varden.

You have a lot of spelling mistakes, and you need to elaborate on skills. Otherwise, it's fine.