please tell me what you think about it, this is prologue.

Prologue: The Mythic War

"People have always been hunted down, because of what was inside of them. Back before history was even recorded, people told stories of great and powerful beings roamed this land, but they could not risk being destroyed. They hid themselves inside of humans, staying dormant until their power was needed. But the beings limited their power, so their human vassal would be unharmed, for if their vassal was harmed so was the being. Once the humans realized that if the beings went n a rampage, they could prove to be a massive threat. The humans called these vassals Mythics. If these Mythics released the power of the being inside of them the being could go on a rampage, and destroy everything.
"The humans thought that if the Mythics and their beings were destroyed, then they could live in peace without fear of destruction. The humans raged war on the Mythics, and the beings. It was a long and bloody war, the humans had numbers, but the Mythics had the strength of the being inside of them. Many humans, and Mythics alike died in the war, the remaining Mythics fled, and hide from humans, protecting themselves, and their beings. Others have chosen to fight the humans, getting revenge for their fallen allies.
"When the Mythic passes away the being must find a new vassal, or it will die. Usually they find a child that has just been born, and stay dormant until needed. But if they can't find a child, they will find a human that can handle their strength.
"The Mythics are very powerful beings, and can call upon the being inside of them for even more strength. That is why Mythics have been killed, they are feared by the humans."

Kiet, no older than six years of age, was orphaned by his parents, and left to die by his village. An old man takes him in, and trains him to head his fighting gym when he passes away. However, he finds out that Kiet is a Mythic, as he tries to kill Kiet, the being inside of him, awakens. Now left with nowhere to go, young Kiet must find a way to hide from the humans, while learning how to control the being inside of him. If the humans find out the Mythics are returning then another war will begin, this time, however, it will be much bloodier than the first.

Sounds intresting. Its gd!