Name: Dudukain

Age: unknown, estimated at approximately 89

Gender: Male

Skills: Very fast Runner and an expert on the ancient language, Dudukain wields an ancient dagger of unknown origin with great skill

Race: Ra'zac

Hair(feathers): White

Eyes: Black

Home Village: ?

Parents: Unknown

Siblings: None

Character Personality: Dudukain is an enigmatic Ra'zac who opposes the king and the Varden, meaning both sides hunt him. Dudukain is distrustful of strangers but incredibly loyal once you earn his respect. He almost always tries to hide his true appearence, which marks him as one even stranger than an average Ra'zac is, and also makes him a walking beacon for servants of Galbatorix. Dudukain is confident, but not stupidly so, and is sarcastic and tends to state things in the worst possible way, but has a strange sense of humor. Oh, and don't make him angry, seriously. Things explode. Though he cannot control magic, Dudukain often speaks in the Ancient Language, simply to see what people do. Similarly, he often does things simply to see how people respond.

Character History: Dudukain was born wherever the Ra'zac come from, which is hardly known. He grew up with a strange "something" about him-though no one could percieve what. When he turned the proper age, he was sent into the service of Galbatorix, where that "something" became clear- A conscience. Dudukain barely escaped the pursuing soldiers and hid in the Beor mountains for several years until the hunt stopped. Fighting the gigantic creatures of the mountains was how he recieved most of his combat training, and returned to Uru^baen to seek his vengeance. This time he escaped with a text on the ancient language and a curse-his feathers became the purest white, making it impossible for him to pose as an ordinary Ra'zac ever again. He joined the Varden, but was nearly killed by several of it's higher ranking members who distrusted him. A word of the ancient language allowed him to escape-and alienated him from the Varden. Now with no side, he wanders the world, opposing both the Varden and the king, despising both for their corruption. which was proved even more so when the Varden assigned a elvish tracker named Kalre to attempt to capture him and force him back into the Varden's service. He has not succeeded as of yet but seems to have made it his life's work. Dudukain finds Kalre to be more amusing than anything else, and forces him to flee almost every time. He and Kalre have a strange unspoken truce, and neither of them actually try to kill the other, and they have allied on a few occasions to repulse the empire. He knows that the Varden tend to at least have the right idea, so tends to merely hamper them or force them to retreat. The empire he battles with no mercy. He knows that the Varden tend to at least have the right idea, so tends to merely hamper them or force them to retreat. The empire he battles with no mercy.

Weapons:
White Feather- An incredibly lightweight dagger which glows with faint white light whenever it is drawn. The blade has ridges cut in it that make it appear as if it were a feather-hence the name.
willow bow

Likes: Money, flying, destroying the empire

Dislikes: The Varden, The empereor

Animal Companions: none

Character's Physical Description: about 5 feet tall, Dudukain is a strange birdlike humanoid covered in white feathers, with enormous black eyes on his face. He dresses at almost all times in a long red cloak

Dreams for the Future: A world where a reasonable government free of corruption can rule the land justly.

Reason for Dreams: Believes that the empereor is insane and evil, and thinks that the Varden are corrupt.

Alignment/side: Neutral.

Longer personality and a bit longer history.


Also, seperate the characteristics.

(why doesn't this place have an edit button?)
Name: Dudukain
Age: unknown, estimated at approximately 89
Gender: Male
Skills: Very fast Runner and an expert on the ancient language, Dudukain wields an ancient dagger of unknown origin with great skill
Race: Ra'zac
Hair(feathers): White
Eyes: Black
Home Village: ?
Parents: Unknown
Siblings: None
Character Personality: Dudukain is an enigmatic Ra'zac who opposes the king and the Varden, meaning both sides hunt him. Dudukain is distrustful of strangers but incredibly loyal. He almost always tries to hide his true appearence, which marks him as one even stranger than an average Ra'zac
Character History: Dudukain was born wherever the Ra'zac come from, which is hardly known. He grew up with a strange "something" about him-though no one could percieve what. When he turned the proper age, he was sent into the service of Galbatorix, where that "something" became clear- A conscience. Dudukain barely escaped the pursuing soldiers and hid in the Beor mountains for several years until the hunt stopped. Fighting the gigantic creatures of the mountains was how he recieved most of his combat training, and returned to Uru^baen to seek his vengeance. This time he escaped with a text on the ancient language and a curse-his feathers became the purest white, making it impossible for him to pose as an ordinary Ra'zac ever again. He joined the Varden, but was nearly killed by several of it's higher ranking members who distrusted him. A word of the ancient language allowed him to escape-and alienated him from the Varden. Now with no side, he wanders the world, opposing both the Varden and the king, despising both for their corruption, which was proved even more so when the Varden assigned a elvish tracker named Kalre to attempt to capture him and force him back into the Varden's service. He has not succeeded as of yet but seems to have made it his life's work. Dudukain finds Kalre to be more amusing than anything else, and forces him to flee almost every time. He and Kalre have a strange unspoken truce, and neither of them actually try to kill the other, and they have allied on a few occasions to repulse the empire. He knows that the Varden tend to at least have the right idea, so tends to merely hamper them or force them to retreat. The empire he battles with no mercy.
Weapons:
White Feather- An incredibly lightweight dagger which glows with faint white light whenever it is drawn. The blade has ridges cut in it that make it appear as if it were a feather-hence the name.
willow bow
Likes: Money, flying, destroying the empire
Dislikes: The Varden, The empereor
Animal Companions: none
Character's Physical Description:
-about 5 feet tall
-strange birdlike humanoid covered in white feathers
-enormous black eyes on his face.
-dresses at almost all times in a long red cloak
Dreams for the Future: A world where a reasonable government free of corruption can rule the land justly.
Reason for Dreams: Believes that the empereor is insane and evil, and thinks that the Varden are corrupt.
Alignment/side: Neutral.

something like this?

Sorry, that "guest" would be me.

Edit is in the top right corner of your chat box.

Longer personality, and I say it again: Seperate the characteristics. I can barely read it.

edited.

Now your history got 5 lines smaller.

Make it back to 18 and just a few more lines on personality, and it'll be fine.

I hope his knowledge of the ancient language does not mean he can control magic, as it is clearly stated that Ra'zac cannot do this.

Ah, yes, good point. Maybe if he was part raz'ac part ELF, but I don't think that would ever happen.

Nope, just speaks it. Kinda like how elves speak the ancient language but not all of them can use magic (I think)