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Tommi
Peasant Elder
Joined: July 17th, 2006, 12:51 pm Posts: 146 Location: Iceland
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Stephin
Name:Stephin
Gender:Male
Age:30
Job/Specialty:Smith
Race:Dwarf
Hair:Brown but litle red in it and it is short and ocours he has a long beard
Eyes:Brown
Body:Biger than moste dwarfs and strongly built from fighting Galbatorix’s army
Wepon:A large ax thet he made and a battlehammer thet he got from Moe-ab when he is fighting something thet is close but a Urgal-bow when it is far a way
Siblings:None
Home:Farthen Dûr and Farthen Dûr
Parents:He is orphan but he was raisd by his uncle Moe-ab
Pett:A dog named Askur
Freetime:When he has a free time he practis fighting or hunts in Beora Mountains with help from Aski (his dog) and read.
Personality:Stephin is allways helpfull to ewryone and it dosent meater if he knows the people he is helping, so he has tons of friends. He is often known for kidding all the time, but he can still be serios specily when he is talking about urgals and the Empire. Sance Stephin was a childe he has allways loved adventers and thet is the reason he started hunting. He is whery calm and spends coupls of hours reading in the liberi in Farthen Dûr. Stephin dosent trust people right away like if he woud see a men walking close to the Beora Mountens he woud follow him for coupl of miles first to know if he can be trusted. Stephin has never taked a mission without finshing it, he thinks that if u can fhinis a job u shoud do it. Stephin is realy actyw he allways needs somthing to do. Its not easy to make him angry.
Bed Personality:He is often sarcastic and he kant take a joke about him self (so he dosent tell peopl Jokes about his friends)
Character History:When Stephin was only 2 year old his perants died killd by Urgels. So his uncle Moe-ab took him under his wing and took him from his home city Tarnag and to Farthen Dûr wher he has lived sance then.When Stephin was 6 year old he meat his best friend Tregg but he needed to go Tarnag when they wher 10. Thet same year Moe-ab gave him his 1st wepon, it was a big warhammer thet was with a blade made out of silver. Then when he was 15 year old Farthen Dûr was attakt by urgals thet killd his uncle Moe-ab. Then Stephin had to work as a smith to stay a live. But he still he needit more mony so he whent to Beora Mountains to hunt and then he found out thet he was natural hunter. Thet same year he killd his first Urgal. When he was 18 year old he was hunting when he saw Arya and becous he was in troubl hunting he askd her to help him. So Arya thougt him som magicks to help him. Then later when he was 25 he got a dog thet he named Askur. And when he was 27 the Empire attackt Tarnag. When they had bean fighting for a one day it looked like thet the Dwarfs woud loos but then Farthen Dûr sent rienforcment and they kickd ther a*s. Sance Stephin foght in the war he started to help people like nuts then he mett his 3 best friends: Joephel, Orkin and Úrzar. And ones when they wher hunting to gether but they whent to far from Farthan Dûr and Tarnag thet he couldntget home before whinterso they had to spent the whinter in the mountens. And when he kame back to Farthen Dûr he was 28. Sance the he has bean calmin Farthen Dûr as a Smith, but he still hunts and when he was 29 he cought Nagra.
Likes:Ewryone ho dosent like Galbatorix but like him
Dislikes:The Empire, higts, and Urgals
Physical Description: He wears brown leather pants and a matching brown leather shirt. On his finger is a Silver ring thet is a snake biting his end to keep it to gether. He allways wears a small black boots thet gos under thr pants.
Dreams For Future:Kill Galbatorix and peac in Alagaësia
Reasons for Dreams:Becous if Galbatorix wher died ther wher no wars and then ther woud be peac in Alagaësia, also thet is Galbatorix fould thet so many die in Alagaësia.
The end
Last edited by Tommi on July 20th, 2006, 4:13 pm, edited 9 times in total.
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July 17th, 2006, 9:44 pm |
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Mutagh
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Joined: December 15th, 2005, 8:58 pm Posts: 468
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i like him but you should copy it into windows and spellcheck not that my opinion means much, just some advice
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July 18th, 2006, 2:42 pm |
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Firetongue
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Joined: November 28th, 2005, 3:44 pm Posts: 10150 Location: England
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Please please please don't post in other people's characters.
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July 18th, 2006, 2:52 pm |
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Tommi
Peasant Elder
Joined: July 17th, 2006, 12:51 pm Posts: 146 Location: Iceland
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why hasint no1 kome to see this
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July 18th, 2006, 4:22 pm |
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Firetongue
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Joined: November 28th, 2005, 3:44 pm Posts: 10150 Location: England
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It's only been 1 day. Try to be patient.
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July 18th, 2006, 4:29 pm |
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Shade of Fear
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Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
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The reason I wasnt posting was because: I dont post on them if the history and personality is too short. When you lengthen it up, quite a bit, I'll take a look.
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July 18th, 2006, 4:32 pm |
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Scarecrow
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Joined: July 11th, 2006, 2:35 pm Posts: 8229
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Yeah way too short. Need more history personality. Way more everything. Look on mine, it says Ghansor.
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July 18th, 2006, 4:45 pm |
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Firetongue
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Joined: November 28th, 2005, 3:44 pm Posts: 10150 Location: England
Gender: Girl
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Dragon: Llyelia
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OH MY GOD!!! DOES NOBODY LISTEN? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T POST IN OTHER PEOPLE'S CHARACTER APPLICATIONS!!!
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July 18th, 2006, 5:34 pm |
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Tommi
Peasant Elder
Joined: July 17th, 2006, 12:51 pm Posts: 146 Location: Iceland
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how is that?
P.S. If it is still to litle can u tell me how much more I need to reat
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July 18th, 2006, 7:44 pm |
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Tommi
Peasant Elder
Joined: July 17th, 2006, 12:51 pm Posts: 146 Location: Iceland
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sorry for double posting but I need to get reply
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July 20th, 2006, 12:48 pm |
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Shade of Fear
RPG Team Head
Joined: February 6th, 2006, 11:51 pm Posts: 4527 Location: Dreaming.
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Dragon: DrAgonPhD
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looks fine to me. Just wait for Wing now.
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July 20th, 2006, 6:58 pm |
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Tommi
Peasant Elder
Joined: July 17th, 2006, 12:51 pm Posts: 146 Location: Iceland
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thank you
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July 20th, 2006, 10:42 pm |
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