1-lol removed, again
2- Dragonrider? Its too cliche, most people do that so their character cant die, it kinda sucks for the rest of the players. Im not tryin to insult you thogh, im just suggesting

I have just deleted bd's post, please note i never wrote that and i would never do that.
If you see any post that says edit by louis or the name of any of the other moderator and they are saying bads things, please report it by pressing the blue box that appears next to the post.

so thats wat thats for, so wats your character louis?

I will take your suggestion into consideration. Thanks.

sorry if i was mean, its just what i was thinkin

Name: Úlantir
Age: 18
Race: DragonRider
Height: 5" 6'
Discription: Brown hair, brown eyes, lean and fit
Dragon: Óthor
Weapons & Armour: Sword, sheild, dagger, Bow + Arrow
Sword Name: Mithrim

Magic: Can manipulate objects
Familiar: Wildcat called Arenor

tut tut another one, you dissapoint me Anna

*Note to all- Don't edit my posts.* lol

I like your character Anna.

name:melina
nick:mel or ellie
height:5.7
weight:48.5kg
discription:light, long, brown hair, sea blue eyes, am not fat, not a round face!
I can see the future and past
familiar:very mean cat called Ellizibeth.

its a dragonrider, that is always not gonny b good. I hate RPs with dragonriders in them, it makes it too easy for the riders to survive and basically godmod

hey louis, or jesseB or whoever edited my post, i can be mean to her if i want she is my sister. And we arent all new to Rps iv been doin them for i whil so there

Warning to all: leave my posts!!!

thats not wat u told me about his character anna, plus u spend half an hour on rather poor posts, so u are a bgginer

u guys r like me n my bro! lol

*rolls eyes*
And I have to out up with this every day... Louis, Or JesseB, who ever it was, can you edit it again? 'Cos he edited it back, y'see.

Oh and thnx JesseB I like you character too. [/quote]

I edited the post to make a warning for all of us.

Is that a bad thing?

see, louis is kool. Whats wrong with bein like him huh?

Age: female

Gender: 18

Job/Specialty: wander, mostly to fulfill her dreams

Race: human

Hair: long brown all one lenght

Eyes: bright blue

Body: slim, but hard, darkly tanned

Home Village: small village in the spine

Parents: unknown

Siblings:unknown

Character Personality: can be on the shy side at times, nomarlly quite friendly, is a very deep thinker, loves horses and animals, likes to stay in the woods

Character History: lived with a kind witch most of her life

Character's good personality traits: is good with animals

Character's bad personality traits: not so good with people

Weapons: carries a small sword at her side, and a small dagger by her shoe

Likes: amimals, sunsets, the woods, nature

Dislikes: most people

Animal Companions: a huge, beatiful, soid black horse (mare), named storm

Character's Physical Description (clothes, accessories, etc.): wears a small fitted dark blue shirt, with black fitted pants sword at her side, and small brown riding boots

Dreams for the Future: to find a family and retrace her past

Reason for Dreams: to feel loved

Important things character has forgotten: what really matters is not where you come from (parnets) but it is who you really are and how you live out your life

Name: Vali Blackstone

Age: 17

Race: Werecat

Gender: female

Physical Description: When she is in cat form, Vali is slender, with medium-length, black, sleek fur. Her sharp eyes are bright orange, endless chasms. She’s nearly two feet in length, and almost a foot and a half from ground to the shoulder. When in human form, Vali is over five feet 7 inches. Her form is small and slender, but many men would consider her attractive. She wears only comfortable clothes, but other than that, she isn’t very picky. She has never worn a dress before. Ever. Her blazing orange eyes match those she has in cat form. Her pupils are just the same. Black, shoulder-length, wavy hair frames her pale face.

Job: Vali is a fighter for the Varden. She normally is found lurking in Tronjheim, and is always ready to do her duty. She is a wonderful fighter, and she also fights brilliantly in cat form.

Weapons: Vali normally carries an elegant, slightly curved long sword. The pale blade is carved with runes of the ancient language. Where she got the sword is unknown. The hilt is covered with black leather.

Personality: Vali prefers to work alone, and is rarely found in the company of others. She is hardly ever intimidated, even if all other people would be. If she ever angers, which is rare, she is quick to dispose of it and forgive who ever angered her. She is harsh sometimes, but only if she is bothered when she would rather be left alone. She likes reading and practicing her fighting skills. She is also often found drawing and writing.

Bad Traits: Sometimes, and always involuntarily, Vali thinks of herself to much. This is a trait she is always trying to change, but she is finding it hard. She is always imagining scenes in which she is better than others, and she hates it when she does that.

Weaknesses: Vali is afraid of pain. It is a strange thing to be afraid of when you are a fighter, but that is why she trains constantly to become better. Other than that, she isn’t afraid of much else.

History: Vali’s parents and beginnings are unknown,. Not even Vali herself will reveal them, if she knows anything of them. Vali has spent most of her life wandering from place to place, and fighting for the Varden. When she was five, she befriended the elves, and is a trusted friend of them. She learned how to fight from the elves. She was taught by their best fighters. When Vali was ten, she started learning about herbs and their medicinal qualities. She is still learning about herb lore now, as it is a broad subject. She received a scar from one of her opponents when she was 16. The scar runs across her stomach.

Other Facts: Vali is fascinated with fire. The only magic she can perform and that of summoning the essence of fire. She has complete control over any and all fire. She hardly uses this ability and has never told anyone of it.

Name: Carrie
Race: Human
Physical Description: Carrie is short, only 5 ft tall and 2 inces. She has curtly sandy blond hair that reaches past her broad (for a girl) sholders. She is a strong developing yong lady.
Age:14
Home: Her home will always be Yazuac, even after the Urgals raided it, but now she is a traveling nomad.
Personality: Depsite her hight and age, Carrie is a sturborn young hard working girl. She is short tempered and often staps yet will never be goaded by anyone bigger or stronger than her.
History:Carries family never had very much money, even before she was born. Her father had always lived on the small farm at the egde of Yazuac. Unfortunately the Empire was constantly leaching money from the poor farmer, like many other familys. The small family's only hope for more help on the farm were sons. Lisa (the Carrie's mother) gave birth to 4 children: the 1st a son, the 2nd a daughter, the 3rd a daughter (Little carrie) and the 4th last depserate attempt was a son. Lisa had gotton the son she had hoped for, but died giving birth to him. Carrie helped hunt and farm w/ her father and brother (since the baby was too young) while her older sister cared 4 the baby, cleaned, and cooked. Then Yazuac was raided by Urgals. Her family tried to hide, but all were found except her, her sent sheilded by the near by cows. Carrie was forced to watch her family get slattured, and dragged into a large pile, her baby brother topping it. Forever wounded by her family's death, Carried fled the city a lone traveler in a big world.

Name: Xa'kull

Race: Urgal

Gender: Male

Physical Description: Powerful limbs with thick black horns. Dark hollow brown eyes and sharp 2 inch yellowed teeth. Around 9 feet tall. Wears leather kilt and chest belt and sword belt with a sword and sheath attached. Has thick fingerless gloves, and bronze forearm and shin guards with a matching breastplate. Has many thick scars, a sign of a successful and formidible warrior.

Work: An Urgal Rider, who is the only urgal rider, works to keep peace between urgals and other species. Always trying to make the misunderstood urgals be unhated and despised by everbody.

Enemies: A shade, Galbotorix, many urgal haters, and many elves.

Dragon: An adult emerald coloured dragon with Glittering grass green scales.

Weapons: A tough long curved silver blade, broad enough to break through armour, but thin enough to slide though a pair of rib-bones. Has a metal sheath with green precious stones embedded in a black strip of leather down the middle of the sheath.

Weaknesses: As an urgal, Xa'kull is afraid of nothing, not even death, except for one thing. That is to see his dragon suffer or even worse, die.

Skills: High sword ability and colossal phisical strength. Fluent in the ancient language and a powerful and experienced magic user.

Sword: Gan'zil

History: Had a fight against a proud elf rider who would refuse to believe that urgals were trustworthy and was forced to kill the rider, and therefore the dragon. Anounced in public that if he will ever have a chance to kill Galbotorix, he would not let that chance slip.

OOC: I hope it's not overpowered: its the only evil character i could think of that's not ridiculously weak or strong

IC: Name: Dal'thazax
Race: Shade
Gender: ? (for the sake of Simplicity I will refer to Dal'thazax as him)
Physical Description: Tall at around 6 foot 6. Deep red eyes and hair. Long pointed teeth. Fairly slim but much stronger than he appears. Wears dark leather armour with reinforced areas on the left of the chest. Carries a long, thin sabre.
Work: 'Purveyor' of powerful magical artifacts in a quest to become stronger than Galbatorix and any other creature in the world.
Friends: None but the spirits which control him.
Enemies: Many but mainly Galbatorix and all powerful leaders.
Weapons: A long, unnaturaly sharp rapier encanted with countless spells built up over the millenia with each new owner adding his own. The swords name is Dra'zarn (pain). He is also a proficient user of magic.
Strengths: Unnaturally strong and fast, an expert at killing oponents with one, well aimed blow. He is also profecient and magic and very hard to kill.
Weaknesses: Can be killed with a thrust through the heart. Often behaves erratically as different spirits fght for control of him.
History: Dal'thazax was an elven sorcerer who was driven by an uncharacteristic lust for power and knowledge. Upon attempting a particularly difficult spell to manipulate the land and create mountains evil spirits seized control of him. He proceeded to destroy the village nearby.

Since then he has constantly been trying to increase his power by capturing a numbr of powerful magical objects. His first discovery was the sword Dra'zarn which he discovered in a tomb of an elven king. He posseses a number of other objects which help to increase his power. His ultimate dream is to replace Galbatorix and rule the world. (ooc: cue evil laugh:mwhahahhahahahahahahahaha)

Name: Zarec'tekesh
Race:Urgal(Kull)
Decription: Deep brown, almost black hair, reaching down the mid-back. Respectable 8'2. Large black horns with shiny silver streaks running through the middle, two large emeralds set perfectly 3 inches above the base of each one (not done by Urgal hands). Flawless and scarless flesh. Glowing green eyes, that somehow dont glow in the dark. Two pearl white fangs protruding from the lower jaw, visible even when mouth is closed. Strong limbs, wearing only light mail and leather robes.

Equiptment: On the left arm a large spanse of white fur goes up the entire arm attaching to a bronze gaurd on the shoulder that attaches to the rest of the armor. Under the furs very strong chain link armor, and at the end protrude 4 enormous claws from a giant bear of the Beors, a necklace of its fangs around the neck. On his back there is a large stave like weapon, 5 ft long, carved of pure ivory, with a dragons head at the tip of it made of emerald. At the bottom of the stave it widens forming a wicked blade.

Home:A semi-sized urgal settlement at the very northmost part of The Spine.

History: At a young age it was shown that he had a natural talent with the ancient language that was only enhanced by the fact that the old blood flowed strongly through his veins. At a young age he was taken away to study at the Urgal high temple as a shaman. He studied there for a decade, learning to manipulate the stones and winds, the lightning and fire under the head shaman. When he turned 15 he was sent to The Beors on a quest to find further enlightenment. After many long weeks and months of travel, he found the Ancient Urgal temple, but he was not alone. After rescuing a dwarf hermit, who happned to be able to implant Ascudgamln or "fists of steel" from one of the great bears of the Beors, the dwarf agreed to implant two precious stones into the shamans horns. Inside the temple he found many ancient Urgal treasures, wich he gladly shred with his companion, save for one item, The ancient blade of the last urgal rider, or Shen'Suicheb as it was named, wich has not left his sidesince that time. Now he is on a ceaseless quest to save his people from the clutches of the evil empire, and make the Urgal once more a respected race

Totem Spirit: After defeating the great bear, its spirit reamained, to help guide the young shaman on his path to glory.

Ok, since I'm still kinda lost here in the character and the whole PPG thing.... this post will most likely have hundreds of errors, specially my kinda selfish thingy (later you will see)

Name: Girmith Kráuks
Race: Dragon (told ya!/ Totally killable, I repeat, totally killable!)
Description: 6m from snout to tailtip, wingspan 12m, height 2m. Black scales on the back, upper jaw, wing cover, legs, feet, arms, hands and tail. Red scales on lower jaw, inner wings, belly inside part of the legs, and base of the tail. Red eyes. Has two big backward facing spikes that grow from the "eyebrows". Two rows of spikes fun from the base of his neck down to the end of his tail, the spikes grow larger on the back between the wings and then go smaller. A whole bunch of spikes starting jist behind the eyes and on the forehead, and ending at the begining of his neck (like hair, only that sharp and rigid). one sole spike on each knee, on each elbow and a larger one on a shoulder. Tail tip has spines similar to the "hair" spines.
Equipment: A platinum colored dragon armour, onle the helmet, chest, legs and back are armoured, tail, arms, neck and wings aren't protected.
Home: Kinda nomad but likes to stay around the Spine(s) (don´t really know the name, since I have the spanish version, the name would be "Las Vertebradas")
Personality: Serious, and usually quiet. He sufers because of his mistakes in the past, ones he hopes to ammend. Doesn't really care about the Vardans and the Empire, but kinda likes the whole rebell/empire thing and is sympathized by the rebells (no, he didn't see Star Wars).
Family: He´s a dragon, what familly does he need?
Friends: One baby Gryphon... Jaodme
Enemies: Gryus the Wyvern.
Weakness: He is traumatized because of not having a rider, usually goes berzerk when reminded.
Magic power: (besides fire breath) Kewoñ: A dark beam from his mouth....
History:
When darkness aproaches only a few can withstand their own fear...
Girmith was a dragon egg in Galbatorix's bunch, but as many others refused to hatch. The kings dark deeds perturbed him more and more. He felt madness slither into him. He belowed and hatched, giving anyone close a might strike with his tail. he stayed hidden for days on end, eating whatever he found, growing, and learning. When his body gained the capability to fly he fled and ended up in the Spine(s)... hoping never to be found. Galbatorix didn't give up easily, Girmth had to move away from many dwellings, until it was impossible for the evil king to get to him. He then met Gryus, when the foul beast was feasting on a Gryphon's carcass. Girmith scared Gryus away and looked around in the nest, only to find the baby Jaodme. Together they lived for some time in a cave in the Spine(s)... fending off Gryus.....until now...

name:Raign
Hair:Black
eyes:Green
Tall Fairly muscular He is a human but has questionable characteristics of an elf. He has been racked with torture and even burned extensivley so that his skin is black by the Urgals. He has met and been attacked and tortured by many shades none of which where Durza. He uses a staff and can use magic because he is a wizard. because he has been burned and tortured so much He wares rags and bandages to hide his face. He was born and raised in yazuac but left with the traders before it was attacked by urgals. and now wishes to destroy the Urgals especially those who destroyed his face.

im just a new girl and i need HELP!!!!!! can somebody plz help me??

Name:Oomar
Age: 25
Race:Elf DR
Height: 6' 5"
Description: Orange/Black Hair. Red Eyes. Lean and Muscular.
Dragon: Fundor
Equip: Sword by Elves, Shield, Bow and arrows by Elves.
Magic: Ancient Language! Duh!
Familiar: a Werecat.

Name: Caelsca
Gender: Female
Title: Lady Caelsca of Neverwinter, land of the Wood Elves. Elven Warrior of Kurahst tribe. Knight is the realm of Tortall. Dragoness of the Wood.
Race: Dragoness( basically elven rider)
Appearance: Long brown/ golden hair, almost to waist when down, held up in pony tail most of the time. Slender. Short. Deep brown eyes. Full red lips. Tan skin. Tapered ears.
Armor: Green Chain mail, knee high leather tan boots. Slick brown pants. Light green Shirt.
Casual clothes: Baggy green shirt. Brown pants. Knee high boots.
Weaponry: Short green blade. Long bow made of willow branches.
Personality: Kind toward animals and people. Fierce in battle. Caring for unfortunate. Protective of Loved ones and pets. Can be crazy when with friends.

Name:SilverWing
Race:Elven
Gender:female
Apparence:a goddess with long flowing silvery hair, she can transform into a dragon with silvery scales and pearly white wings. she is a magnificant spellcaster. Usally clothed in a a pure white gown/dress.
Personality:Caring and loving but when threatened will fight to the end

Name: Willow
Gender: Male
Race: Dragon
Rider: Caelsca
Scale color: Light green
Eye color: Dark Green
Appearance: Muscular, tall, stocky. Impressive scales.
Personality: Loving to people whom he knows. Fierce to Galbatorix's men.
Main weapons: Tail, fire
Food:Deer, urgals. Likes Fruits.

Please can I join? If i can this is my charater.

Name: Zeri
Gender: Male
Age:17
Race: Elf
Appearance:Looks like most elf in Eragon but has Fire red eyes
Traits: Is a great swordsman and archer, and is excellent with magic, also is good at making bow.
Personality: Is a kind person towards friends, but toward enemies I am ruthless

Name: Shargu
Age: unkown but young for an elf
Gender: Male
Race: Elf
Job: Wanderer anyone who crosses his path will die
Appearence: Shaggy black hair, dark red eyes, slender form, looks weak but his looks are deceiving, tight black shirt, loose green pants, brown jerkin.
Past: thrown out of ellesmera and hides his ears with magic he no longer has communication his his fellow elfs.
Hopes: he wants to get a dragon egg from galbatorix and become a rider so he will be welcomed backed to his forest home.
Equipment: Asamarai sword dark black with a dark red hilt flares dark blue when angry its name Shikal or dark rage bow made by the elf Queen herself also a small dagger
Persanility: keeps to himself
Skiled with sword and bow he knows many words in the ancient language and knows how to use them

name: Malgarath
Age: 28
Gender: male
Race; elven
Job: Warrior Mercenary, fights for money
Appearance; Red Eyes, very long teeth (like a vampires) dark brown skin, Chain mail Armour, Plate armour with a red and black fire emblazoned on it, black hair that goes till the shoulders, Muddy lokking gauntlets with the red Eye emblazned on it and Mail pants
Dragon; Black and red, named Kar'Zul
traits; Great swordsman, exellent bowman, can read and preform magic, related to Evandar king of elves.
equipment; sword called Galgorath flares red when someone is not to be trusted, bow of yew, sword catches on fire when fighting.

cool characters everyone!!

Now if they used them

oo

-Name: Kamrica
-Gender:female
-Race:human
-personality:can say one thing mean another; quick thinker; smart; keeps to herself mostly; observant;
-Backround:daughter of one of the forsworn thought to be broken but she acted that way, worked under cover to help rebel prisoners escape, she had free access to a hall of records where she read of magic but never used it as she might be found out. Escaped when she was found out and lived with a old swordsman she learned what she could then devoted two years to physical training(a type of martial arts) Now workes a ranger to give accurat layouts of the land and danger to the supply lines. Loves animals.
-Looks:quite nice, sharp face features, brown eyes an hair, tall(5.8ft),
-Gear:mottled brown cloak(for camoflage) brown and green trouses and loose shirt. bow an quiver, and long sword on back and throwing, straght daggers on hip, soft leather boots,
Good at:ok with the blade, good archer, exclent at blending in(learned that while with forsworn)

cool

-name: Emrelda
-gender: female
-race: dragon
-personality: quick-witted; not willing to give up easily; thinks her way out of most jams.
-background: one of some of the last wild dragons in the Empire, Emrelda's parents are unknown, but she is related to the dragon of Eragon, the first Rider. She learned to breathe fire at a young age to defend herself. She hatched in an unknown location hidden somewhere in the Boer Mountains.
-Looks: a VERY large wingspan, slightly larger than Saphira . Emerald-green with bright scales that shimmer like diamonds in the moonlight.
-food: Deer, urgals working for Galbatorix and elk.
-gear: Teeth, claws and fire!
-good at: drama-queening, breathing fire, solving puzzles and sneaking around unnoticed.

Name: Olfgar
Gender: Male
Age:46(which is young for a drawf.)
Race: Drawf
Appearance:Has a well kep beard, stands 4"7' has brown hair and light blue eyes,
Traits: Is a great at makeing weapons and gem cuting, and is a master with one handed axe's but can use any weapon. and very good for most drawfs with magic
Personality: Is very protective over his beard(like all drawfs) and is kind to friends but will cut your legs from under you and chop of your head in a minite if you apear to be a foe. And likes to drink mead





I have based some of my character off of D&D

name: svindie
age: 23
gendre: female
race:half elf half human
traits: fighting .some magic.
i am a trader in the eastern parts of alagaesia i have lived with my god mother for five years after i decided to leave my home town of ceris as my father (elf) left for ellesmera my mother died in an attak of urgals when i was 18 and so im travelling through all the citys towns and villages i can lay my eyes on. my ultimate dream is to meet and become friends with the elves i have a background with one that i shall no tell but its my dream to go to their city and make peace with them i know i have big ambitions but im strong when need to be.
i am a trained fighter as in my home town we were often attaked by urgals and creatures of the woods, so for me fighting was an every day thing.
i know of the ancient language and can use few words for magic but im not skilled in the art.
im reasonably tall for my age, but rather slim (but not too weak) as food has been on the down side recently. i have long jet black hair and deep green eyes. i have a large smile and will always be showing it as im a generally happy playful person.

OHHH im supposed 2 post here 2 join my bad heres me character

Name: Kurosaki, has no middle name
Age:127
Race: Ra’zac
Appearance: A long thin Scar on the left eye from a Rider’s sword, this attack was partially dodged and the wound actually enhanced the Ra’zac’ vision on his left eye, this is particularly useful for spotting dragons hi in the sky; A Black, torn Tunic for the torso, monk robes as leggings and big long boots.
History: In favor of the Empire because the Ra’zac’s kind was bribed territory and freedom by Gallbatorix and this Ra’zac has a thing against the riders ever since his unfortunate encounter with ones sword aimed at the eyes. Living in Haderac Desert he has learned that if you want to live in this world you have to fight, in particular Riders, he especially learned a lot fighting the Rider who cut his eye.
Gear: He is equipped with two rather wide daggers, their ends are blunt so they’re not meant for stabbing but for hacking.

Please dont post your profiles here, make a new topic for them for easy reference, any new profiles here will be deleted.

That is impossible...dragons would not hold an Urgal!!! Nor were they in the blood pact nor will they ever be

Dragons can hold an Urgal, maybe not a Kull, but an Urgal, yes.

metamorpher eh? lol dragon moon is the same way only it takes place in miami,flourida and like halfway threw the book jamaca its an ok book about a guy named peter delesangre and can transform into a dragon(his race calls themslefs people of the blood but humans gave them the name of dragons) in the first book his mate, elizabeth dies from a human and he longs for a new mate. His hopes are set on chlo elisabaths sister. He also has his 4 year old son to acompany him.


Just as a warning for people who want to read it. it does contain sexual actions and they swear alot
all way from damn to f-ing-a


(i sound like the ESRB rating dudes )

Dragons wont choose to hold an Urgal, this is last warning NO MORE BIOS HERE. Make seperate topics for your own characters, all new ones here will be deleted.

Excuse me, but you are a mod, and you are not double-posting, but TRIPLE posting!!! What ever happened to mods being the good example?!?!