Name: - Eldmun
Age:- 17
Gender: - Male

Skills: Is profiecient in both destructive and healing magic. Has the ability to sprout batlike wings and fly, although his dragon eliminates the need for it, and is immune to poison

Race: - Elven

Hair: - Black with brown specks

Eyes: - Sea Grey
Home Village: - Ilea Feon
Parents: - Orphaned

Siblings: -
Has one sister named Metaneira, older and married to an elven soldier named Delveir.

Character History: The Exact date of Eldmun's birthday is not known, but his sister believes he is seventeen. Since birth, Eldmun has shown a profiency with destructive magic that alarmed Islanzadi. He has been cared for by Rhunon. When he was at the age of twelve, his dragon, Dathur, hatched for him. Rhunon secretely forged a black sword for him. Practiced his swordplay with the best in his region. He easily outclassed them by the age of fourteen. He is deciding wether or not to join the war against Galbatorix and march out with Islanzadi's army. He is a innovative and cunning thinker, already toying around with gunpowder and saltpeter. He joined a group of archers for a while in the Ilea Feon militia. Not liking the inactivity, he quit. He eventually left the safety of Du Weldenvarden. He flew to the plains where the urgals lived, and slaughtered a number of them to satisfy his bloodlust. He is now returned to Du Weldenvarden. Nobody yet knows of his evil deed.

Weapons: A long, curved bow he sung for himself, and his black blade called Hellgrind (with two lls). Carries a nine inch long knife as well. His armor is very heavy. It is made of a black metal, shiny as obsidian, yet not as brittle. He wears a war helmet that resembles a greek hoplon Corinthian Helmet

Likes: - swordplay, war and magic duels.

Dislikes: - peace, calmness, and contendedness

Animal Companions: - none, but a white wolf mysteriously appears every now and then to offer adivce and help in conflict.

Character's Physical Description: Eldmun is a handsome young man. His jaw is curved like other elves. However, he is more human than any elf, and more elf than any human, leading most to believe he is half elf. He has black hair with brown specks, which he occasionally keeps long, but cuts it into a military crop for the most part. He is slender, but more muscular than elves, showing a trace of human heritage.

Dreams for the Future: - Has dreamed of a beautiful woman in his future.

Reason for Dreams: - Angela read his feature when he visited her in Teirm a a blind man.

Alignment/side: - Good, but shows evil qualities

For dragon riders only:
Dragon Name: - Dathur
Age: - 5
Gender:- Male
Parents:- Orphaned in egg stage
History: Dathur was found on the Island of Nia. Transported to Du Weldenvarden. At first, in Kirtan, he picked no one. Then in ellesmera, he could find no one of choice. He moved to Ilea Feon, and picked Eldmun there.
Personality: He is calm, compassionate, but fierce. He is known as Bloodteeth to Urgals. He has saved Eldmun before, and Eldmun has returned the favor. He helps to cool Eldmun's fiery temper. He also breathes a black fire and has an unnaturally strong magical ability.
Colour: - Black
Appearance: He has an angled jaw. He has possesion of sharp and backwards teeth that resemble a python's. In other respects, however, he resembles Thorn, with angled and sharp eyebrows.
Armour: (if any) - A breastplate, shoulderplates, tailplates, backplates, and a helm that has one large spike.
Dreams for future: - Shares Elmund's dreams.
Reasons for dreams: - He ate one of Angela's herbs and he became linked to Eldmun's dreams.


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