Name: Enoch

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Skills: gains the skills of four elements from various creatures, very fast

Race: human

Hair: blond

Eyes: blue, but very depending on which angle you view, light blue up front, dark blue on the profile

Home Village: you can't really call a place a home when you're dumped off in the Hadarac Desert

Parents: both dead, he doesn't know...and neither will we

Siblings: as far as he knows none

Character Personality:understands an old phrase "Pride comes before a fall" lives by this. Always takes critisim construtively and learns from every mistake. (never go from one house to the other without looking at all angles and armed with a sword), a human scroll, can recite prophecies most old people would have a hard time knowing, loves to learn, loyal to a BIG fault, weighs all odds before making a decision (and can do it fast), humble, very distrusting of anyone, doesn't forgive easily, cannot let go of the past and fears it, does not want to become what others want him to.

Character History: Longer history-changling child found in the Hadarac desert. Age 17 is abducted and taken by urgals; tortured, maimed, and a slave for two months. Near Gil'ead the urgals are attacked and killed, Enoch is near death, but the lone survivor. Lives with Anya and her twin Ana(possessed woman) for five months helping around the house. Nightmares from his torture keep him up at night and the wound on his left elbow reopens every night. Humanistic war fanatic Murrow, is intrigued by him and befriends him. Enoch is launched into a program and finds an "anti Galbatorix's rule" boy called Travis and Murrow is trying to extract the information from Enoch about the whereabouts of yet another "anti Galbatorix's rule" and tries to seduce Enoch, but the legendary Stormwarning interferes via "electrictiy." After this, Enoch frees Travis and flees. On the way he encounters a strange "earth elemental" (a werefox) who shelters the boys. Stormwarning reveals himself and takes Travis to saftey leaving Enoch in the care of the werefox. After his training in earth is complete he has to find the other elementals and learn each of the ways of: light, dark, air, fire, water, thunder, and snow.

Weapons: powerful wit and the luck of the magic of fire, air, water, and earth

Likes: not having to run for his life and learning new things

Dislikes: old possessed women

Animal Companions: Stormwarning, who's powerful and older than Galbatorix being. A giant cat with a wolf head.

Character's Physical Description: 6'2" with short blond hair, lean fit body, (you would need it if you were running for your life) a scar on his right elbow.

Dreams for the Future: to live a normal life, and to aspire to be more than he aspires to be now

Reason for Dreams: if you were dragged out of your home by Urgals and then had to spent time with a possessed woman you'd want to be normal

Alignment/side: the good guys, Galbatorix is just too facist

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY Longer history and personality, and Stormwarning is a bit god-moddy, just make it powerful. Not ULTRA.

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Please just edit your first post

i didnt think that was possible

Please dont post if you arent a staff member.

what do you think shade?

Hmmmm, the history could be a bit longer, but I think its exactly on the line of acceptable.

I like it u should check out mineLOL

dont...post...in...other...peoples...topics...next time someone does it, im giving a warning