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 Odo Willow Erdone -elf- 
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Post Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
Name:-Odo willow Erdone

Age:-135

Gender:-Male

Skills: magic-swords-archery
Magic:common skill among elves and dragon rides that uses an ancient language to do all kinds of things but drains from the user
Swords:commong fighting style involving swords that takes great technique and finese
Archery:a technique that requires skill and a good eye long range combat

Race:-Elf

Hair:-dark raven color

Eyes:-deep blue

Home Village:-Elesmera

Parents:-Unknown

Siblings:-unknown
Character Personality: At least 12 lines
calm and very laid back with a sense of duty to his fellow elves. Has a small problem relating and talking with dwarves until he gets to meet them due to an unfortunate event several years ealier. his laid back attitude has given him an almost sense of uncaring when he really does care. He usually talks openly with people but talks randomly sometimes. He never reveals his own secrets but has a strange power over others to make them tell him there secrets after only knowing them for a short time. He likes to train and battle and spar but when it comes to killing he is less than hesitant but more than murderous. He enjoys training more than he enjoys killing and going to war. He is very dedicated to the varden cause even though he is lazy and seems to not like to work for it. He would sacrifice anyone for the people he knows including his entire life. He has seen death more times than he can count and caused death more times then he could count as well. He is no longer afraid of battle or hesitant to enter the field of the battle.


Character History: At least 15 lines.
His last memory was of him alone at a young age standing on road. He remembers sitting there alone. Afterwards he went to the mountains south he traveled for a long time 10 years. He arrived in the Beor mountains and was attacked by dwarves and lost part of his ear. He had to kill the dwarves and that scarred him. He was only 53 (young for elvs) when he was forced to kill off all 10 dwarves. He then traveled to the Varden whose leader took him in but shortly after was killed. The next leader of the Varden didnt talk to him much so he tended to the army and trained weaker magicians on how to battle in there minds. They were in battles and he led minor forces that he trained himself. He was trusted as a minor time general in the Vardens forces but didnt do much beacuse of the Vardens lack of soldiers and hope against the empire. He served under a master that was renound but the master was killed by his own daughter. He stopped serving and training for years afterwards because of his depression. Finally Odo stopped and trained and fought again his depression behind him he was able to accept death. He then fought for years to come on the side of the Varden each battle harder than the last. Odo was nearly killed many times but eventually became pretty much only a field tacticain. He also takes part in keeping track of the Varden but in a somewhat boring way like expenses and new recruits. He is a now trusted member of the Varden or at least trusted enough for him to keep track of some things.

Weapons: At least a 2 line description for each weapon, if it isn't plain.
Sword-plain
Bow&arrows-plain
dagger-plain
hunting knife-plain
stone staff-a staff made of stone that can store magical energy
bag of sand-a bag of sand that explode upon collision with other items in a small explosion due to spells placed upon each grain
Kietan-a sword that his master owned this sword has an antimagical ward on it that negates wards placed on other items.

Likes:-Training, making battle plans, teaching, practicing magic, talking

Dislikes:-angy dwarves with weapons, imperials, the empire, battles with no plans

Animal Companions:-owl

Character's Physical Description: At least 5 lines.
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description:tall elf. leather gloves that have been gripping weapons for over a century and have begun to ware down. Long scratched robes that used to be pure white. A long sword that he never parts with past down from his ex master. A bag of sand tied to his waist. A sword hidden on the inside of his robes. Bow hidden in the back of his robes. Arrows in a quiver on his back.

Dreams for the Future:-to become a general in the Varden. See the empire defeated. help the Varden destroy the empire. stop dwarves from attacking random elves.

Reason for Dreams:-always hated the empires rule especially after many of his compainion were killed in battle under his command fighting the empire. Also got attacked by a band of angry dwarves randomly.

Alignment/side:- Good/Varden


Last edited by Odo on October 27th, 2008, 9:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.

October 27th, 2008, 3:14 am Profile
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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
Your personality and history length came close, really close but you need just a few more lines. The writing box is smaller than the length of the post box, it happens quite often so don't worry. Very few spelling mistakes that are easily looked over and grammar is nice.

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October 27th, 2008, 7:25 am Profile
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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
ok is that better?


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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
Good, I'm taking from weapons that he holds two swords or am I wrong?

As for skills are they special or just mediocre? (Plain)

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October 28th, 2008, 9:47 am Profile
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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
the skills are a little better than normal
and yes 2 swords


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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
Alright, now we'll wait and see what the other moderators think about your application.

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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
I'm cool with it.

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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
Thumbs up.


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Post Re: Odo Willow Erdone -elf-
You have two approvals so I can finally Accept this. Congrats!

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