Name: Ithailian
Age: 20
Gender: male
Skills: fletching, smithing,archerey,swordmenship,and crafmenship
Race: human
Hair: long dirtyblonde
Eyes: skyblue
Home Village: Ceunon
Parents: unknown (dead)
Siblings: 2
Character Personality: a dark lonley character who isn't wanted and his only freinds are his two brothers and animal Companions Fethrblaka and Jierda.
Character History: At the age of two his parents were killed by Galbatorix.Eversence he was able to hold a sword he's been ploting to kill Galbatorix.His two brothers Radien and Raithian agreed.as they set out at the age of 15(Ithailian),16(Radien),and 18(Raithian).During there quest Ithailian met Jierda,and Fethrblaka.
Weapons: bow&arrows,his elvensword"Gedwey Wyrda" that glows scarlet when their are urgals nearby
Likes: a blazing fire,peace, a nice song or riddle,a good adventure
Dislikes: everything evil
Animal Companions: white hawk,and a large tiger
Character's Physical Description: strong,swift,smart ,and cunning
Dreams for the Future: That Galbatorix is destroyed and all his evil doings along with him
Reason for Dreams: His parents were killed by Galbatorix
Alignment/side: The one that will accept for him who he is.

what do you think?

No double posting! u still had half an hour left till 24hours lol.

Much longer history and personality, and please put spaces between the characteristics.

also use words instead of numbers, no smilies and longer stuff like shade said. Correct spelling and punctuation is a must as well.