OOC: Star's turn i guess?

OOC: yep. I sure hope she replies soon.

OOC: Star, its your turn in the Island Rp, or do you just want to leave it as is it? Also, lets end the thread =P its gettin.... repetive and... boring

IC: The scene the soldiers saw gave Eriel enough time to kill some of them. She was covered in both the soldiers and her own blood, her quiver was empty and her sword, bloodied. Her cloak was tattered and torn, her robes were stained red. The cry that came from the dying soldier alerted the rest of them. They turned around and aimed for Eriel's head. There were too many blades for her to withstand and she found herself with one knee and one foot on the ground and her sword above her head. Emrhyst roared and rushed towards her rider.

OOC: i told you this would happen. someone needs to come up with something new or this RP is going to die.

OOC: Kill my rider! and me, again! Don't save me this time, I'll appear in the vault of souls. XD

OOC: turn this into a rescue mission? i like that idea. and besides, Zantya is still in the VoS. and Leth is still there. so let's do that.

OOC: havent been on for a while im sorry but i've been busy. a rescue mission sounds like a good idea to me.

OOC: Uh-oh... I shouldnt have said that LOL. Ok then, some1 kill my rider and dragon, make it gruesome LOL. hm.... ill give control of my charry to the next person who posts for that post ONLY. =)

OOC: Not THAt gruesome LOL But still... it makes the story livelier. So...

IC: Eriel and Emrhyst, despite being several kilometers away heard each other's screams and roars of pain, as they fell, they smiled and then closed their eyes in submission.

They made their way to the Vault of Souls. When Eriel looked down, she saw her dragon under her, flying happily in what seemed to be a room of stars so bright and of so many different colours. Her dragon looked up at her and roared happily. Eriel remembered this trip, but instead of smiling, she was in pain and extreme sadness. To her relief though, she was pulled out of it before it became too unbearable.

They approuched her father, tears welled in her eyes as she thought of the years she had spent with him, then, she looked down and saw his dragon whom she immediately realised as Emrhyst's mother. Emrhyst let out a roar of joy as she confirmed it. Eriel thought to herself , "So... this is what the after life looks like, I wonder if i can find Vreal here."

OOC: ok, since nobody has posted in a few days, i'll take my turn.

Faefnir suddenly felt a life extinguished, someone very close to him. He broke from the fighting and took flight. His eyes widened as he saw Emrhyst and Eriel lie dead. Faefnir first felt sadness for the loss of one of his closest friends, then he felt anger. He lunged down towards the soldiers from the sky and breathed fire on them. The flame rose in intensity with his anger. He shed several tears until, like every other time he lost his temper, his eyes turned a blood red and he took on a very different appearance. Nothing could be done now.

OOC: Awesome were back! now... who's turn?

ooc: star's, i do believe

Eriel's mind tingled as she felt Star gazer being overwhelmed by an unknown concious. She couldn't do anything though, for she was in the Vault of Souls. Emrhyst roared as she tried to break through a barrier seperating the netherworld and the material one. Eriel reached across the barrier and lent Star Gazer some of her strength to resist whatever was making her do that.

OOC: ok. i'm sure Eriel and the several people in this RPG will understand.

OOC: LOL... You guys have now skipped my turn in.... 2 rpg's in a period of 2 months. WOW. =P Sure idm

IC: Eriel turned and looked at Feafnir. She rubbed her eyes and looked again. Then rushed up to him and put a hand on his scales. She let out a cry of despair as she realised he was dead too. Emrhyst flew over to Feafnir and roared. Eriel looked at him angrily yet calmly said, "You left them." She paused and let the words sink in. "You left them to die!" The last word resonated through the entire vault. Conversations stopped as people and dragons heard this. They murmured, "Well this is a sight, an elf seething with anger and showing it."

OOC: let's try to bring this RP back to life by bringing us back to life. lol

Faefnir reacted quickly to Eriel's statement. No no! Let me explain! It was Star gazer. She... she killed me. She tore off my wing. I knew I was at my end, so I decided that simply giving up will bring her good side back. Letting her kill me would only fuel her bloodlust and maybe would have killed the real Star altogether. I was dead either way. Trust me, I didn't leave them to die. I believe in Star gazer and Reb. They will lead the others and we shall be back in our own bodies. Trust me, it's what had to be done. Now if you'll excuse me, I have a father I must meet. Faefnir slowly and majestically walked away from Eriel and Emrhyst, preparing himself to at last meet his ancestor, the Great Dragon.

Eriel gasped as her body started to heal. She felt herself being drawn into it. Emrhyst looked at Eriel with awe in her eyes. It's Reb. She's the only one who can control fire so well. Eriel looked at Emrhyst quizzically then understood. "Let's help her them then!" They merged their minds, "Waise Heill." She passed over her body's flesh injuries.

OOC: I'll continue the Rp.

IC: Eriel and Emrhyst felt themselves being drawn back into their bodies. For a moment, they saw two things, the Vault of Souls, and Reb healing their wounds. Then everything went black. When they awoke, they found themselves hovering in the air with Reb below them, already about to faint. Rider and dragon started to merge their strength with Reb's in an atempt to restore Feafnir to the world of mortals.

OOC: well, I guess none of the others think they can participate anymore.

Faefnir suddenly panicked as he felt his spiritual self being sucked out of the Vault. He tried to claw away from the force at first. He still had so many questions for his father. Then he heard a voice, one that he somehow recognized. Faefnir, don't fight it. All will be well soon. Go back. They need you, now more than ever. At hearing these words, he simply gave up and let the force take him out of the Vault. He looked at himself fading, his golden scales nearly see-through. Faefnir gently closed his eyes and sighed as he felt his spirit being transferred from the Vault to the world. As he blacked out, his final thought was relief.

Faefnir started breathing slowly and gently. His wings, now fully repaired, hung limply from his back. He moved his front legs a tiny amount, restoring strength back to them. As he slowly opened his eyes back up, the first thing he saw was Star gazer, her face now benevolent and peaceful. Seeing her upon his return to the world caused something inside him. One large, golden tear went down the side of his face. He suddenly leapt up and held onto Star gazer, letting the tears continue to fall.

Eriel quickly ran to Reb with Emrhyst in tow. She shaked her gently then put her hand on her brow. She sighed in relief. "Exhausion and nothing more. She could've killed herself!" Eriel noticed with a jolt. Emrhyst looked at Feafnir and Star and smiled then turned her attention to Reb. I hope she's okay.

OOC: Any ideas for the rp? Or should we end it like the predicted ending in Empire (I believe) That is, we leave Alagaesia by Teirm foreva. We'd be the first rper's in SF to eva finish one. We could add Thorn in as the final battle scene

IC:Eriel sighed with relief, "Okay then, let us leave her be and take turns watching her." Emrhyst snorted, "Galbatorix is as good as dead, Alagaesia is free at last." Eriel looked at her dragon in amusement and sat next to Reb, careful not to touch her.

OOC: NO NO NO NO NO! Galbatorix cannot die, Eragon and Saphira have to kill him. We can't do any of that stuff until we know for certain how the book is going to turn out. I strongly suggest an editing, Eriel. Then I'll take my turn.

OOC: Fine... Be that way rofl. *edited*

OOC: Ok... have we waited long enough yet?

OOC: indeed we have. can we hurry up and come up with some sort of ending?

OOC: I'll PM her...

OOC: Star, you go ahead and control Faefnir. I'm gonna have to go away for several days to California.

Faefnir rushed over to Star and wrapped his neck around hers. " I'm so glad your okay." He said and then unwrapped his neck and then touched noses with her then looked her over to make sure she was really okay.

" I'm so sorry. Please forgive me. I didn't mean to hurt you. I don't know if I can ever forgive myself." Star said sadly.
" Don't worry about it. I don't hold a grudge." He said to her.

Eriel sighed and looked at the carnage around her. The most of the soldiers were dead. The others were wounded. "Let's head for Teirm. I believe our part here is done. Eragon can do the rest." Emrhyst nodded.

Eriel sighed and laughed as they saw several elves and ships all ready to leave. "Looks like we're all going. But... It seems some of them are staying..." Emrhyst looked on and laughed, [i]Lets not care about them. They will leave, eventually." She landed on the shore and smiled.

OOC: Lets wait for i-luv-saphira to come back. He deserves to finish the Rp with us.

OCC: A greed. I stink at playing Faefnir

OOC: Wow, a mod double posted!!

IC:"Wait," Wil said, finally showing himself after the battle. He'd been sulking about it the entire time. He and Kagraign flew back to Gil'ead, one last time. You know what we must do. Kagraign told him. Wil nodded. He hopped off Kagraign and closed his eyes, imagining all the bodies that lay before him. He molded minds with Kagraign. They mumbled something. A bright light filled the entire castle, the entire city. Suddenly, people who were long dead woke up, looking toward the bright futures that lay ahead of them. Soldiers stood up, no longer under Galbatorix' control, and went home to their wives. Wil and Kagraign smiled as they passed the Urgal Chieftian that had allied with them. "You are a noble youngling. Your story will be sung about for years to come in the Urgal camps." the chieftian said. Wil smiled as he and Kagraign passed into the Vault of Souls, ready to rest their weary bodies after the battle. Suddenly, he stopped, staring ahead. His father was standing in front of him, looking at him with admiration. "You have become a hero of this land. Even though you disobeyed me by keeping Kagraign, you have saved all of Alagaesia, and for that, I am proud of you." he said, smiling. A tear slid down Wil's cheek. He knew he would be happy in the afterlife.

OOC:sorry for the long disappearance. I dont think I'll be writing on here much more, unless someone wants to yank me and Kag out of the Vault before we end this?

OOC: ohhh, how honorable of you all and yes, you do s u c k playing Faefnir. Sure, I can yank you out.

Faefnir then noticed Kagraign and Wil. He smiled lightly. No Star, I can do this. As he summoned all of his strength, he lightly breathed on the pair. Fine gold dust seemed to emanate from his nostrils. He mumbled a few words, the smiled as he felt another life suddenly reappear.

ooc: I'm sorry I've been away for a few months
so for those who don't remember who weren't here then I'm cassiopeia i rped in this topic a while back can anyone tell me what's happened since then?

OOC:well, we've almost finished the RP. We're done fighting and, to tell ya the truth, i just got back recently too. I sacrificed Wil and Kag to bring all the soldiers and everyone back to life, then Faefnir brought them back. that's all we have so far. so are we gonna finish this rp or what?

OOC: Indeed we are. I just brought you and Kag back to life. So let Star and Eriel go, then we can do the final round, if that is what everyone wants.

OOC: Oh you guys are just horrid! Your gonna finish the Rp without me? Oo

Shouldn't even have come on to check on you guys....

Eriel laughed lightly as she welcomed Wil back. She stepped onto the ship and held on to a rope as a huge breaker crashed onto it. She spat some salt water out and asked, "Well, you guys coming or..." She looked back and saw several elves boarding the ship. She had a quick conversation with them before turning back to her friends. "The ship will leave soon. Get on before it does." Emrhyst roared sadly as she saw some of her friends remaining on the shore before taking off and circling the ship.

OOC: Let's finish this =P

Wil looked toward the ship. He saw a future on this ship, a place where he and Kag could be free forever from troubles. He looked back and saw all his childhood memories. He saw his mother's face, his father's proud, adoring smile. Wil closed his eyes as he remembered everything. A tear rolled down his cheek. He opened his eyes and looked at all his friends: Kagraign, Lucia, Eriel, Reb, Star, Faefnir, and all the others who'd come to help in this final mission. They were all reminiscing as well. A cocky glare then replaced the tears in his eyes. "Kagraign, Lucia, let's find a new future across the sea!" he said, running up the planks onto the ship. He looked at everyone once again. They had changed as well. Everyone was trying to help on the ship, to make ready to sail across the unknown sea. Wil looked out across the shining blue water. He watched the sun sink into its murky depths. At last, the ship set sail in the pitch black veil of night, never to return.

OOC: sorry guys, i had a burst of inspiration and ended it without another whole round... i think we're finally finished with this RP. sorry to anyone who had other ideas of how to end it. so...what do we do now?

OOC: Well, me and Star still need to conclude this. I'll go first.

Faefnir silently looked at the sea as the white ships departed the shores of Alagaesia. He looked at Emrhyst, Eriel, Reb, Star gazer, and the forever-loyal Stag, the only friend's he had in the entire world. Come you guys. There is still much work that needs done here. Our destiny remains in this world, where there is still much strife and anarchy. Then his eyes took a strange, glazy look. I must go now. Take care my dear friends. Then Faefnir took off and flew into the golden sunset, off to do more deeds worthy of legend. The White Stag started running behind, loyal companion to a mighty hero.

--FINE--

OOC: Bravo everyone! We have completed an RP strain. Give yourselves a round of applause.

OOC: Yay for us!! Anyoe wants to get Fire to make us some siggys to show we've done it?

That would be cool, but... oh, what the heck. Make me a Faefnir picture to put in my sig, Firetongue!

yeah, a sig would be cool, showing that we were the first ever to complete an rp on sf.

Indeed. I feel rather special right now.

OOC: Yeah... Lets boast! *Runs up to louis* "I completed an Rp!" Mmm.... Oh I know, lets make a completed Rps forum! Read only.

Yeah! Star? since your pretty much the RPG mod of this little group, would you do the honors?

OOC:I've been beggin fire to make us siggys on another forum Or... at least i WOULD

I just noticed an Archive section. Should we store our little story in there?

of course we should! it's the first RP strain ever to be completed on SF!

OOC: Yay for us lol. So... I'm already placing them in there, and hold on, I noticed something. a Plan Gone Wrong is the first Rp I EVER participated in, and in it, is my first post!

EDIT: I've posted everything up to the last post of pg 10. NO colour tho.

how can you post if there is no topic?

OOC: Needs mod approval first.

how did you get the siggy Eriel? i want one!

OOC: Err... I Made it myself?

Here's the link, just replace the '@' with '[' and '#' with ']'
@img#http://i1.tinypic.com/4knc9i9.jpg@/img#