i wanna write a story.. not a 2 page one but like a 400 page one, i want to call it elemental wars and here is the what i have so far.

there are 4 tribes/races (havent decided yet) and each controlls an element, wind,water,fire,earth and there going to war because something happened (havent chosen yet) and only one person could stop the war, his name is ------ (not sure yet) and he has a hidden secret in him (dont know what yet) and with that he can stop the world from being destroyed.

so what do you guys think? no one steal my ideas cus ill file a lawsuit!! i hope this isnt done before or anything because it took me like an hour to think of what it would be about i first thought vampires but thats being overdone and then i thought liek wizards and stuff but thats being overdone also so what do u guys think? if its good ill probaly start in my 3 week vacation and then ill try to get it published!! ive been having high expectations lately haha

Umm yeah that is pretty much the exact same of Avatar

god damn.. avatar!!! never even knew anything of what it was about >_< ok so is there like some kid who has a power to stop the war and stuff? and what is his power? i was thinking like make his power he has all the elements in him but he doesnt know it and he slowly learns about it and some weird guy who can control events and stuff sets him up and forces him into something and bla bla bla or ill go a completly different way

MAN SOME STUPID NO NAME CHINESE SHOW!!!!! well shows and books are different!!! i liked this idea so much.

Then go for it. You got nothing to lose.

Both have a good point. Books and tv shows are different but.......... (reinstate arya-svit-kona's statement here)

He cold make it so only four people could have individual powers, and then they would lead armies.(use lots of sword fighting)

That would be a nice twist to the story. There's a good idea.

Cause technically Avatar wasn't the first thing

I've never heard of a show like avatar but there could be.

i liked the sword idea but id give credit in my book to who ever just posted that, anyones idea will be given credit if i actually do this thing >_<

I'll give credit for just thinking of it and you didn't know what avatar was. I'll give a bucket load of credit if you actually do it.

or it could be like the end of moderen world and there is all this war and corruption, and there is only four survivors, who in the process of trying to escape from terrorist's, and other baddies, get warped to a new world, and in that process they get their abilities.

So many people with good ideas.

ok ok heres my improved idea, ok the tribes or watever still have there elements and stuff and this kid is just born to the most evil tribe, ill say fire because fire seems the most evil, and hes the weakest of his tribe. and then he like slowly learns he can control all these elements THROUGH the use of a sword. so without his sword he is limited to his weak skillz

That is a really good idea but.............it is kind of off of the avatar. it think it s really interusting and i really like fantasy books like this idea so i would read it if you get it published and go through all of that stuff. it is really cool with the 4 nations like the avatar

That's a good revised version.

man like wat? 1 person within every 5000 watches it? its ok man everything gets ripped off of something same way eragon and eldest got ripped off of lotr

or it could be like modern day war and four soldiers get their powers and become super soldiers fighting harder than other soldiers(regular soldiers)
they could use guns, swords, and their own powers

dose anyone pay attention to my ideas

stop arguing over avatar

NO it ruined my plans is it any good?

heck yes it's good, i made it

lol

^^ totally true although i like shadowbane's idea with the soldiers.

Yes it was. Shadowbane with all your ideas you should be the one writing a book.

cuz people will come up with an idea for a book than i'll think of better ways for it but then i cant use it

thats why i feel bad if i write it..

Well good luck with finding time to do it

thanks, man im so stressed tomorrow science exam and its soo hard its like 50 pages material? i know the first 30 or so perfectly but then on its all like graduations and stuff

DUDE Tomorow is a sunday, why would u have a exam.

But if u finish a exam have a note book near by and work on it.

different country man and im not allowed to take anything in with me

its dubai

That stinks well do they let u out early?

yaa its just 2 hours

well after u study u could work on it

Exams on sunday? wow! Do you ever have anytime extra time in your classes? Like when the teacher gets finished or something?

GOOD LUCK! IT'LL BE A GOOD BOOK!

he's not allowed to take anything with him, but if he's let out earlly than he can work on it some

today forsure i dont have time because i have geometry and computer so its 2 exams i needa do them in under 3 hours.. im going to go eat and then study a bit until bus picks me up

good luck with ur testing

i did awsome!! only one proof and the rest was like wat 2 lines intersect at wich point and crap haha

You should take paper in and say it's scratch paper. Then when your done write on it

ill take a copy book i dont they will mind? i want a good opener

What did u say? a copy book, is that like a note book?

lol yaa god european ways are rubbing onto me

oh, cool. I thought u said they wouldent let u take any thing

this exam isnt one of those exams that they kill u

good because you got a book to write, and u cant write it in ur grave.

So how did the exams go to day

i killed english reading lol it was easy as hell today i got social studies so thats easy as hell as well

so did u work on it at all?

in my head.. im thinking of a good starter sentence but i cant.. i want it to start in a war and he gets knocked out and then its like a week later and then it tells what happened

Shouldn't this be in the Fan-fiction area?

The battle was raging all around him. Arrows (or bullets whichever your gonna use) were flying by his ear. A man fell beside him. Whack! Somebody or something had hit him in the back of the head. All he saw was a man fall then darkness enveleped his vision and he was left wondering what would become of him.

You mean something like that?

yes.... dude u write the story K?

just try to brain storm at night when u arent doin home work