name: firewave
age: 13
gender: female
job/specialty: dragon groomer for the queen of ellesmera
race: the elves of ellesmera in du weldenvarden
hair: brown and blondish hair color
eyes: brown pecan colored eyes
skills: grooming dragons and battling with friends
body: she is a muscular and thin elf,and she is 5"7
home village: ellesmera
personality: has a nice and determined personality
history: Firewave was raised by her grandfather,who was killed by a group of urgals while going to the varden with her.She was left all alone in the hadarac desert.Then two days later an elf named dukrin passed by her while going to the varden.He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw a girl lying half dead in the sand.He brought her back to ellesmera where she was healed and adopted by one of the queens servants,jarden.She was raised and taught how to become the queens best dragon groomer.As of today she is still trying to become one of the varden to help destroy king galbotorix.
weapons: a sword and pocket knife
likes: dragons and elves of any kind
dislikes: she hates the empire and king galbotorix
companion: Thane her dragon companion she met 3 years ago
side: she is against the empire and on the elves side

dragon
gender: male
name: thane
age: 3 years
history: dropped from the sky when his mother was attacked by the razaac.when an elf walked by and tripped on the egg.it rolled right into her arms.it was a white dragon egg with grey streaks across it.the elf brought it to thequeen the next day.the queen told her to keep the egg with her for the next week or so.if it has hatched for you,you will be free to do what you choose with the dragon.if not bring it back here and we will try someone else.that night the elf,as we call firewave,woke with a startle to a chirping sound.she looked up at the window.not a bird in sight.she looked at the floor.no birds were there.nothing.she heard it again.she turned towards the sound and found out it was the egg.it had a long crack in it.she picked up the egg very silently.it wiggled in her arms a few times.then another squeek.it started to crack open and a few minutes later,alittle head popped out.it cried with joy to be free from the small compartment.it hopped out onto firewaves arms.firewave cried at the sight of the dragon.
the next week she brought a round ball made of clothes.she removed the blankets and showed the queen a beautiful white and grey dragon!thats when they became the dragon groomers for the queen,although she wasnt going to tell the queen she was wanting to go to the varden.thane now is 12 feet tall and weighs 560 pounds.everybody they pass stares in aww at the beautiful dragon.
color: white and grey
dreams: he wants to become the best dragon ever

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