Name: - Adam

Age:- unknown.

Gender: -male

Skills: he is a master marksman with a crossbow, he can hit just about any target within reason.
He is very sneaky. he can go undetected in woods but stands out in cities and large towns.
adept spell caster, he can only cast magic that affects the environment around him by moving things and if he casts something for too long he gets migraines instead of getting weak but this can lead him to losing his concentration it works more like very powerful telekinesis than magic also he can't use magic as many know it because the ancient language does not work for him so he has to concentrate extremely hard or he casts like dragons do (spur of the moment).
multi lingual can speak fluently in all languages.

Race: - Orion

Hair: - short blond

Eyes: -blue

Home Village: - unknown

Parents: -unknown

Siblings: -none

Character Personality: he cares how people think of him and will do things to impose a image on people. He can be very reclusive and not very forthcoming about his past. He is fast thinking and is also known to do things on a whim. He plows straight into thing without thinking at times. he can often be found flitting around the edge of historic events and can sometimes be found in the thick of things. he has knowledge of unknown artifacts and he always knows more than he lets on, he likes being a man of mystery and quite often keeps to himself about his past. he is adventurous and bold even when odds are against him. he always has a song on his lips and a smile on his face until someone asks him about his home. but even then his mood will quickly return to how it was after a pause. he prefers the company of elves and dwarfs over that of humans, he also like riddles and physical puzzles. he also likes building complex mechanisms and confusing people with them. he also spends a lot of time looking to the skies watching birds and stars contemplating problems and is often in deep thought.

Character History: he is the last of his race and an outcast who was banished to Alagaesia from another continent. he was first seen just beyond the boer mountains walking across the plains in full armour and with a small dragon like creature. once he arrived he was proven to be a skilled blacksmith and mage unequaled by all but dragonriders. when he has a house in Fathen Dur's outer wall where he lives, as well as being a weapons smith for the varden with some very strange and dangerous gear but only stuff that he feels they are ready for like low powered blasting charges and compact crossbows. all anyone knows for sure is that there is something out to get him and they will never know what, until it is too late and that he only says that his home is very far away across the sea. in recent times he has been trying to call his dragons to him but has been unsuccessful because of a spell that a shade put on him. he has also been exploring deep into DU Weldenvarden and the spine because he believes that there is something of importance hidden in those places. Also he has spent a lot of his time teaching science to the king of surda (i keep forgetting his name). From his accounts of his travels he has met many people to the east and will be leading an exploration out there under orders from Nasuada.

Weapons: katana style star forged steel 1 handed sword, 2 handed star forged steel broadsword, compact crossbow with exploding bolts and star forged steel bolts, blasting charges (gunpowder, magnesium and oxidizer) that can be made to stun or kill and work underwater.
creators note: star forged steel is like the riders swords.

Likes: challenges

Dislikes: being unsporting.

Weakness / Fear: - close combat in large groups because he swings his swords in large arcs and can be quite likely to use fire in combat

Animal Companions: - Rex (fire drake/miniature dragon) Rex is about the size of a large dog and can breath fire and talk through being telepathic. he is light in weight and quite often sits on Adam's shoulder or arm like a falcon might.

Character's Physical Description: Adam is 8 foot tall, quite slim, wears a large brown cloak most of the time as well as olive green cloths with lots of pockets.
Equipment that he has: large rucksack with all sorts of survival gear in it, heavy plate armour, his swords and his forging tools.

Dreams for the Future: - peace and equality

Reason for Dreams: - his past

Alignment/side:the varden

For dragon riders only:
Dragon Name: - drake
Age: -unknown
Gender:-male
Parents:-unknown
siblings:Andra'as
History: drake hatched unlike other dragons due to a war that killed all but himself and his brother, he hatched to a young man called Adam. since then they have travelled together form continent to continent trying to bring peace to the world.
Personality: he has a strong sense of right and wrong as well as a very strong sense of honour. he also comes across as being very grumpy when not around the general or Andra'as.
Colour: - green
Appearance: 500 foot from head to tail when laying out on the ground. He is not an Alagaesian dragon, but as a star dragon his wings are larger than any modern dragons due to his ability to travel through space.
Armour: (if any) – too big for armour
Dreams for future: - peace
Reasons for dreams: - an ancient war between the star dragons and Orions
Weakness / Fear: - confined spaces( cannot go in cities or other settlements)

foot note:

Orions: number alive 1
The true humans were known for their advanced technology and medical science. They were decimated during the war with the star dragons. The last true human sent out gene seeding devices to countless worlds in a hope to revive the universe after the war with the help of the last 2 star dragons. The results varied from planet to planet but they started life on most planets including new races of dragons and humans and in some places the even evolved together.(this is for non cannon RP)

edited drakes personality

added foot notes including race info

the 5 miles is with a rifle
i will tone down the age but this is a character that I have written a book about may be I could say this is in his past, but I would like to say his home world was wiped out 2000 years before the role play and he is not as experienced as in my book and it could be before he lost his eye.

I echo Star Gazer's comments about the proper lengths of the sections.

What I suggest is adapting your character to fit within the world of Alagaesia. The personality doesn't really change, but the history and skills should be realistic within the world of the books. For example, no rifles or starships.

There is much room for creativity within the book's lands and people.

not finished but improved none the less

i have edited it again

As Star mentioned, Personality-12
History-15 lines

Your personality is at 5 lines and history is at 4.

Hello anyone there?
it's all went rather quiet!

ANY ONE ?

thanks, i thorough that the forum had been abandoned

urm I can't post in any RPs

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