I drew my sword, as did John. He also pulled out a small metal circle and layed it in front of him. I waited for him to attack. He didnt move. I took a step forward. As did he. I spread my legs apart somewhat. He watched uncomprehending. I thrust my hand downward. the groung split under his feet. He jumped back.
"What in the world was that? We are suposed to be sword fighting not fighting on power!" He complained.
" Well I changed my mind." I countered.
" I do not want you to get hurt like last time. Your side has barely healed." He said In a worried tone. I looked at the scar on my side. It had happened the last time we fought.
" It will not happen again, trust me." I said. He still looked unsure. I threw a wall of fire rushing at him. He jumped out of the way.
" Dam it I am not letting you do this to your self!" He said.
" Just fight. I will not be as careless as last time." I yelled. Reluctantly he put his hand on the metal cirlcle in front of him. It split into three blades. He thrust his hand forward. The blades surged at me. I pulled my hand upward. They became stuck in a wall of ice. I called on my dragon. Her black body landing by me. Star Gazer let loose a roar so mighty it shook the ground. I jumped on her. She launched herself into the air. John crouched on the ground, the backdraft from her wings almost blew him away. She climbed higher and higher. I stopped her a hundred feet over the battle field. I sat side saddle. I took a deep breath and slid out of the saddle. I fell, and picked up speed. I began to turn. My eyes clouded over. The air around me cycloned. I stopped spinning. The air around me kept going and picked up speed.I touched the ground. I released the cyclone. I ran a course straight for John. It took to much strength. I had to let it go right before it reached him. He pulled back his blades. I was panting. He realesed them. One hit my knee. I fell. The second one hit me in the shoulder, and the last one missed me. John shook his head and walked away. I stood. My wounds instantly healed. " Get back here we are not yet through." I yelled

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Thats really really great!!! I like to write too. I just started on this website today so I missed the first of the story but I like it. How long is Deception? (I think thats the title)How many parts?


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Thats really really great!!! I like to write too. I just started on this website today so I missed the first of the story but I like it. How long is Deception? (I think thats the title)How many parts?


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its three parts or three books, I love to write too and welcome to the site. I think u will have a great time, My name is Rebekah

Hi Rebekuh. My name is Alora. So did you think up the name Star Gazer befor joining or after? Its cool. How old are you? I'm 13.

Hi Rebekuh. My name is Alora. So did you think up the name Star Gazer befor joining or after? Its cool. How old are you? I'm 13.

im thirteen also and Star Gazer is a character. please dont double post

Sorry. I didn't mean to.

its k I just didnt want u to get into trouble with the mods

You prob didnt, but that right there is spam lol.

I'm still trying to get the hang of everything.

well done rebekuh! great story...even though I haven't read the rest of deception...its really good ...hehe I'm 13 too

thanx and the correct spelling is rebekah

ya,this is a really good story