Name:Sraine

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Job/Specialty: Hunting

Race: Half Human, Half Elf

Hair: Black hair

Eyes: Blue-Goldish Eyes

Body: Tall, Muscular, fit, light skin, is about 6" tall.

Home Village: Unknown

Parents: Mother was Racel, Father was Marnok

Siblings: Shrin

Character Personality: Very outgoing, likes to make new friends, is very good at toy models, is an extravert, sometimes gets hyper, likes to tease people, loves to read. Can be counted on during a battle. Has a sense of loyalty to friends. sometimes does the wrong thing. Has a strong mind. Is good at acting when needed.

Character History: He was born in The Spine. When he was about 6, his father left him and his Elven mother in the wilderness, while his father ran off with his brother. During his childhood, he lived in the Spine until his mother took him to Ellesmera. His mother told him of his fathers wealth which was hidden in the Spine. She said if he ever needed it, just say his mothers name at the spot he was born at. He made lots of elven friends and they gave him a bird, which he named Haglif. Haglif was like a brother to Sraine, and even has a vast amount of energy which Sraine can use at anytime. He went out to play in the woods one day and he found a white dragon egg. The egg hatched and out came a female dragon, which he named Lcean. He told his mother and showed her Lcean and was taken to Queen Islanzadi. The Queen handed him to Oromis who trained him to use magic and become a Dragon Rider. After he finished that he went to help the Varden defeat Galbatorix. He was sent on a mission to find a rogue Half-Human, Half-Elf which he thought was his brother. It was reported that this person knew the location of a Dragon Egg. The Varden wanted him to capture this rogue. He and Lcean set out to find this person, and has not been heard of since his last message.

Character's good personality traits: Helpful, good at stalking and spying

Character's bad personality traits: prone to give away to his temper

Weapons: White Sword , Elvish Bow, Staff, Knife

Likes: to hunt and to fly with his dragon

Dislikes: having to try new food, to lose his temper and to have to deal with a man who is stupid

Animal Companions: A Female White Dragon named Lcean, a Bird named Haglif

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): Mail armor, Chest plate that has his
Dragon on it, Helmet, gauntlets and leather boots

Dreams for the Future: To find his father and his brother

Reason for Dreams: he was left in the Spine with his mother

Important things character has forgotten: the location of his parents wealth in the Spine

Alignment/side: Good

Dragon Name: Lcean

Age: 7

Gender: Female

Parents: Unknown

History: Was found by Sraine in the Spine, waited a while to hatch. she hatched for him and they were taken to Oromis. They learned alot and left to help the Varden.

Personality: Very protective of her Rider, Helpful, likes to dance

How they met their rider: She met Sraine after he found her egg. He thought it was a birds egg and was going to cook it. She hatched right when he lit the fire. shes been with him ever since.

Colour: White

Appearance: Large, tall, Bright when you look at her in the dead of night.

Armour:None

Dreams for future: To mate with another dragon and to help Sraine find his brother

Reasons for dreams: she is one of the last dragons and Sraine's dreams are very important to her.


Name:Shrin

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Job/Specialty: Cook

Race: Half Human and Half Elf

Hair: brown hair

Eyes:Blue eyes

Body: light skin, able to run well, is fit, about 5 feet tall, is strong, has hawk-like eyes.

Home Village: Unknown

Parents: Mother was Racel, Father was Marnok

Siblings: Sraine

Character Personality: Curious, funloving, helpful, is always happy, likes to fish, is an optimist, loves to sneak up on people to be funny, Is not that stealthy. Can cook up a mean fruit cake. Does not want to fight when it can me avoided, but when he has to, he is like a ferocious Dragon.

Character History: He was born in the Spine. His father took him and ran off, leaving his mother and brother behind. His father took him to Surda where he lived till he was 11. His father died during that time, and he went to live with his father's friend. He was told that he had a brother and that his Grandfather was a Rider. He was given a sword when he was 13. He set out after that to find his brother and to find a Dragon. A friend of his fathers told him his fortune, because that person was a magician. Part of his fortune was that he would find a Dragon egg, and would find his brother in 5 years. Three years later, he found a Dragon Egg. He hoped that this find would be what would complete his journey, and so he spread the word that a Dragon Egg had been found by a Half-Human, Half-Elf. Unfortunently, Instead of his brother finding him, Galbatorix did. He was taken to Uru-Baen, and was helped by Murtagh when he escaped. He was in Uru-baen for 2 years. He went to where he found the egg, took it and ran away to hide.

Character's good personality traits: cooks well, able to defend himself, has a tendancy to be at a place at the right time.

Character's bad personality traits: sometimes runs off to do something and gets lost, likes to eat alot.

Weapons: His Grandfathers green sword, a bow, a knife.

Likes:making food and having fun

Dislikes: having to travel alot, having to obey someone he does not like.

Animal Companions: none

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): A brown tunic, brown pants, cooking supplies, a ring.

Dreams for the Future: having a dragon and finding his brother

Reason for Dreams: His Grandfather was a Rider, He hardly knows his brother since they were separated when he was young.

Important things character has forgotten: His fortune ( like the dragon bones fortune)

Alignment/side: Good



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ok i edited it

More personality please.

added more personality

Swordsmanship isnt a personality trait...and a bit more on history and personality for both, nice long flowing and preferably coherant sentances.

ok edited history and personality

You still need a lot more personality.... and body is kinda vague.

better?

good charaters i like them

Thank you. I think they are good, but I still dont know if they are approved.

Cool its good

yea i dont know why peoples rpg character(s) dont get accepted

Because of the reasons Glenwing says. Usually too short or lack of detail. Most of the time you just need to change it and be patient.

You'll probably want just a tad more history and personality.

Thanks Svit-Kona. Fixed it up and its roarin' to go lol

I believe it is ready for action.

Just wait a second some mod will came soon....

Do NOT post here unless you are a mod please.

I am surprised thsi is still here!!