Chapter 1

“Relax Kat, I don’t bite. Talk to me.” The old man smiled at her.
“Don’t call me Kat. And I don’t want to talk.”
Dr. Ermines sat back in his plush leather chair. Stupid man, she thought. But he didn’t look it outwardly. He had a thick main of gray hair that still hinted to its original color, glasses that constantly slid down his nose, which, incidentally, gave him a thoughtful and rather shrewd appearance, paired with frank, open features that would normally invite one to confide in him. But Katherine did NOT want to confide, and certainly not to him.
“Come on now, don’t be cross. Your family’s paying good money for you to have this therapy. Cant you at least try take advantage of it?”
“ I don’t give a (CENSORED) who paid for me to come here. It’s not my money and it wasn’t my idea. So as far as I’m concerned, all I’m obligated to do is show up. Which I’ve done.” She punctuated these last words with an icy clip.

im in the process of editing out some of the more...er...LURID details. like the scene with anthony and his siter. My teacher said it sounded like they were flirting.....>>

its about a girl whos a multimilionairess(sp) and she gets attacked and raped by some guy and leaves the country. she comes back a year later and thinks the guys gone. but her family hires a body guard, who she falls in love with. and he ends up saving her from the guy who tried to kill her a year ago. but there's a twist at the end...lol

A twist...?
lol, i think the plot's awesome... not flirtatious, a little disturbing... but awesome nonetheless.

sounds like a pretty good plot... now turn it into a story

its already like.....20 pages long. but i had to shorten it to little bursts so it wouldnt intimidate anyone wanting to read it. i dont think anyone wants to read a page long post.

sorry, but im paranoid about that kind of thing. at least on here i can see whos viewing my stuff. and i can put out what i want. im paranoid about people stealing my ideas. plus i dont realy know you that well. apologies.

ok, good. i realy dont know what else to say....

unfortunatley, ive given up on this story. it was going no where, so i had to cut its thread. but i AM writing somthing else now. im already into chapter three!

well i hope you like your new book that your wrighting maby you can post it sometime?