[color=#0040FF]Name: - Anaron

Age:-700

Gender: - male

Skills: Swordsmanship- Anaron moves swiftly with a blade and his blows are fatal. He moves quickly and if one ever gets into a swordfight with him, they are luck if they live to tell the tale!

Fire: He can create almost anything with fire. A thick fog, orbs and even a rain of fire over whomever he is in battle with.

Race: -Shade

Hair: - Dark Blue

Eyes: - Burnt Orange

Home Village: - Unknown

Parents: - Aurora and Danar

Siblings: - Solreima

Character Personality: Anaron is still sensitive even though he is a shade. Almost every night the evil souls in his body began to put up a fight. This cuases him to throw up and convulse. They taunt him and inflict physical pain on him. They cut his skin and tear at his hair but somehow he puts the mat rest for at least a night or to and then they begin again. Every now and then, he would shed a tear when he thinka about Kate. at night he would sneak out of his barracks and take long walks just to clear his mind. He struggles to keep most of his hatred and turmoil supressed. Even if he is sent to burn down an entire village he would at least let some people escape. It seems as if he could see someone's soul with just one glance. Anytime he is given and order he always puts up a fight. He is strong willed, brave and yet very depressed. Many times he would go into hiding and just lay in the forest. Murdering, stealing and looting bothers him to the core. If he had the chance to die this instant he would. No matter what he is doing, he thinks of Kate. Many times he gets flashbacks of the day she died and he feels terrible about it. When he thinks about it for too long, the hair on the back of his neck stands up and he feel nauseos. Anaron blames himself for her death and visits her grave site whenever his is in that vicinity.

Character History: At the age of sixteen, Anaron fell in love with a young girl from the village named Kate. Every day they would meet unter a large tree just outside of the main town. One day while going up to meet her, to large men ran past him and he heard Kate screaming. he ran as fast as his legs could take him only to see kate lying in a pool of blood and her jewelry gone. He sat next to her with tears in his eyes and held her hand until she breathed no more. From then on Anaron became withdrawn and cold. One day he could not take the emptiness in his heart any longer, so he meddled in dark magic hoping that he may find a spell to bring Kate back to life. He joined forces with dark magicians and sank deeper and deeper into darkness. They decided that he would be the perfect candidate to become a shade. All of the magicians baned together and turned Anaron into a shade. He turned fully into a shade and went insane with all of the corruption and turmoil he felt from all of the demons that entered his body and he killed all of the wizards and fled from the scene. He lived for hundreds of years later alone in the Hardarac until one day he was recruited by Galbatorix. The evil king leaned Anaron's true name and now he is under Galbatorix's command. Many times when he is sent with a few soldiers to to Galbatorix's work, he will slay them all and run away. Somehow, he always has to return and recive whichever penalty he deserves. Though he travels around Alagaseia, doing Galbatorix's bidding, he still searches for a way to bring Kate back. There is only one person that he talks to and that is Genesei. She is adragonrider but somehow he trusts her. He met her one day in the forest and she was about to kill him and she looked directly into his eyes and realised that he was not truly evil.From then on they maintained a nuetral relationship and she helps him to cope with whatever problems he has.

Weapons: A plain sword, a spear and a spiked club.

Likes: -darkness, solitude, beer.

Dislikes: -Sunlight, elves, dragonriders, theives.

Animal Companions: -none

Character's Physical Description: Anaron is about six feet tall and stands slightly hunched over. His hair is long to his waist and it compliments the colour of his eyes. His skin is very pale and on his left palm is a tatoo of a skull. His nails are long and very sharp. His clothing is made of worn black leather and he wears a long black cloak over it. If you look at his face long enough, you can still see the young boy beneath all of the evil and hatred. From time to time his eyes change from the burnt orange back to its natural brown as a sign that he is fighting off the evil spirits, but it does not stay that way for long. His skin is very pale and in his face and neck and hands, his veins are very visable. When he is using his fire power, his eyes get red for a few moments and so does his hair. On his forearms are two , long vertical scars he got from the night he was amde into a shade, because the wizards that made him were to cowardice to use their own blood in the sacrifice, so they used his.

Dreams for the Future: - One day he can bring Kate back to life

Reason for Dreams: - He lost her before they could even be married

Alignment/side: - Nuetral[/col[/col[/color]

Your a few lines of personality off, you need 12, I only count 8.
Just fix that and you should be set.

12 lines or sentences?

umm i edited it ( fingers crossed )

thanks

Alright, looks good to go. Accepted.

thanks everyone